- Oct 20, 2022
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There's an awkward phrase every two seconds. It's not naturalistic in the way people speak at all. Simply adding contractions solves a lot of the issues. A lot of the other issues come down to weird sentence structure or simple grammatical errors. No one speaks in the way the dialogue is written.No, he's from South America. I personally don't see many errors in the way he writes. It's true that his lexicon is somewhat basic, but that's it.
Lines just thrown in like "Just pay more focus next time" make it pretty obvious.
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