- Dec 30, 2024
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the game has become increasingly ugly, usually with updates it improved, but in this case it is a real mess and a waste of time.
At first glance, I thought interesting. I downloaded it and tried, but it got me dissappointed as the writter is complete clueless on how to write a good ntr story, instead he just wrote a dumb story to corrupt a girl and not considering the rest being inconsistent. First of all Ryan (the mc) is a well know respected ex underworld figure, anyone who know the underworld, knows that their women are their pricest possession, anyone else looking wrong at their woman with wrong intentions, get wacked. No instead they suddenly make Ryan some dumb idiot who lend his wife for 2 months to his boss' son, worse of all they make her even look like a dumb naive slut. Now i know this is a ntr game and logic doesn't matter, but it would been more fun if they respected somewhat story wise reality. Another thing, the wife is pretty pale, if she is the type that love fancy clothing, make up and looking good, she wouldn't look like some office mouse that never seen the sun. I tried to like it, but the text was just boring, uninteresting and the sex scenes are not bad, but neither special either. If I had to review this work, then I would say maybe 2 stars out of 5. Succes with the future, for me it ends here.
Forgot to mention, the MC and his wife live in a maybe 2 story house with walled fence, almost all houses are the same around them, this is in most countries considered a richer middle class neighbourhood, ofcourse they can be targeted for burglaries and some that live there can be perverts, but still it should be considered a safe area, not like the writter describe a bad area as if they live in a ghetto where whole day black gangsta's drive around.
Forgot to mention, the MC and his wife live in a maybe 2 story house with walled fence, almost all houses are the same around them, this is in most countries considered a richer middle class neighbourhood, ofcourse they can be targeted for burglaries and some that live there can be perverts, but still it should be considered a safe area, not like the writter describe a bad area as if they live in a ghetto where whole day black gangsta's drive around.
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- Sep 12, 2017
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I don't like humiliation, I don't like cheating, but i do like sharing. Is there an NTS route in this or is it all (NTR) humiliation/cheating?
Well I can only say is, the Boss' son will break her, make her into a fuck doll and mc can't do anything about it, from checking pathing there isn't a real path, choices you can make only decide what scene you see first and what scene next, so it more or less a kinetic story. The reason i stopped playing was the moment she stepped out the dressing stall and the guy told her that her outfit sucked, i felt as woman, what a jerk, if that was me there he would had felt my hand across his ugly face.
This is a list of things to come, so pick your poison.
I don't see here any mentions of ntr.
It's a corruption game and I hope there will be a revenge path (chapter 3). It would be nice to see a woman take revenge on those who hurt her
- Jan 5, 2023
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You want her to take revenge on herself for her bad choices... Sounds interesting
- Sep 2, 2023
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Well that still a bad ending, see as for her taking revenge she should start with her husband telling her to go on the 2 month trip and then himself lie somewhat to have a vacation on his own in Dubai, then the unsub who will turn her into what will happen along those 2 months and all those other men in it, even mobsters, I would say, she will need alot of luck. If she was a smart woman, she would just said no from the start and said fine go on your 2 month holiday job, i'll have fun when i find me a new man in the meantime.You want her to take revenge on herself for her bad choices... Sounds interesting
- Sep 4, 2022
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Nope as she is in Fiji after that. And the update ends after the 4th sex game task completed that Oliver gave her.
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- Aug 26, 2020
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A good update, with all the ingredients of a good debauchery's story:
exibitionism, degrading, light sex.
But I have to say that the wife should be more happy and aroused when she do kinky things.
She's not obliged to undress or wank, is a bet and she accepted to do it.
With a funny mood the game will gain a lot!
exibitionism, degrading, light sex.
But I have to say that the wife should be more happy and aroused when she do kinky things.
She's not obliged to undress or wank, is a bet and she accepted to do it.
With a funny mood the game will gain a lot!
- May 29, 2020
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It was a pretty hot scene, but don't know when she'll be back home, also the paths he planned seems extreme, either she willingly become his fuck doll, or he'll rely on blackmail, or she end up a broken mess that turns into an avenging wretch.