Billy Rising

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This game was actually good.

I hope theirs a "Orcs take over the town" ending, but even then having it continue after a scenario like that seems really interesting.

I'd pay 20 bucks for a much longer version.

Maybe an alternate dice roll based combat system would be cool too, just two cents.
 

Fougere

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Actually a great game with a whole lot of interesting kinks to explore. You can clearly tell the difference between games with a patreon page and those without after you try this one.
Keep up the great work and don't try to listen to all the suggestions you'll get from here!
 

Papazoglo1

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after testing a few settings (iframe etc.) i decided to make it simple. here is the link.


should be playable within ~60 minutes. i'm uploading a fresh one right now
Thank you so much for the opportunity to try the game without downloading!!!

Unfortunately, probably few people saw that you uploaded the online version of this game. If you enter the "online" tag in the search for this topic, your post where you promise to make an online version is visible, but your post where you posted the web version of the game is not visible. I recommend editing your post by adding the keyword "online" so that your link to the web version of the game is easily found through the search.
 
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TeckXChaos

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shame the mind control is basically nothing.
It looks like the tag is currently unused, so more content for it will be added later. If I had to guess, probably an ending associated with the bazaar. But yes, you just have the bazaar, sleeping in your apartment, and an implied scene at the jeweler once you've completed the bazaar quest.
 

Teglami

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Thank you so much for the opportunity to try the game without downloading!!!

Unfortunately, probably few people saw that you uploaded the online version of this game. If you enter the "online" tag in the search for this topic, your post where you promise to make an online version is visible, but your post where you posted the web version of the game is not visible. I recommend editing your post by adding the keyword "online" so that your link to the web version of the game is easily found through the search.
thanks for the Info. i'll do that.
and i reported my post and asked to put that link as an online version in the main post.
 

themagiman

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Sorg I'm trying to make a game in twine but it always looks like trash where it is on a simple white background. What did you use to have a theme and sidebar? Did you write it in twine or just export to it from some other language? Did you use a guide?

What pompts did you use for you AI pictures? I tried to recreate them but failed.
 

Sorg

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Sorg I'm trying to make a game in twine but it always looks like trash where it is on a simple white background. What did you use to have a theme and sidebar? Did you write it in twine or just export to it from some other language? Did you use a guide?

What pompts did you use for you AI pictures? I tried to recreate them but failed.
I have absolutely no prior experience and in the beginning I read through Twine guides and looked at the source code of some games to understand the logic, and then I just started writing. I coded directly in SugarCube, which is actually fun, but quite a lot of work. I'm really not the one you should ask for tips on getting started with Twine, since I don't know much about it myself and have just copied and experimented a lot. :HideThePain:

...and yes, explaining what you mean to the AI can be tedious - I used keywords to describe what the image should and shouldn't contain, that's all.

Good luck with your (smutty) game! :D
 

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I have absolutely no prior experience and in the beginning I read through Twine guides and looked at the source code of some games to understand the logic, and then I just started writing. I coded directly in SugarCube, which is actually fun, but quite a lot of work. I'm really not the one you should ask for tips on getting started with Twine, since I don't know much about it myself and have just copied and experimented a lot. :HideThePain:

...and yes, explaining what you mean to the AI can be tedious - I used keywords to describe what the image should and shouldn't contain, that's all.

Good luck with your (smutty) game! :D
Are you still adding content to the game? I thought you said that you didn't have the time for game creation any more?
 
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I suggest dialogue variations for return encounters with NPCs, like with the tavern orc.

plus does it really have to be full on bimbo body for bad endings? they always look like they got allergies
 

JoeHiggins1949

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Sorg I don't know whether you, or anyone else cares about this, but it bothered me, so I fixed it in my copy of your game. There are several instances where you use the word breath when it should be the word breathe and several where you use the term do as he say when it should be do as he says. When I first opened it in Twine. I also noticed that the block Title was spelled Titel. I also corrected that. For you, or anyone else who wants it I am uploading here my spelling corrected version of your latest fix. I really like the game and hope someone keeps it going. This has now been updated to include a few more things I noticed. In no way have I altered anything except the text. But if I can figure out how to add more endings and content I would, if you don't intend to. This game is definitely worth continuing.
Today, November 25, 2025, I made another edit replacing the line, "It's to late to take a walk," with, "It's too late to take a walk."
 
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Soundflare

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Its actually a fun game to me, am eager to see what Sorg comes up with for the bandits and Darkorc hideouts in the future
 
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cl0udlet

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Sorg, your game is really cool. The variety and amount of content is impressive.Better,than most games in this genre.Escort Dreams vibes.
 

Sorg

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Sorg I don't know whether you, or anyone else cares about this, but it bothered me, so I fixed it in my copy of your game. There are several instances where you use the word breath when it should be the word breathe and several where you use the term do as he say when it should be do as he says. When I first opened it in Twine. I also noticed that the block Title was spelled Titel. I also corrected that. For you, or anyone else who wants it I am uploading here my spelling corrected version of your latest fix. I really like the game and hope someone keeps it going. This has now been updated to include a few more things I noticed. In no way have I altered anything except the text. But if I can figure out how to add more endings and content I would, if you don't intend to. This game is definitely worth continuing.
Well, thanks for your efforts and the heads-up. I will use your corrected version if I continue working on it. I'm not a native speaker, I speak English often but rarely write it, so there will be quite a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. :HideThePain:

As I said before, everyone is welcome to tinker with the game. I just insist that no financial profit will be made from it. I might work on the project some more, but I can't currently say if or when. If the crafting projects overlap, in the worst case there will be two versions of the game. So feel free to experiment with it.(y)
 

Temparo

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This game is definitely entertaining to play. I also have a couple of suggestions if you're willing to hear them.

1. A few lesbian scenes would certainly be appreciated. Whether from the merchant girls after doing a quest or two from them, the lonely farm girl letting you stay the night after working all day, the orc matron for an interatrial variant, or I can see the nun being a dominatrix in private.

2. Since female orcs are only born from unions between orcs, shouldn't the orc matron be sometimes pregnant trying to have some daughters so she's not the only female orc left? You could have it start only after the shaman tests the accelerated pregnancy potion.

3. For the shady merchant hypnosis when you go to the jeweler and she's getting face-fucked you could join in if you've been hypnotized enough times. Alternatively, if you managed to break free and see this, you could realize what's happening and report him to the guard captain.

4. Possibly introduce an orc adventurer who's actually nicer compared to his brethren. Definitely more of a romantic adventuring couple ending but he would still dominate in bed.

5. I'm figuring there will be more sex scenes with the humans if for nothing but variety's sake, so why not be the one in charge if your domination is high enough.

That's all off the top of my head, please feel free to use any of these ideas. Looking forward to the next update!
 
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