Well. The tobs bits are indeed Tobs bits. Let's start wherever.
Like last time there needed to be a bit of an editing pass and-
Hmm...
Yeah maybe just once more I think.
It goes without saying. But that's bold bleed.
Should be self explanatory.
Same here
There's also the usual smaller mistakes that don't really matter. For example: "a pregnant pause," is used 4(?) times now in her content altogether. Or...
minor spacing error that doesn't matter.
Didn't see nearly the same amount of issues and/or mistakes on the pure path so that's fine. Probably.
Hmm...
Outside of the jumpscare
much like the wolves, a lot of scenes (obviously not counting the ones penned by Tobs) I can read his mannerisms out of. Probably an editing thing.
Hell would sooner freeze over.