Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.37] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Tsubuhaza]

If this game ever gets finished and we get some modding tools, I'd be more than willing to take a hatchet to some of the content and fully rewrite it to be less insuferable (like the Kitsune).

Unshitifying the jewel release process is at the top of my wishlist.

While I can see where you're coming from and I do think he can create vivid imagery, I don't think that alone makes him a good writer. That scene is very nice but the issue is it's an oddity. There is a purpose in the descriptions and prose when in the vast majority of TOBS writing there just kind of isn't. Like what is the purpose of describing the lacquer of the wood on one of the priestess's fans? What is the point of writing an entire page describing a single tile of the fox den? And this isn't even mentioning how the flow of his scenes is fucking horrendous and he has george lucas-tier dialogue. Compound all that with the fact that none of his ideas are even very novel or interesting and I just really don't see it.

Anybody can learn how to describe things given enough effort. Not everybody can nail dialogue, characters, pacing, creativity, and everything else that comes with writing. Hence why I think he's just mid-tier at best.

I think the guy has potential still, accidental as it might be, but really needs an editor.

Either they don't put his stuff through one (understandable, imagine dealing with that fucking word flood) or the editor doesn't handle his work too well (probably because of the flood).

 

[MoneyMan181]

I think the guy has potential still, accidental as it might be, but really needs an editor.

Either they don't put his stuff through one (understandable, imagine dealing with that fucking word flood) or the editor doesn't handle his work too well (probably because of the flood).

Oh he has potential for sure. The fact that he can describe things better than anyone else on the team gives him a niche. If he actually worked on his pacing and dialogue he would have the potential to be the best writer for scenes. Maybe even just in general. Though to be honest, I think every writer for this game has potential. Wsan creates the best fluff and interactions with the PC and characters, but it's all very surface level and shallow. Savin is generally good, but feels very... meh. I don't get strong reactions when I read his stuff besides maybe Kassyra. I feel he could be the best writer for romance if he didn't rush the fuck out of things.

Each writer is good at their own thing, I just don't think they care about improving. Nothing's changed since the game started up(in fact it seems like things got worse) which is a shame. Genuinely could have something special if they gave a rat's ass about proper characterization and fleshing out storylines.

 

[Christ P Bacon]

Oh he has potential for sure. The fact that he can describe things better than anyone else on the team gives him a niche. If he actually worked on his pacing and dialogue he would have the potential to be the best writer for scenes. Maybe even just in general. Though to be honest, I think every writer for this game has potential. Wsan creates the best fluff and interactions with the PC and characters, but it's all very surface level and shallow. Savin is generally good, but feels very... meh. I don't get strong reactions when I read his stuff besides maybe Kassyra. I feel he could be the best writer for romance if he didn't rush the fuck out of things.

Each writer is good at their own thing, I just don't think they care about improving. Nothing's changed since the game started up(in fact it seems like things got worse) which is a shame. Genuinely could have something special if they gave a rat's ass about proper characterization and fleshing out the characters.

savin could be better if he's not too focused on describing anus in sex scene with dick (even vaginal). or too focused on dick in futa npc. the writer fetish is often time shows in their writing, especially savin.

 

[dolosolo]

There is a purpose in the descriptions and prose when in the vast majority of TOBS writing there just kind of isn't. Like what is the purpose of describing the lacquer of the wood on one of the priestess's fans? What is the point of writing an entire page describing a single tile of the fox den?

tobs is forever a loser to me because of the incel vibes i get from garret. from trying to find accordance with brint in the frosthound, to the strange way he sneaks privately escorts you up to his room at his parents place to fuck. like dude this isnt sexy at all. there isnt any awareness, its all projection and insecurity. like i couldnt fuck someone like this irl if i wanted to bc im just not dumb enough to pretend someone who thinks like this is "macho" or badass. irl he would cling to me which would at least make me feel desirable but here its just empty punishment for thinking this bitch wants not a punching bag. to me tobs writing is desperate to convince that hes cool and/or you the reader are lame as fuck if you disagree, idk i dont find him gripping enough to look closely, just glaring character flaws and insistent attention to ideas that lmk to skip

 

[Nimbus Commando]

Really hope we get some cool mods to make this game actually good when this trash heap is done.

