Finished this and updated my review. I loved the ending and how it brought everything together so well.
As a caveat though, I ended up re-playing parts of the second half of the story multiple times because I became confused and lost track of what was going on. Part of it's because with RPGMaker, there's no backlog, so if I tap forward too quickly, a short line like "[x] days later..." is skipped past quickly. Part of it's because the transitions were often implicit, and I didn't catch onto them quickly.
Some examples of parts that threw me off me.
The 3 characters' relationship with Kelly was also on my mind a lot.
Some potential errors I noticed.
(Now that I've gotten all that off my chest, I'm off to play the the follow-up games.)