Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.17] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[GS21]

Are they shit talking on the discord again?

Yep. circlejerk in full effect.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Don't you know, playing video games makes you a crazy murderer. Must be the same with watching porn.

Media does have an effect on ppl, its the reason why art, movies, shows, and music have been used in propaganda. I know we tend to take the piss the a lot of things but it does influence you.
Shiiit, if past me saw the things current me was into he'd be mortified.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Apparently our collective evil gooner license has been renewed because Luma read that one guy's post where he said he didn't like the Clementine content and apparently we all automatically think that way now because we're a hater hivemind that hates everything about this game and everyone associated with it.
If you're reading this, maybe try to start a conversation next time instead of taking it to the circlejerk echo chamber. Some people here are more than willing to talk things out. It's shocking, but not all of us share the same opinions on everything. Savco discord's input on the other hand is arguably worse since you're not gonna get anything constructive out of them -- it will all be shallow praise and pats on the back.
I haven't gone through the content myself, and honestly I'm just happy she's getting content at all.

We're a hivemind? Quick hit yourself in the nuts, I'll tell u if I feel it
The fact tht we live rent free in their heads is telling. Maybe I could move in rent is pretty pricey where I'm from.

 

[Jbuster]

That's honestly a great take, its like a peak into the minds of the Fandom....Makes a lot of sense why things are so cringe.


Yes, but there's more to my "tastes," shit I even go to a brothel I like from time to time to experiment.

There was this place called El Caballo Viejo where this old lady (whore), would sing you Palmenia Pizarro songs while sitting on your lap and I was there like, "damn, being poor sucks", as I was sipping warm beer, but I never got my answer, just a powerful boner that let me both confused and proud since then

And yeah this is like, the safest way to peek into the mind of someone else without the risk of losing yourself, to be honest, I understand the appeal of a lot of fetishes despite how weird they may be and being a vanilla guy myself

Well I mean... every time you nut. That's like 20-150mil sperms getting wiped out . I mean sure it's not a kid. But a quick tug and we out here erasing potential generations! And god forbid you been saving that baby batter up to erupt later. Country scaling extinction events!

....oh god.... we're monsters.
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I legit wonder what my body count is though. How many generations have I condemned because the ass was fat.

"Letting cummies die on the floor is a sin, Mallach will curse you with a flaccid dick and a dry pussy should you waste them, hooooommmm ameeeen", chanted Cait as her god came into reality in the form of a giant, tentacled, pulsing sperm cell, thus condemning the world to a cummy end

I'm sure all those potential scientifics, doctors, engineers and not voice actors would understand that indeed, the ass was fat and the tits plentiful, they would say, "don't worry, we understand, bitch was thicc"

They did lie. It doesn't stop at sissification. At first it's a RAGS game here, the first CoC there, and next thing you know you're chugging estrogen and getting electrolysis. It happened to me, it can happen to you too.


That's artistic not porn.


Maybe it's an unrealized fetish but most of Adjatha's art does it for me even if I prefer Moira's stuff.


Is that referring to druid lady who demands unique items to save the land but ultimately does fuck all or Orlaith the deer-taur babe? Cause Orlaith is cool and I think was implemented before the oversaturation of Gold Ship's genetics.

I may have played magical camp far too many times, for me, "you're cute enough", is an ultimate truth, words to live by

Honestly as goofy as it looks sometimes I can't deny it has a certain gooner charm to it. I don't hate it but some of it can be questionable a lot of the time, so it's not like I don't see where other people are coming from.

Both, and I guess you can stick futa Alante in there with them now.
Could not care less for Orlaith's content but Kalysea's I actively dislike. Marrying her horsecock is absolutely looney, same goes for her little "plan" and how you gotta sacrifice unique items just so you can choke on more of her cum. Crazy.

