So it isn't a game. We agree it's a visual novel....
Mr Dots needs to improve his story telling.
None of the characters evolve or make new choices.
MC scores all the young chicks. All the young chicks love MC and accept whatever he does.
Too predictable.
Every character is always the same with no evolving.
D is always naive. despite having sex. MC is always Mr Nice Guy despite corrupting and fucking multiple teenage girls, adult woman lust after MC no matter what etc....
For a visual novel, the writing is poor. No character development.
The shit writing would be forgivable if the player had a choice, but no, the player has no choice.