Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.16] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[YouShallNotLol]

Just read the kalysea expansion and i think everyone should shut the fuck up when we got a good thing going next time. I dont dislike it. The way champ was written as though they were being swept away/along by HER will is pretty much gone. its much more "...if thats alright with you.. dear champion". Like champ is NOT enthralled by musky balls n cock giving her free reign to do whatever, Its cleary for you whiners who didnt like the first something hundred pages like why tf are you being loud when THE FUCKING CHARACTERS NOT FOR YOUYY bitch ass. i was like oh im in the wrong store when i read kaly proclaim her intentions so upfront i though to myself damn i frfr fucking hate yall bc SHES NEVER DONE THAAAT, let her be a dog and dog me out the fuck. Let her dunk on lower intelligence lifeforms or whatever. let her be a shark. you bitches complain and argue about moral greys and then objectify women like make it make sense. and then have all these rules like ur pussy my guy yall are pussy. And to nidabutt idk what love language you want the charater to exhibit w this new expansion but "i dont have sex with just anyone" is imo all it needs to be, she shows affection by piping u tf down and removes barriers and pretenses preventing her from doing such. The champs consent is not a factor after she has the ring. If it was meant to be something else from the jump alright, i was just thinking ab it bc of the flower crown scene.

All I have to say is: rest in piss, bozo.

On a more serious note: this whole ass game is built on the principle of devs writing whatever They want, and openly mocking players for voicing any kind of displeasure.
Bitch please, do you really think WSAN suddenly decided to change how he writes Kalysea just because a couple nobodies in this thread complained about her? Are you really so hopelessly stupid!?
Don't answer, it was a rhetorical question.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

After writing Nyzezuri I come to realize we need more words for mens chest other than "pecs" and "chest".

"Breast" (left or right) mechanically should work.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

After writing Nyzezuri I come to realize we need more words for mens chest other than "pecs" and "chest".

Man bosom?

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Moobs

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Moobs

Manboobs

 

[Teshay]

I wrote tfs for: being a crow monfolk (for male pcs who want to be birds! This one is actually approved and waiting to be coded), a hellhound tf, a wyvern tf, and some adjustments to the demon tf that make it so you can be a hooved, more draenei-like demon. I've been requested recently to make one for kobolds, so I'll be writing one for that soon as well! A dear friend of mine has tfs for mecians and squirrels in the que as well! I don't see why I can't add a chubby capybara tf to my list, but I can't promise anything!

The cult angle has been reworked, yes! Hopefully now his backstory and how he came to join the cult will garner him much more sympathy as someone who was trying to help out a close friend of his from falling into a bad crowd and getting pulled into himself, and is just trying to do better. I'm also hoping that I can make him more of a bro/wingman character for those that aren't into his sex/group content, since I've been reading that Brint's fulfilment of that roll is falling flat with this section of game audience.

As for ToBs, the most I can say is that he approved and passed a submission that was so subpar it basically had to almost be rewritten properly (which is crazy, because he is known as the harshest reviewer. I can only assume it's because it was from an avid kitsune fan and for a kitsune that had been in limbo). Ever since, he's basically disappeared from Discord and has even dropped down to part time. He used to do a lot of the review work, so having his review privileges revoked has slowed down the community review process tremendously.

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Seriously though, You honestly can't see Brint as a bro because he treats you like his soon-to-be dick holster. Regardless of sexual orientation being hit on by someone you're not into and you have no normal way of making him stop is a problem.

Wait, wait, wait -- a muscular guy that can be a sub? In this economy? Well, well, well, I am glad. And look, as a bonus, all those that wish for dickgirl subs can get. Maybe that will quench their need to complain about how every dickgirl is a dom. It won't, but one can dream of fluffy sheep.

Also, yep, people beg untill it is time to put money where there mouth is. I noticed that people do not really commision people in fenoxo community as much as they used to. As one writer to another, you really need to play into peoples wants. That is how I get commissioned from time to time.

Me when I'm dying and thirsty, and the guys who did this to me give me a droplet of water (I should be grateful)


On another note, I'm happy for the Berwyn rework because he has a sub and dom mechanic. If he had that in the first place, instead of him just having one subby option, and the rest just focus on him and his dick. Like, I can't cuddle him without jerking him off? There's no reciprocity. Maybe I just didn't get him, I didn't hate the original either, I just didn't give a damn about him.