I know the atomic aberration might look weird, but also, I believe that it might be soft and with an interesting texture, something I could sink in and fully embrace, in the way Bisquit Oliva embraces Maria

Can't remember if the user who commissioned Kalysea talked about what the ring was about, because while being a long bad ending in the making is a possibility, it would also be the dumbest one of them all. I mean that thing better do something magical and cool at some point, at lest her cum should be anti-demon cream so I can mount her into a gun crossbow and shoot her spunk against my enemies, like the cats from Portal 2

 

[OreoLuma]

If you're reading this, maybe try to start a conversation next time instead of taking it to the circlejerk echo chamber. Some people here are more than willing to talk things out. It's shocking, but not all of us share the same opinions on everything. Savco discord's input on the other hand is arguably worse since you're not gonna get anything constructive out of them -- it will all be shallow praise and pats on the back.
I haven't gone through the content myself, and honestly I'm just happy she's getting content at all.

I let the negativity get to me. After thinking it over and collecting my thoughts I'm proud of the content I made for her and simply want some feedback on my work.

I'm here and read the comments, give me your thoughts and opinions. Not everyone is going to like the content I make and that's fine.

Here are my plans for Clementine's marriage expansion too.

Spoiler: Clementine marriage plans

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[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Media does have an effect on ppl, its the reason why art, movies, shows, and music have been used in propaganda. I know we tend to take the piss the a lot of things but it does influence you.

I wish I could find it, but it's so long ago, but I remember a study was done showing that while media doesn't make people violent or anything, it can exasperate already present personality traits or mental conditions and cause desensitization to certain subjects. Of course that would vary per person but you right.

I may have played magical camp far too many times, for me, "you're cute enough", is an ultimate truth, words to live by

Damn I wish that game wasn't abandoned, even if the obvious twist would've made some bad ends 100 times worse. It was really fun and tried something new instead of a traditional leveling system. Pain is cuteness entering the body. Or whatever that one early game quote was.

it would also be the dumbest one of them all. I mean that thing better do something magical and cool at some point, at lest her cum should be anti-demon cream so I can mount her into a gun crossbow and shoot her spunk against my enemies, like the cats from Portal 2

Erectile Function.

 

[OreoLuma]

I thought you're respectable for picking her up to begin with, so I've been rooting for you since day one. Only thing I'd like is if you wrote Sanders marrying Clem to the Champ. Dude needs some face time that isn't giving out quests.

And a scene of the Champ and Clem cloud watching, with Clem getting increasingly competitive against the fluffy clouds, because her wool is better than any cloud.

The wedding ceremony has already been written, and yes Sanders is the priest that weds PC and Clementine.

Also noted about the cloud watching, will add that to the flying around date scene. Good idea!

 

[Daddums]

Kesuk and Marigold can both be part of my harem. Happy end for everyone.
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No reason Kesuk can't have kids for you, either. Pretty sure we got some magic girdle lying around somewhere...

He gets off to the idea of Marigold having yours, now imagine if he actually got to have them.

It's just a different flavor of masochism.

Nah, this goes beyond masochism and turns nihilism into a source of arousal.

Also noted about the cloud watching, will add that to the flying around date scene. Good idea!

Now I can't help but imagine the champion holding her back from falling out of a hot air balloon. All because she wants to physically fight the clouds.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

Well I mean... every time you nut. That's like 20-150mil sperms getting wiped out . I mean sure it's not a kid. But a quick tug and we out here erasing potential generations! And god forbid you been saving that baby batter up to erupt later. Country scaling extinction events!

Given the way things are going, we're probably doing them a solid. Place sucks and it ain't getting better any time soon.

Maybe it's an unrealized fetish but most of Adjatha's art does it for me even if I prefer Moira's stuff.

I find it goofy at best, fucked up at worst. Dunno if it's on them or whoever commissions them but fucking hell. Moira's stuff is, at the very least, palatable enough.

Apparently our collective evil gooner license has been renewed because Luma read that one guy's post where he said he didn't like the Clementine content and apparently we all automatically think that way now because we're a hater hivemind that hates everything about this game and everyone associated with it.
If you're reading this, maybe try to start a conversation next time instead of taking it to the circlejerk echo chamber. Some people here are more than willing to talk things out. It's shocking, but not all of us share the same opinions on everything. Savco discord's input on the other hand is arguably worse since you're not gonna get anything constructive out of them -- it will all be shallow praise and pats on the back.
I haven't gone through the content myself, and honestly I'm just happy she's getting content at all.

