Wow, I totally, utterly, forgot this was a thing. So long between updates I was pretty sure it was dead.
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This one is very unpolished. At the current development rate, it will take a while to show a solid product. MC is a Walmart Dante knockoff but the girls look decent. The english is pretty bad and I've seen better textures on a PS1.
I feel like pregnancy should be added to the game. Just a fetish of mine haha. That and it seems a bit more realistic to add the pregnancy thing here.
Attractive models. Engrish. Stupid nonsensical choices that lead to game over if you don't pick the arbitrarily chosen right answer.
2/5 would not play again.
2/5 would not play again.
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magic, maybeOoh look a floating tiara...
Me thinks someone needs to fix their images.
eh… wasn't the first release barely 3 weeks ago?
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Just looked at the patreon, is this upcoming femdom?
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Nodrean I just finished it and in my honest opinion it has potential.
If further development can accommodate improvements to the script as the engrish is, borderline acceptable. Try considering a proofreader or two. you have a coherent plot, I mean something believable of sorts, I guess.
And you might wanna consider including choices for the sex scenes that involve specific kinks, like above mentioned femdom, incest could have also been optional as it is a chore for some people(Yes, sadly I'm not a big fan but would prefer it be optional) Also,
As some above mentioned lack visual detail, it seems this is a fairly new project with a similarly new dev who is testing the waters, so it CAN be improved in due course of time. So visual detail is, in my opinion something that you'll get better at after spending a considerable amount of dev time, and that should be least of priorities.
Since this is a early build, I'm hoping this game becomes better in time. Good luck dev!
If further development can accommodate improvements to the script as the engrish is, borderline acceptable. Try considering a proofreader or two. you have a coherent plot, I mean something believable of sorts, I guess.
And you might wanna consider including choices for the sex scenes that involve specific kinks, like above mentioned femdom, incest could have also been optional as it is a chore for some people(Yes, sadly I'm not a big fan but would prefer it be optional) Also,
This is important. There needs to be build-up and some sexual tension, if necessary, for the characters to stick. Otherwise there's no attachment b/w the player and characters.
As some above mentioned lack visual detail, it seems this is a fairly new project with a similarly new dev who is testing the waters, so it CAN be improved in due course of time. So visual detail is, in my opinion something that you'll get better at after spending a considerable amount of dev time, and that should be least of priorities.
Since this is a early build, I'm hoping this game becomes better in time. Good luck dev!
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Thank you for your constructive criticism, I'll take that into account
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Humorous, it was actually, quite fun playing... can't wait for more update.
Here's some of the typos/grammatical errors I found, not really sure if some are wrong or maybe it's just me.
Here's some of the typos/grammatical errors I found, not really sure if some are wrong or maybe it's just me.
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According to the plot of the game, you are already saving her from the goblins, they have not had time to do anything with her
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Oh, amm ... can someone help the author with translation? English is also not my native language but this is horrendous, my eyes started to hurt after the 10th sentence(that's about the Engrish)
-- So the MC is talking to his sister about their father, but instead he to say ... You know how father raised us(me) ... the dialog is -- You know how MY father raised me. (khmm) are they from different fathers?
I kinda hope next version to be just spellcheck fix
The scene where he get out from the metro, and stare at his sister for ... a while and she doesn't move and don't recognize him ... maybe it should be like they are walking out of there ... and he is thinking about this ...
After the scene with the car they went to eat pizza (tell us ... first what MC says ... I'll pay for it ... for what?)
Then they immediately appear outside (maybe a transition ... like the cashier is saying wait 10 min, please ... you can sit or something or for here or takeaway )
ahmm khmm no way to play this ... the scene with their father amm he got sent to another world to be(should be get) stronger to save the current one, which he cannot now and everything will be fine wowzers
There is a potential but ... please ask someone to help you with nonsensical dialog
-- So the MC is talking to his sister about their father, but instead he to say ... You know how father raised us(me) ... the dialog is -- You know how MY father raised me. (khmm) are they from different fathers?
I kinda hope next version to be just spellcheck fix
The scene where he get out from the metro, and stare at his sister for ... a while and she doesn't move and don't recognize him ... maybe it should be like they are walking out of there ... and he is thinking about this ...
After the scene with the car they went to eat pizza (tell us ... first what MC says ... I'll pay for it ... for what?)
Then they immediately appear outside (maybe a transition ... like the cashier is saying wait 10 min, please ... you can sit or something or for here or takeaway
)ahmm khmm no way to play this ... the scene with their father amm he got sent to another world to be(should be get) stronger to save the current one, which he cannot now and everything will be fine wowzers
There is a potential but ... please ask someone to help you with nonsensical dialog