My goal for him is not really to be a bro, but rather a good friend for those who aren't interested in him romantically/sexually. I also use a lot of the personality parsers, so rest assured that dark knights can still bully him a bit! That being said, I'm fully aware that he's just not going to appeal to everyone, and that's okay. I can make the tastiest sandwich in the world and it won't mean a thing if you aren't into sandwiches, you know?

Regarding Takahiro, I started working on a quest to sober him but was asked not to continue. He will most likely be removed from the game entirely upon full release.

The damage is done...But atleast he won't hurt any new people who join.

I am not a Berwyn fan, his proclivities and interactions were not for me (just sucking himself off in his room most of the time. Jealous... yes. Interested? No). I didn't mind the genderbend, I am more into ladies anyhow and filling her with puppies. I think how it worked out was probably the best thing to do, in the timeframe given. Sometimes you just have to cauterize things. Plus it did allow for the introduction and appearance of the Astrida, so that does help move things along.

Yeah alot of people liked him, but the original Berwyn was a boring loser who only had one sub option, while most of his stuff was purely focused around his dick. No reciprocity, no real relationship, just comforting someone who is using you for comfort. Where was his shit going to go if not to something edgy or destructive? He'd need a total personality swap or for Hugs to actually give him more character than pouty mage baby. I wanted a trap wife companion whom I could love and pamper.

I want to get mad, but that's what the show is now. It grosses me out so much as soon as the original owner dies, these ideal-obsessed shippers take it over and turn it into a shit show.
And that's the shit I don't like. When something that is originally created by the owner is then taken over by another. And then the whole identity/character of what that thing is, is just gone.
Like, I live in perpetual fear of that happening to Berserk. As much of the author knew Muira, dude wrote peak once in (Holyland) and then nothing else worth mentioning.

Yeah, shipper suck and so do the people who pamper to them. It's clear they are doing it for the money and less about the story or characters.

 

[Teshay]

From several years ago when Hugs was still around: View attachment 5220327

From the last time it was talked about in the discord.
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By the time he left the project, Hugs showed up maybe once every month or two to mess with DCL and be rudely homophobic, to the point where some of the other devs were at the point where they were threatening to leave because of his behavior. He didn't really care about the game itself anymore. View attachment 5220329
Not by any means trying to strong-arm away from their own conclusions! This is what I've been told through my interactions with the devs and the community members that were there for it, since I joined the community a little bit after this all happened.


Regarding Quin's rewrites, Bubbles original plan for him was to be a spy undercover in the Cult who had access to ancient magic (the statute magic) that was also secretly a noble. The statue's original purpose was to act as a temporary Wayfort Dungeon to later rehabilitate cultists.

I felt like all of this was a bit much for a companion NPC, you know? He's essentially trying to be bunny James Bond. I don't want him to outshine the PC, I want him to have a story that the PC - should THEY decide to - can dig into and have a say in, should they decide to. The statue thing was specifically requested to be removed (which it was. I write for free and on my own time and I logically can't commit to writing a bunch of extra characters, even though it would've been super cool to have that rehabilitation stuff in Quin's story). That being said, I can understand the skepticism regarding his content going forward. I can only hope that, if interested, you'll give it a try and provide me with some honest feedback and criticism that I can use to grow as a writer.

The fact that you respect player agency shows you are leagues above most of the people you are working for. Also, even though this makes me a petty asshole, this supports my argument that the original Berwyn was dogwater. People clung to him because he fulfilled an archetype, but Hugs never added anything more to his character.

Regarding the mercs, I am planning to wrap up their content, as long as I can actually get around to it between my other projects. Their original plan was to have Leofric be the next mini boss for encounters, and then end it with a small dungeon, but that wouldn't be the way I go. I am unsure if I will be allowed to write them now or if they're slated to be axed. I'll have to double check with staff before going into it more.

It would involve curing Lusamine with a talisman blessed by Lumia and helping Boomer become Salwah's understudy. Once they left the Merks, then most of them would follow, which would have the PC then going out and hunting down Leofric for a final showdown, (with the side option of temporarily recruiting Jen to help or corrupting and turning her into a demon to have her show up during the confrontation and drag him away never to be seen from again).

I was going to be livid because corrupting Jen and not getting her as one your slaves (like in the old game) sucks but it also makes sense because that's putting more on your workload. Probably better to not to corrupt her then sense it will probably hurt him more if the Real Jen opposes him.

I think you’ve got me mixed up with someone else. I didn’t have anything to do with Azami, and still don’t. The only fox writing I’ve done was Komari’s sex content — which, honestly, I confess I probably could have done better — and some Kiyoko scenes, plus some in-progress Kohaku stuff.