I have a sucint feeling that what constitutes "Savco discord helpful input" is limited to a two part plan that consists of "put a dick on her" and "read part 1".

Not to say we're the Oxford University of pornographical connosseurism but, in comparison, we should at least be Ivy League material.

Also, collective evil gooner license, yes? Let me get my guitar.

We're a hivemind? Quick hit yourself in the nuts, I'll tell u if I feel it
The fact tht we live rent free in their heads is telling. Maybe I could move in rent is pretty pricey where I'm from.

Jeez, reforming the place just to get rid of the futas would be a fucking nightmare and a half.

I let the negativity get to me. After thinking it over and collecting my thoughts I'm proud of the content I made for her and simply want some feedback on my work.

Yeah, sorry that I can't weight on it right now as I'm busy but I'll give it a look when I got the time. Monday tops.

Still, don't be too upset. People can be a bit rough when it comes to criticism but they probably mean good when they do so. Not being able to reach a common ground is what gave CoC2 stuff like Kinu, you should avoid their example.

Not even regarding the game either, just... you know, regular life.

 

[Jooj Cena]

But the goal was always breedable! Which I was denied unjustly! Turn em into a woman, but not be able to put them childbearing hips to use. It. is. an. absolute. tragedy!

Im gonna be honest, maybe an unpopular opinion, nohomo whatsoever, but best berwyn is the og. Feels wrong changing the boi.

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

Sup, Crab here, writer of gay sex. Just wanted to add that there is a bad end in the Nash quest for those that enjoy that stuff.

Also, this only includes the path where Nash dominates the PC. Sub Nash is in editing and it will probably be a while before I submit it.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Sup, Crab here, writer of gay sex. Just wanted to add that there is a bad end in the Nash quest for those that enjoy that stuff.

How do I access the bad end? Or is it an obvious choice or combat encounter loss? I haven't played the update yet

 

[Knife-wielding crab]

How do I access the bad end? Or is it an obvious choice or combat encounter loss? I haven't played the update yet

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[CrimsonSongbird1982]

The wedding ceremony has already been written, and yes Sanders is the priest that weds PC and Clementine.

At long last Sanders does traditionally priesty stuff that doesn't involve making the land less horny.

No reason Kesuk can't have kids for you, either. Pretty sure we got some magic girdle lying around somewhere...

Mpreg is attainable if one tries hard enough.

I find it goofy at best, fucked up at worst. Dunno if it's on them or whoever commissions them but fucking hell. Moira's stuff is, at the very least, palatable enough.

I would say I prefer Moira's stuff absolutely but Adjatha does scratch a more niche itch.

 

[Vyran22]

Well I mean... every time you nut. That's like 20-150mil sperms getting wiped out . I mean sure it's not a kid. But a quick tug and we out here erasing potential generations! And god forbid you been saving that baby batter up to erupt later. Country scaling extinction events!

....oh god.... we're monsters.

Listen I have reflective surfaces in my house, and on occasion I am unable from keeping my gaze from catching my bloated carcass on them as I pass, there is no chance any of them had a realistic chance of ever being a potential person. I am innocent in this specific regard

 

[Yuugen]

How so?

She isn't even remotely shy and quirky anymore, the scenes are not cutesy as they used to be. Repeated usage of really questionable words like "baby factory" or "baby chamber" that really ruin it for me. She never really called PC "sweetie" or "sweetheart" before so that was kind of weird seeing it come out of nowhere. Why is she suddenly okay with anal even if you never did it before? Your scene doesn't even interact with the older scenes, when you do them out of order she acts like she didn't do anal before. Also not really my point but a tad bit too much capitalization errors and typos for my taste.

