FurrBat

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Mmm, yeah, I'll have to agree with you on that. A shame because her artist was a /cocg/ regular and a pretty chill dude. But did she really need the Troll Doll hair?

A lot of the older busts by Cheshire are also sort of cursed/hilarious in their own way. Ogrish especially. My man got a hell of a glow up.
Cheshire Tollus bust is quite something, I dont know if its the eye position or the slight smile but my man looks high af in that version.

Another case is Sanders. I think the head to rest of body proportions are bothering me, like the head looks like it is x1.5 times bigger than it should.
 

ChubbyFatBoy

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I’ve never really cared if my girl (even irl) gets with another girl, even right in front of me. I know I’m not really a normal dude in this regard though. But The only reason I wouldn’t take that, is because it’s a red flag for a woman I’d want to have kids & spend the rest of my life with.

So me personally, I’d take Cait only having sex with my female companions over Cait having sex with any dick she can hop on any day of the week. To me it’s not even a conversation. Cait having sex with my dad, would be a huge turnoff, but it wouldn’t make me like her less, unless she shoved it in my face constantly (like Cait).

I honestly think Cait is the most devisive/hated h character I’ve ever seen in my life.
Yea girl on girl is less egregious. But I'd just like to opt out in general. I've maintained a simple outlook. You want NPCs to bump text uglies? Cool. What does that have to do with me? You want NPCs to hook up and form a relationship? Their fascination with it is weird, but cool. Again, what does that have to do with me? I don't expect to lay claim to everyone. I understand it's a porn game and folks swapping bodily fluids like an extreme game of hot potato. Just why do I have to participate? And it ain't even just this game. A lot of VNs and others. It's like folks have an assumption that everyone has a voyeuristic fetish.
 

Jbuster

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Yeah, I will say Helia is the best one of Savin's sluts, because you can at least pointedly tell her "Stop being a slut". While I can't say I'm too fond of the whole "reformed slut" archetype, it's handled alright for what it is.

Here's a real hot take here, but I actually think Anno is the worst of the three. For all people complain about Cait shoving herself in every scene, Anno does so even more plus she keeps trying to proposition to you randomly. Not to mention if you romance Syri, Syri suddenly gets the hots for her sister too. You bring in other crew members onboard your ship, you'll suddenly get a scene where Anno's pulling them to her room to bang. And again... SHE FUCKED OUR DAD! Fucking hell Savin, I don't want to be tunnel buddies with my old man!

I can only recall a few moments where Cait barges into a scene to slut it up, like your marriage with Atani. And even then, she's usually running off with randos and not your companions. Imagine if Cait just ran around the Wayfort, pulling Drifa, Elthara, and Zhara into her bedroom.



You know, touching up on Brint/Brienne. Doesn't he got a bunch of bastards running around? It would be interesting if one of them showed up and found their dad's now a chick. Sort of like Solveig. But hopefully with a less eye burning design.
A toggle off/on button would fix so many issues...

I don't mind Anno (Steele dad liked her too and I'm not picky, not at all), but it would help if I could shape more of her interactions and the same would do wonders to Cait. Right now she's a love interest, a best friend, a fuck buddy, sex relief and even a pokemon I can throw to random characters so she can fuck them, and because she's all of these things, she excels at none of them

She does some ntr stuff?, doesn't matter she's a slut and still likes you. There's no risk of Cait wanting to leave you or betray you, ever. She'll stay with you no matter what

She does some sweet girlfriend kind of thing?, well she's off to her whore temple now in a foursome with your friends and they expect for you to join in, she'll be sad if you don't

They somehow made a big tiddy curvy slut look bland, who does that?

I like Cait tho, just wish I could change her beyond bigger tits or leo form, like a certain other character...
 

DarkKingRen

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Lmao, if creating dialogue becomes as easy as we're trying to make it, they're gonna be really shocked at how many characters are gonna go dickless in such a short span of time.


Yeah, I'll compile an .exe version soon.


We're going to try to make it as easy as possible so only basic to no knowledge of javascript is necessary. We may need to find some way to compile a list of all event names in the game


Yeah you need to install python, any version should be fine, the latest versions most recommended.


Thanks, hope you enjoy
youre the best
 
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Yeppers34

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Dunno about straight up human( unless we're getting into some of the darker Pokedex entries) but I get your point yes. Also, at least Mr Mime doesn't have the stigma that Hypno gets( or some other pokemon do since that leak happened)
typhlosion and slakoth will never recover from that.
 

Alterism

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you can see her get picked up at bars randomly in TiTs.
I won't blame Savin for that one. That one scene where she just fucks some random dude while you watch was another writer. That scene is just the champ slinking about like a wimp so he can watch them have sex.

Half of the reason I actually like Anno is you're invited in the sexual escapades. She's just a fuckbuddy. Savin doesn't even attempt to do the thing he tried with Helia and Cait and try to make the romance anything more than what it is. That was reserved for whoever wrote Erra... And Syri.

He pulled the same shit in TiTs with the Frostwyrm, adding a second "male" one and kept trying to act like it wasn't cheating because it's a "Threesome".
The only credit is that no part of those scenes feel like the usual "threesome". Admittedly the pureblood frostwyrm pregnancy creates a problem that it then solves specifically to make it less than what it is. Look, I still can't help but narrow my eyes when I reminisce on the frostwyrm expansion.

