DMHator, there seems to be an issue with your game regarding too high RAM consumption... After some time clicking through the images on screen, there's a significant increase on the latency of text display as well.
Maybe the solution for this issue is the Ren'py statement you used in the script file to display images. If you primarily used
show
for displaying the images, all images are still present in RAM. That's not the case if you use the statement
scene
instead (as explained in the
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Furthermore, I can only support
hoshimota 's feedback: don't show scenes with people/monsters banging any girls outside the MC. Even they aren't LIs, it is too easily considered as the ugly kink with the three infamous letters (which I do not need to speak out loud here).
And please consider to reduce your very expansive narratives (whenever there's no dialogue). Don't tell the player what's just shown in the images. And don't let the player read through extensive narratives in action scenes (particularly the fight scenes would really profit from much less narrative descriptions!).
Just my two cents. Hopefully constructive enough for you...
Btw, so far I could play without RAM overload, I do like your introduction to a potentially interesting fantasy story! All the best to the future development!