And don't get me wrong but, I don't think she'd ever say things like;
"Sweetheart! Stop teasing me so much and just d-do it already! It’s called the mating press, so do it! Mate me! Breed me with your lambs please!"
or
"Ohmygods! Why does it feel so much better in both?!" and "R-right there, PC! G-Give me every inch of your cocks!"
That's just generic bimbo language filled to the brim in this game already. Clementine was unique in that regard.

Also, when I said that I didn't mean to be rude or an

evil gooner

haha, was just my personal opinion. I was so happy she was getting content, it's just that it didn't meet my expectations. That's all.

Another also, where did they talk about my comment and decided all of us were evil anyway beside asking "How so?" I geniunely don't get it.

 

[GS21]

I let the negativity get to me. After thinking it over and collecting my thoughts I'm proud of the content I made for her and simply want some feedback on my work.

I'm here and read the comments, give me your thoughts and opinions. Not everyone is going to like the content I make and that's fine.

Here are my plans for Clementine's marriage expansion too.

Spoiler: Clementine marriage plans

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It takes character to say that, and I respect that. I'm glad you're willing to hear us out. Writing aside, I'm honestly just glad Clementine is receiving more content to begin with, so thank you for that. And the planned content all looks great too, so I'm definitely looking forward to it.

She isn't even remotely shy and quirky anymore, the scenes are not cutesy as they used to be. Repeated usage of really questionable words like "baby factory" or "baby chamber" that really ruin it for me. She never really called PC "sweetie" or "sweetheart" before so that was kind of weird seeing it come out of nowhere. Why is she suddenly okay with anal even if you never did it before? Your scene doesn't even interact with the older scenes, when you do them out of order she acts like she didn't do anal before. Also not really my point but a tad bit too much capitalization errors and typos for my taste.

And don't get me wrong but, I don't think she'd ever say things like;
"Sweetheart! Stop teasing me so much and just d-do it already! It’s called the mating press, so do it! Mate me! Breed me with your lambs please!"
or
"Ohmygods! Why does it feel so much better in both?!" and "R-right there, PC! G-Give me every inch of your cocks!"
That's just generic bimbo language filled to the brim in this game already. Clementine was unique in that regard.

For the most part, after having gone through the content, I have to agree. There's a bit of whiplash going from the very vanilla, reserved, and shy Clementine to a sex-crazy clementine yelling for you to stuff lambs in her. It just feels a little out of place when you compare it to the original scenes.
As for the pet names that also caught me off-guard. It feels out of place when it doesn't exist in her original content so it could be an add-on for post marriage content, would feel more natural that way.
And this might just be a peeve but I have to agree that terms like baby factory are just weird, though at least it's not as egregious as baby bag.
Dialogue aside the scenes themselves are good, extra points for the thankless work of working with parsers. I know from experience that it's tiresome which is why a lot of writers don't bother with it.

Another also, where did they talk about my comment and decided all of us were evil anyway beside asking "How so?" I geniunely don't get it.

The discord server. Both sides view each other as the bigger loser so its whatever. Calling us trash or worth less than an amoeba without the full context is a little crazy though, considering the lack of a direct-interaction to garner that kind of reaction. There never seems to be a valid reason for the hate either, just the bandwagon effect in action, all over a misunderstanding apparently.

 

[Yuugen]

The discord server.

Must be on a channel I can’t see or a server that I’m not aware of then. Or I guess I’m just blind. Not that I have anything to do with that server anyway, I was just curious if people got super mad because of my comment XD

Edit: oh now I see coc2 has a separate server, seems like they got plenty mad, cool XD. Do I get a pat on the back for joining the evil gooner collective?

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Do I get a pat on the back for joining the evil gooner collective?

You might even get a cameo in the game, if you piss them off enough.

 

[Femboys and Futas]

I thought you're respectable for picking her up to begin with, so I've been rooting for you since day one. Only thing I'd like is if you wrote Sanders marrying Clem to the Champ. Dude needs some face time that isn't giving out quests.

And a scene of the Champ and Clem cloud watching, with Clem getting increasingly competitive against the fluffy clouds, because her wool is better than any cloud.

Keep cooking king