 

[rip_bacon]

how do i use save editor? i don't have any file that shows my saves

 

[PixelLewd]

If this game ever gets finished and we get some modding tools, I'd be more than willing to take a hatchet to some of the content and fully rewrite it to be less insuferable (like the Kitsune).

Your sacrifice will be remembered and appreciated should the time come to pass

 

[Ilovekatz19]

how do i use save editor? i don't have any file that shows my saves

There's an option to save to file when you save/load your game. The button should be on the right side of your screen.

 

[procrastinator101]

Your sacrifice will be remembered and appreciated should the time come to pass

 

[TalRash4]

Really hope we get some cool mods to make this game actually good when this trash heap is done.

There is one, but it's more like cheat mod.

 

[Ellioto]

Hope we can take kas out for valentine. No new devil mommy for a while

 

[MeowAF]

Hope we can take kas out for valentine. No new devil mommy for a while

don't ask because new npc comes out until game files become big and massive af.

 

[Azriel Satan]

Extended Companion Limit python script for v0.7.36 (and however many future versions till it breaks).
This time with extra MOUSE.


This only enables her to be a companion; it doesn't add new content, only makes accessible what is present in Quests dialogue or in other NPC scenes.
For some locations to find content:

• Gytha Win and Loss Scenes
• Heavy Involvement in Harvest Valley Corrupt Alter and Gweyr Raid/Abyssal Depths Quest Lines (Special loss scenes to Whisper).
• Card Playing Minotaur Party Service instead of Etheryn (Cannot trigger with Etheryn Present).
• Small snippets around Korminos as was originally supposed to let you there early (Colosseum, Serena, BriHause).
• Barney Temple Survey
• Can be talked to during Winter City Ball.
• Some Snippets in the Kitsune Den.
• Atugia and Azzy have companion talks (like all of Azzy companion questions it changes on her state (normal, bimbo, dragon)

She will always be available to add to the party; I locked her stats to those with the most content (only dialogue variations).

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[namelessdudewithnoname]

RAT

 

[RandomIgloo]

Extended Companion Limit python script for v0.7.36 (and however many future versions till it breaks).
This time with extra MOUSE.

So if I’m understanding correctly she’s already coded into the game, and this mod allows us to play with her? Or is something else going on?

 

[ExcitedTengu]

Extended Companion Limit python script for v0.7.36 (and however many future versions till it breaks).
This time with extra MOUSE.

Some official mouse would fix this game.

 

[Azriel Satan]

So if I’m understanding correctly she’s already coded into the game, and this mod allows us to play with her? Or is something else going on?

Scenes in this and TITS are written with future content in mind to allow interactions with said future content. This just unlocks those variations of existing scenes by filling in the missing definitions to have her be spawnable as a companion.
To repeat, this does not add any special Einin scenes, just varients that account for her being there.
Einin's name comes up 400 times within the existing code.
It's possible there was more at some point, TOBS has talked about removing unused code and specifically Einin.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Extended Companion Limit python script for v0.7.36 (and however many future versions till it breaks).
This time with extra MOUSE.
View attachment 4549270

This only enables her to be a companion; it doesn't add new content, only makes accessible what is present in Quests dialogue or in other NPC scenes.
For some locations to find content:

• Gytha Win and Loss Scenes
• Heavy Involvement in Harvest Valley Corrupt Alter and Gweyr Raid/Abyssal Depths Quest Lines (Special loss scenes to Whisper).
• Card Playing Minotaur Party Service instead of Etheryn (Cannot trigger with Etheryn Present).
• Small snippets around Korminos as was originally supposed to let you there early (Colosseum, Serena, BriHause).
• Barney Temple Survey
• Can be talked to during Winter City Ball.
• Some Snippets in the Kitsune Den.
• Atugia and Azzy have companion talks (like all of Azzy companion questions it changes on her state (normal, bimbo, dragon)

She will always be available to add to the party; I locked her stats to those with the most content (only dialogue variations).

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[Tsubuhaza]

This time with extra MOUSE.
View attachment 4549270

She finally found her way out!

 

[neolancer]

where do i place the py file or activate it?