The beginning of the game is interesting. But I didn't understand the plot. Why would she work? There must be a super task - debt, money to fulfill a dream... The direction of where and why it is moving must be determined... And raising points should make sense to be consistent. It should not be too simple, but also without unnecessary delay. Maybe with the loss of points if you make the wrong choice. In general, it is necessary to keep in mind a long gameplay with successes and failures. Otherwise, the game will be completed in 20 minutes and there will be no desire to return. In general, good luck, I hope the game will work out...