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I think you're missing a lot of the motivations and character traits of the MC shown through subtext.I don't know how far I am into this game, but our MC gives me major whiplash. He has all of these women fawning over him, but has the emotional intelligence of a block of wood. But then knows exactly what they are thinking... unless they are obviously distressed, in which case he's back to being braindead. The author tries to have him come across as smart sometimes, but then just has him be an idiot when having a clue would be useful... perhaps in an effort to make the MC look tough for saying no to people? But it comes across as naive. He wants to know all about his grandfather, but when presented with people who could possibly give him actual answers, he's rude and arrogant. But more importantly slows down the over-arching story being told. There's the idea in role playing games that it is assumed that everyone playing wants to play, and therefore will agree to pursue the quest the DM presents them. Our MC wants answers... and then refuses to even attempt to get the answers once people don't just say "ok, I'll tell you everything." He doesn't have to agree with whatever someone wants, but not just shutting the proverbial door on them would go a long way to keeping the plot moving.
And I'm sure I missed it as a passing line in the beginning, but why is he going to school if he plans to fail? He does realize that there's no benefit to attending school if you're both going to fail and sleep through class, right?
Anywho, minor rant. The game is good, but there are multiple conversations that sound like the MC is trying to push the plot to a different update as opposed to just getting the answers he claimed to want thirty seconds ago.
What I gathered from a lot of the events and conversations you're talking about is that he is proud and does not trust easily, nor does he want to play other people's bullshit games.
He isn't an RPG protagonist. He wants answers, but he wants them on his terms, and he's not going to just follow the yellow exclamation marks and bend over to do anything he's asked/told to do by the "questgiver".
(spoiler below is for content from 0.6, IIRC)
He also very clearly dislikes being manipulated, and dislikes meaningless social expectations, so he's not going to automatically defer to anyone. What you see as "rude and arrogant", I see as "unwilling to defer to people who have not earned it". If they want respect, they have to give it, and Mr. Hamilton has absolutely not done so. Mr. Hamilton expects respect and deferral purely because he is older and more powerful... But the combination of Mr. Hamilton's arrogance, plus him tricking and manipulating the MC (and unilaterally making the engagement decision without asking the MC), makes the MC far less inclined to go along with anything Mr. Hamilton says (it would do the same for me, so I get it).
(ETA: As a counter example (with spoilers for more recent content), Alison (the Headmistress) has absolutely shown that respect to the MC, choosing to defer to him so they can form a mutual relationship of helping each other.)
As for the girls, he's aware of their attraction or willingness, but, again, he wants those relationships to start on his own terms, and he's a dominant. So he progresses things slowly until they're ready for the relationship he wants with them.
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