RockBottomMan

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Is there a system ingame where I can see harvest seasons?

The next event with Daisy is during the end of harvesting season
Douie is during cucumber season, which one's are those?

I'm also with Pixie at 19 so something about a peach in the forest, I'm clueless, I went there at 6,7,8,9 and 10 am
For peach in the forest, I had to set Pixie's progress to 20 manually (cheat), then went into the Lost Woods at 6am and there was something to click on the first tree on the left.
 

dragonaut117

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Oct 20, 2022
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No offense to the writer but this dialogue and writing is... something. Is the dude a native english speaker? Really feels like it need a thorough run-through by a proofreader at the very least.
 
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Lewyn Collins

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No offense to the writer but this dialogue and writing is... something. Is the dude a native english speaker? Really feels like it need a thorough run-through by a proofreader at the very least.
No, he's from South America. I personally don't see many errors in the way he writes. It's true that his lexicon is somewhat basic, but that's it.
 

dragonaut117

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Oct 20, 2022
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No, he's from South America. I personally don't see many errors in the way he writes. It's true that his lexicon is somewhat basic, but that's it.
There's an awkward phrase every two seconds. It's not naturalistic in the way people speak at all. Simply adding contractions solves a lot of the issues. A lot of the other issues come down to weird sentence structure or simple grammatical errors. No one speaks in the way the dialogue is written.

Lines just thrown in like "Just pay more focus next time" make it pretty obvious.
 
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