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wait a minute is the compressed version the old version? ah i think i need to make new android port.
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To be fair, it was night and he was stood there staring at a car saying how he wanted it to be his.
That would get the police called in most neighbourhoods.
That's right.
What's more, the MC didn't really want to call the police, so she suggested that the guy leave voluntarily.
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>Pure lesbian
Well, you got me that's for sure. And Hellen is super lovely already, looking forward for more.
Well, you got me that's for sure. And Hellen is super lovely already, looking forward for more.
- Jul 25, 2018
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This VN makes me sad.
The visuals are great, the two girls we get to see so far are hot and the promise of "lesbians only" is always pleasant.
But the writing made me roll my eyes and facepalm too many times. I'm not even talking about the broken grammar and typos. The protagonist is intensely unlikable, full of herself and judgmental, the exposition is overbearing in how it tells the reader who the characters are supposed to be without showing any of it and the whole scene with the "suspicious guy" is embarrassingly on the nose and inadequate at portraying what it wants to.
This is more subjective but this line from OP:
I've had to deal with people both on the internet and in real life thinking that being a lesbian means I hate men. So seeing our confident awesome virtuous lesbian MC being a twat to a random guy for no valid reason caused me nothing but pain.
The visuals are great, the two girls we get to see so far are hot and the promise of "lesbians only" is always pleasant.
But the writing made me roll my eyes and facepalm too many times. I'm not even talking about the broken grammar and typos. The protagonist is intensely unlikable, full of herself and judgmental, the exposition is overbearing in how it tells the reader who the characters are supposed to be without showing any of it and the whole scene with the "suspicious guy" is embarrassingly on the nose and inadequate at portraying what it wants to.
This is more subjective but this line from OP:
I didn't think much of it before reading the VN itself. "Probably just an awkward bit of miscommunication" I thought. But after reading the VN, with that caricature of a male character, I have to conclude the writers really see men as the enemy.
I've had to deal with people both on the internet and in real life thinking that being a lesbian means I hate men. So seeing our confident awesome virtuous lesbian MC being a twat to a random guy for no valid reason caused me nothing but pain.
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I've had to clarify several times that while I may be a lesbian, i'm not one of those militant man hating ones.
It's almost like the lesbian community is an us and them now. "We may eat pussy but we're not like those ones over there hating men".
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Okay iam in.
Now pls add some Corruption,BDSM and Double Anal Fisting with Hulk sized Hands and ill become a Patreon
Now pls add some Corruption,BDSM and Double Anal Fisting with Hulk sized Hands and ill become a Patreon
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