- Sep 8, 2020
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I thought this was a great update!
Spoilers ahead
I like the progression with Sara and the layers of intrigue about her stalker and his origin - why he appeared when he did.
I think Sara is a nice, complex character who is not a cookie cutter version of all the other girls - different body type and skills as well as motivation and insecurities.
I thought the family get together was nicely done and added to the world building that helps define the bigger picture and hints at some of what may happen in the future.
I am Very interested in how quickly the MC's classmates - both male and female - react to Sara's Father and his announcement that the last Fletcher is in marriage talks with him about Sara.
The final scene with Sara was especially well done and I appreciate the finesse here - how the MC respected Sara's insecurities and that she still found a way to be more intimate with him.
I also think the upcoming addition of Hanna to the staff at the cafe will be interesting.
I recognize that this will take time and likely several updates, but I am looking forward to these developments.
All in all - a great update!
Cheers!!
Spoilers ahead
I like the progression with Sara and the layers of intrigue about her stalker and his origin - why he appeared when he did.
I think Sara is a nice, complex character who is not a cookie cutter version of all the other girls - different body type and skills as well as motivation and insecurities.
I thought the family get together was nicely done and added to the world building that helps define the bigger picture and hints at some of what may happen in the future.
I am Very interested in how quickly the MC's classmates - both male and female - react to Sara's Father and his announcement that the last Fletcher is in marriage talks with him about Sara.
The final scene with Sara was especially well done and I appreciate the finesse here - how the MC respected Sara's insecurities and that she still found a way to be more intimate with him.
I also think the upcoming addition of Hanna to the staff at the cafe will be interesting.
I recognize that this will take time and likely several updates, but I am looking forward to these developments.
All in all - a great update!
Cheers!!