Hmm. Bleh.
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Phew.... Anyways.
He's got the best work ethic of the entire team bar none. I've never seen him go, "Sorry guys, caught the ligma for the 50th time this week, no updates this month" like Fen. Or just go radio silent like Bubs or Will (God bless Will, I loved his work, my favorite writer hands down, but you gotta admit Will was weak on this aspect, he even said as much himself.)
I've mirrored this in any amount of ways over the years. But while I was preparing to glaze Tobs an intrusive thought wiggled it's way into my head. If you're working on a porn game as a writer and the worst part of your writing is the sex scenes, what's the point of writing for a porn game?
 

K1ng_C00mer

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Going back to the topic of characters scrapped/memory holed. I remembered a few more designs/characters that I forgot in my previous post:

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This is Gardeford's Kitsune, the woman in charge of the bathhouse. Dunno if she's still in the works or not, but she does make a cameo in one of Hotaru's scenes if I'm not mistaken? She gets mentioned in it at least.

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This one I'm unsure of who was meant to write her. I imagine if I bothered to skim through the discord, I'd find out, but I don't particularly care to do that. Obviously she was meant to be a blacksmith. Would've been nice to be able to get some unique weapons and armor from her.

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Finally, there's Liuflr. Birb's big c-boy project that was suppose to lead to you being able to completely feminize him, or give him his penis back. What's crazy is he's been in the game for the longest time and still hasn't gotten a proper bust in. What the hell's that about? None of the other NPCs are like this...
 

nobitand9

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1740716467680.png Is this a bug? The Elf event keep repeating & when I choose to recruit more Merielle keep appearing. Can't find any way to dismiss her either.
 

Yeppers34

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Going back to the topic of characters scrapped/memory holed. I remembered a few more designs/characters that I forgot in my previous post:

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This is Gardeford's Kitsune, the woman in charge of the bathhouse. Dunno if she's still in the works or not, but she does make a cameo in one of Hotaru's scenes if I'm not mistaken? She gets mentioned in it at least.

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This one I'm unsure of who was meant to write her. I imagine if I bothered to skim through the discord, I'd find out, but I don't particularly care to do that. Obviously she was meant to be a blacksmith. Would've been nice to be able to get some unique weapons and armor from her.

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Finally, there's Liuflr. Birb's big c-boy project that was suppose to lead to you being able to completely feminize him, or give him his penis back. What's crazy is he's been in the game for the longest time and still hasn't gotten a proper bust in. What the hell's that about? None of the other NPCs are like this...
Oh geez more wasted characters, just add them to the pile.
 

K1ng_C00mer

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Ah, my apologies. I've don't follow TiTs as close as I do CoC II, and now with Will's departure and the fact Bianca, the Jumpers, Sophora, and everything he was working on is all but scrapped- I have even less of a reason to follow that game's development. Nastizia is the only character that's getting updated I really sort of care about anymore.

You've totally summed up my feelings on the Frostwrym situation to a T.

And to your final point about Tobs. Yes, I agree. I'll still praise him for his work ethic but the actual product he makes is bad. It's become clear to me in the past seven years of this game's development he's not going to change his writing habits.

I'm not saying it's easy in the slightest at all when I criticize the writers here. I want to make it perfectly clear, I know from experience how hard it is to write sex, I used to write smut myself.

You sort of need to be in a headspace to really do it. It's very hard to write scenes that don't feel dry or clinical like you're writing a medical textbook. It's hard to come up with words to describe things without just repeating "penis", "cock", and "dick" fifty times in a row. It's how you get shit like "baby bag" and "kit carrier" because you inevitably struggle to not have three long pages of thousands words of smut feel clinical. Less is more when it comes to smut. Yeah, it might seem cool that a sex scene is over ten thousand words long, until you actually read it.

Sex is inherently something that focuses on our senses; sight, smell, touch, taste, sound. All of those are hard to put to words. Tobs tries solving this by using metaphor and tangents to describe things, but that's just not how you go about writing sex. You leave the reader confused and pulled out of the scene. The exact opposite of what you want.

Tantalizing smut is suppose to paint a vivid image, something for your mind to play out like a movie and arouse you as you read. It should be easy to read, the words flowing together and taking the reader along for the ride. It should focus on feelings, what do the participants feel? How are their bodies reacting? Show us the actions, the shifting positions, the expressions on the participants' faces. Describe the scene using your senses. Metaphor has it's place, but not when it's spent padding out a paragraph for no point other than the be poetic. It should be simple and to the point, then back to the feelings. Feelings are the focal point.
 
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ChubbyFatBoy

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Wait, wait, wait, hold on a minute now! I see some folks mention a Frostwyrm.

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You get to monster mash a dragon? Or is it just basic monster girl? .....aaaaaand nope. ! See now that's the type of weird shit I'm into. Aaand of course it has a dick. Welp can't always bat a 1000 I suppose.


And before anyone asks, no. I don't look at this and say yea that's hot.
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I look at that and say. I really shouldn't.... but fuck it I'm doing it anyway! The best romance is the shit you're not supposed to do. Good sex is having to pause and question whether sticking your dick in there, is the right choice. Embrace the weird and aim for wholesome.
 
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