This is MUCH better than how it was before.
The reworked beginning made it all quite a bit more interesting and enticing.
Still a number of things I'm not a huge fan of, but I'm keeping a lookout for how the story develops as, regardless of my own current misgivings, game's quite interesting and has a very unique vibe.
The vibe, setting and premise alone make for a very enticing AVN for me so far, so I want to see where it goes. Again though, compared to how the beginning of the game (and Enna as a whole) was written before, I much prefer how it is now.
One burning question I have that isn't making that much sense to me is in regards to Moran. I'll put it in spoilers so I don't risk spoiling anything for anyone:
Back at the execution, it is said that the woman who was to be executed had everything but was ever greedy and turned to demons to satiate her wants. She had a husband and children yet chose to prostitute herself, steal from her (former?) husband and take actions that harmed her children (if I'm not misremembering). For all that, she was to be executed.
Enna then says that the sentences that the deaconess are proclaiming are true. But everything we hear about Moran so far doesn't line up with any of that. Moran is also the only demon we have seen and interacted with (in a friendly manner) so far, and the other one is possessing the actress in the theater. Could it be that Moran has completely taken over the girl (accused by the deaconess of her crimes) and the girl is no more? All we see with Moran is Moran, not a trace of the girl she used(?) to possess, and it has been established that demons NEED a host to leave the Morn and cross over to our side.
So with all that out of the way and in short: what is the Moran situation? Cause that is a tidbit of info that will absolutely shape my perception of her, and how I feel towards her as a character.
(On a personal note, I detest characters written similarly to the main "heroine" in Patrick Rothfuss' The Name of the Wind, for reference. I'm not trying to shape how the dev writes the characters, but I would like some sort of heads up as to what I can / should expect.)