To try and answer your question, I really don’t know anything about what the game plan is for Takahiro/Azami’s whole mess; I’m just here to write women whose lives are hot messes, including a Katya overhaul in the near-ish future.

LET ME DOMINANT THE FOX HAG YOU COWARD

I'VE GOT GRIT, WILL, AND MORE THAN ENOUGH STRENGTH (CUM) TO OVERWHELM KOMARI. I'VE ONLY LOST TO FOX GODDESS PUSSY AND SHE WAS PREYING ON MY INSECURITIES.

I DEMAND MY REMATCH!!! ( I've been wanting to sex her, but my ooga booga brain was sad that it was just her dominating us.)

Who was that again?

Masochistic brat catgirl in the mino inn you can sleep at/or fuck the catgirl host to get in free sleep without paying). She was alright, If you are into her stuff you might like her. But I just fuck and go with a bunch of these new npcs unless they have an interesting dynamic or story...or just great ass sex scenes.

You give him some consequences for being an asshole and then make him change his ways. It sucks that you just stand there while he tells you to your face that he wants to fuck and impregnate your wife. Him saying anything else instead would be better.


Yeah I know. I was just saying that I'd rather get a genderbent Quin since it was a possibility. The Berwynne situation is mainly people are mad that he was removed as a companion. Not that he got genderbent. I'm guessing this means no trap Quin or dickgirl Quin?

Mutiple wives at that, like how the fuck would like that stand. I would even punch a bro for that, but then again, a real bro would have the common sense to never say shit like that. Current quinn feels like a legit punishment for taking him in.

That would help a lot, would make him less infuriating

Also, it kind of annoys me that from almost all other companions, he barely does anything of consequence despite being the person with more knowledge about the cult and the guy with a clear motive to stick around and help. Already more than half of the companions don't share a common goal with the champion and this dude who does just sucks at helping, he's written in such a whiny way...

Really reminds me how so many companions are wasted slots that the devs didn't even bother giving a good reason for joining you. Quiin is just irritating because he reminds me of how out of touch his creator is. All this out-of-touch, "alpha" bullshit when both of your characters are whiny nobodies who couldn't do shit on their own.

 

[Teshay]

"Just read the kalysea expansion and i think everyone should shut the fuck up when we got a good thing going next time. I dont dislike it. The way champ was written as though they were being swept away/along by HER will is pretty much gone. its much more "...if thats alright with you.. dear champion". Like champ is NOT enthralled by musky balls n cock giving her free reign to do whatever, Its cleary for you whiners who didnt like the first something hundred pages like why tf are you being loud when THE FUCKING CHARACTERS NOT FOR YOUYY bitch ass. i was like oh im in the wrong store when i read kaly proclaim her intentions so upfront i though to myself damn i frfr fucking hate yall bc SHES NEVER DONE THAAAT, let her be a dog and dog me out the fuck. Let her dunk on lower intelligence lifeforms or whatever. let her be a shark. you bitches complain and argue about moral greys and then objectify women like make it make sense. and then have all these rules like ur pussy my guy yall are pussy. And to nidabutt idk what love language you want the charater to exhibit w this new expansion but "i dont have sex with just anyone" is imo all it needs to be, she shows affection by piping u tf down and removes barriers and pretenses preventing her from doing such. The champs consent is not a factor after she has the ring. If it was meant to be something else from the jump alright, i was just thinking ab it bc of the flower crown scene."


Bro halfway through I feel myself have a brain aneurysm reading your shit. Are you a fucking alien? Did I get probed?! I know I can respond because you pussy outted, but holy fuck. Are you okay? I crashed out on brint for the comedy, you legit have a problem. Too much centaur horse-cock break loose a couple of braincells? You the new fen with that prolaspe asshole and "aah unnnh ugggh b-b-being a cuck-". If you want to be treated like trash and dogged out, you came to the right place...so why delete your shit? She's not showing you affection jabroni, It's always been about her. You're just a cocksleeve, stop talking.



I can feel that wuju sorcery you conjured drain my damn brain-cells trying to make sense of that travesty you think is English text.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Brint mentioned

The only way to save us from Brint is to use magic to make him speedrun macrodosing on estrogen.

I was going to be livid because corrupting Jen and not getting her as one your slaves (like in the old game) sucks but it also makes sense because that's putting more on your workload. Probably better to not to corrupt her then sense it will probably hurt him more if the Real Jen opposes him.

Idk I like the idea of more corruption content and doing so that takes her character to an extreme version of her personality and being the opposite of bubble's plan adds a sexy layer of irony I support.

LET ME DOMINANT THE FOX HAG YOU COWARD

If you don't love her at her hagdom then you don't deserve her at her hagsub you coward. Normalize shibari perpetrated by sexually repressed magic hags.

Really reminds me how so many companions are wasted slots that the devs didn't even bother giving a good reason for joining you. Quiin is just irritating because he reminds me of how out of touch his creator is. All this out-of-touch, "alpha" bullshit when both of your characters are whiny nobodies who couldn't do shit on their own.

Bubs listened to one shitty dudebro podcast and made the mistake of assuming people actually like those guys and couldn't understand why literally no one liked his male characters.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Too much centaur horse-cock break loose a couple of braincells?

God I wish that was me but with Orlaith.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

dolosolo "you bitches complain and argue about moral greys and then objectify women like make it make sense. and then have all these rules like ur pussy my guy yall are pussy."
This fucking guy

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Get em Lol!

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Manboobs

Fmoobs

 

[Jbuster]

Really reminds me how so many companions are wasted slots that the devs didn't even bother giving a good reason for joining you. Quiin is just irritating because he reminds me of how out of touch his creator is. All this out-of-touch, "alpha" bullshit when both of your characters are whiny nobodies who couldn't do shit on their own.

At his core, Quin is a failed Brint, because while the mind behind the bull bastard decided that Brint should be the true sex god on earth and thus, make every pussy (be regular pussy, boipussy, calamariussy, cloabussy, etc) moist and needy, Quin would have the exact opposite effect, alpha just in paper, never in action

Brint goes upstairs and fucks Atugia, goes down and fucks the cat harem, goes for smokes and fucks every peasant wife in his way, pretty sure he would fuck Evelyn too and turn her megadong into a floppy noodle, any day now he's gonna smirk at Kiyoko and give her triplets while Quin begs you for money so his rent-a-girlfriend gives him five more seconds of hand on hand action

You've seen that guy from the acolyte?, awful show, but that particular dude did great as the dangerous and sexy evil guy who looks like some kind of Adam Driver and could look great despite his fucking stupid power ranger helmet. Is charisma, Quin got nothing

Bubs listened to one shitty dudebro podcast and made the mistake of assuming people actually like those guys and couldn't understand why literally no one liked his male characters.

Quin was magical Andrew Tate, now you know what he was doing with those cultists girls

dolosolo "you bitches complain and argue about moral greys and then objectify women like make it make sense. and then have all these rules like ur pussy my guy yall are pussy."
This fucking guy

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Get em Lol!

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[K1ng_C00mer]

It's weird to me that we're being blamed for Kaly's lackluster expansion when Nida literally was on here saying Wsan downsized it a lot from the expac and cut out stuff from it. But yeah, lol, we're the ones who ruined Kalysea. Also am I the only one who notices that people who type in that zoomer brainrot speak all seem to be complete drooling troglodytes? "fr fr no cap yall a bunch of whiners n pussies" like shut the fuck up little bro and pick up a book. Helps your argument if you stopped sounding like a crackhead tweaking under a bridge.

Eh. Not that I’d want to, anyways. I was given stipulations for what I would and wouldn’t be allowed to write, and a hypersadist was the best way to meet those

Also, shout out to Aury for having the balls to say the Komari seggs could've been done better. You mentioned having certain conditions on what you could write for the expac, could you elaborate on what those were? I don't fault you at all for going the direction you went with, honestly, props for trying something a bit different. For what it's worth, it's not really bad or offensive, not really my idea for Komari, but that's more of a headcanon meets canon sort of thing.

Regarding the mercs, I am planning to wrap up their content, as long as I can actually get around to it between my other projects. Their original plan was to have Leofric be the next mini boss for encounters, and then end it with a small dungeon, but that wouldn't be the way I go. I am unsure if I will be allowed to write them now or if they're slated to be axed. I'll have to double check with staff before going into it more.

It would involve curing Lusamine with a talisman blessed by Lumia and helping Boomer become Salwah's understudy. Once they left the Merks, then most of them would follow, which would have the PC then going out and hunting down Leofric for a final showdown, (with the side option of temporarily recruiting Jen to help or corrupting and turning her into a demon to have her show up during the confrontation and drag him away never to be seen from again).

I hope the mercs aren't axed. Really, it's just downright wasteful to scrap all these characters into the woodchipper- I'd much prefer they just stay half finished if that was the case. But I mean, Leofric is Tira's champ so it's an interesting avenue to explore, having the strongest Champ in history vs. the strongest Champ of today.

Would it be too much to have us be able to go all out and fight him one on one? I dunno the lorebook on him other than the snippets we got but he did basically abandon Jen and his mercs to go run around punching people. Maybe have the power go to his head and he becomes a beserker that has to be stopped. Then we got a whole sidequest with Jen and the others that leads to them realizing that he's sort of a dick. Totally not saying this because I want us to be able to "steal" Jen away from Leofric. Nope. Not at all... and having a scene with goth mommy Tira would be nice as well....

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

At his core, Quin is a failed Brint, because while the mind behind the bull bastard decided that Brint should be the true sex god on earth and thus, make every pussy (be regular pussy, boipussy, calamariussy, cloabussy, etc) moist and needy, Quin would have the exact opposite effect, alpha just in paper, never in action

Brint goes upstairs and fucks Atugia, goes down and fucks the cat harem, goes for smokes and fucks every peasant wife in his way, pretty sure he would fuck Evelyn too and turn her megadong into a floppy noodle, any day now he's gonna smirk at Kiyoko and give her triplets while Quin begs you for money so his rent-a-girlfriend gives him five more seconds of hand on hand action

You've seen that guy from the acolyte?, awful show, but that particular dude did great as the dangerous and sexy evil guy who looks like some kind of Adam Driver and could look great despite his fucking stupid power ranger helmet. Is charisma, Quin got nothing

Wow now, let's not give em ideas bro. We ain't getting paid. Worse I do not want to see a slice of Brints life.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

I can't believe we were able to collectively came together and ruin a character. I feel powerful. Damn RIP get well soon Kaly.

I've always hated the mercs and the weird story and gameplay segregation where they act like the shit-tier mobs they were hired to deal with but for some reason they're allowed in town and no one calls them out on their BS. Credit to Bluebird for at least wanting to complete them but I'd rather they just scrap Leofric and the merc concept and take Lusamine, Jen, and Boomer and make them their own thing. Though some ending is better than nothing at least and I'm not gonna fault someone for wanting to try. Bluebird's concept for their ending is better than the original imo. Though if implemented I hope demon Jen doesn't disappear.

At his core, Quin is a failed Brint

That's even meaner when you consider Brint's only value is to be a vessel for a better character.

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That shit is tame compared to what I've seen just here.

Also am I the only one who notices that people who type in that zoomer brainrot speak all seem to be complete drooling troglodytes? "fr fr no cap yall a bunch of whiners n pussies" like shut the fuck up little bro and pick up a book.

On god straight bussin no cap fr fr so skibidi tism rizz.

I'm sorry the intrusive thoughts won.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

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I see you have dabbling in....the Dark Arts.

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

I hope the mercs aren't axed. Really, it's just downright wasteful to scrap all these characters into the woodchipper- I'd much prefer they just stay half finished if that was the case. But I mean, Leofric is Tira's champ so it's an interesting avenue to explore, having the strongest Champ in history vs. the strongest Champ of today.

Would it be too much to have us be able to go all out and fight him one on one? I dunno the lorebook on him other than the snippets we got but he did basically abandon Jen and his mercs to go run around punching people. Maybe have the power go to his head and he becomes a beserker that has to be stopped. Then we got a whole sidequest with Jen and the others that leads to them realizing that he's sort of a dick. Totally not saying this because I want us to be able to "steal" Jen away from Leofric. Nope. Not at all... and having a scene with goth mommy Tira would be nice as well....

Leofric tried (and probably did to those not expecting it) to sneak attack and punk us. So he has to get his ass beat off principal. Him and the rest of the goof troop should absolutely not be axed. Until we get to put foot, boot, paw, hoof, or whatever your preferred method of locomotion, to ass. Then rub Jen's nose in it so she can see that her favorite person and idol in the world.

Is. A. Punk. Ass.


And then we proceed to bang on top of and/or near his unconscious body. Making passionate sexy time. Until he wakes up, then we turn to look at him dead into the windows of his soul. And either continue or start over again. End scene.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I hope the mercs aren't axed. Really, it's just downright wasteful to scrap all these characters into the woodchipper- I'd much prefer they just stay half finished if that was the case. But I mean, Leofric is Tira's champ so it's an interesting avenue to explore, having the strongest Champ in history vs. the strongest Champ of today.

Wait...say that again

 

[YouShallNotLol]

And having a scene with goth mommy Tira would be nice as well....

Well, if we assume Armitia was Tira's disguise, then we already have a sex scene with her during "a feast for heroes" event.