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VN Ren'Py Completed Dating My Daughter [Ch. 1-4 v1.01] [MrDots Games]

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Jeff Steel

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Aitan_3 said:
Ehm... I'll try throwing my two cents, since I've written some of those "tingling feeling" scenes. The way I see it, daughter knows about sexual pleasure, knows about masturbation and does touch herself every once in a while, since it's pleasing... but she never reached orgasm anyway, because she is not too sure what to do and what she is supposed to feel. That's not so uncommon as you might believe. I know of at least two girls who got way past 18 before experiencing their first orgasm (one of them past 30!) even though they had been "masturbating" and having sex all along. When daughter says "I have a tingly feeling" it doesn't mean that she doesn't know what does it mean, it just means that she is too shy to put it in blunter words, even only in her mind.

That's my vision at least. There are other scriptwriters whose take on the daughter makes her even more naive than that. It's hard to "tune" every scene in the same key when you have to release a new episode each month. I'd like to publish a revised version of chapter 1 once it's finished where daughter's "innocence level" will be more clearly defined, but also that's something hard to do. Who would continue pledging for months just to see every "I've got a tingly feeling" (which makes it seem like she really doesn't recognize it for what it is) changed into "I've got all tingly down there" (who leaves open the possibility that she is just using "polite words" to describe her feeling)?

Cut some slack on us guys!
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Lol - I've been working on a alternate rewrite of Father's dinner with Georgina on Day 11. In that effort I transcribed all of Georgina's scenes and some relevant Daughter scenes. From that alone I find you guys have written a tremendous amount of script and it has been extremely good, even more so now you point out that the writers then have to tune them to reach a story norm. Now I do have a full time business and relationship, so I don't have a lot of time, but the time it takes to research and rewrite one scene well is not inconsiderable. Hats off.
 
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virtuvoid said:
D is terrific! Sure, there are small improvements that would render her slightly better than the near-perfect she already is (physically). But her personality should NOT be altered.

Compare D to the other virgin--Jennifer. J is a lot bolder and chameleon-like, so she seems too easily corruptible.

The main character I dislike is MC. This guy acts like a 17 year old schoolboy most of the time. I'd like to see a path where D could chart an independent course away from MC.
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The problem with MC is he has to be vague enough to be Everyman and also has to be able to be faithful and a cheater out of the same character - depending on your story path. It's the 17-year old that is being used to cheat. IMO
 
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As it is, D is quite close from her BFF, who is ok and quite liberated + can be close to PC.
The waitress is tutored as to sex by D BFF, also interested but yet, nearly no direct contact with PC.
Which mean they are at last two girls as to start, three close and with more than two ties linking as to a possible good outcome (they would have a lot to loose by not agreeing to this continuation > transformation).

Btw, is there a Patreon forum ?
As I see it, its a blog type interface, messages + responses on the top of each other.
Here we are on a forum, with a structure setting up boundaries allowing for a wide range of subjects to be discussed. ?
 
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virtuvoid said:
In the Patreon forum, members of the dev-team are happily chirping that DMD is such a romance.

DMD is rather a pron game with a strong romantic element. To make the game more romantic would mean the MC must remain faithful to D. If a gamer has chosen any path other than "D only", the MC is an unfit romantic character. To transform MC back to a believable romantic lead, all "D+" paths must be forcibly cleared away (with the use of game-over screens).

We shall see, but all roads seem to lead to more roads month$ after month$...
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There is a possibility of a MC romantic character outside of "D only" that has been discussed, and that's a polyamory path where MC does not cheat, but is a route open to and accepted by Daughter. Coming out is a movie about the creater of Wonder Woman, William Marston, and his polyamorous relationship with two women -
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-. In addition there have been multiple movies made about polyamorous relationships. In fear of dating myself, my favorite is the 1982 Daryl Hannah film, Summer Lovers. -- The key is MC remains "faithful" to the relationship because polyamory is specifically not cheating and is a relationship bought into by all parties. Here is 70+ other films about polyamory -
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Yes, G + blackmail could have quite some weight as to open another path, hm. This said, it would have to be seen, since as it is, the main path is over a change of carrier involving D and G (more time together = more options).
 
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Jeff Steel said:
The problem with MC is he has to be vague enough to be Everyman and also has to be able to be faithful and a cheater out of the same character - depending on your story path. It's the 17-year old that is being used to cheat. IMO
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Man of Steel, that is a very intelligent statement.
 
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Is it me, or is anyone else having trouble seeing the daughter progressing to a place in which having something with her friends or Georgina isn't going to inevitably cause major problems. Considering how small of a physical escalation will completely end the game, I can't imagine that Revelation ever working.
 
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Infamy said:
What do we know of the next update has any content been divulged yet?
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possible two photoshoot possibilities with either Richard or Georgina; dev indicated they may not be able to include both story branches due to the sheer amount of content but they will try- worst case scenario just the Georgina route for photoshoot.

There will also be some sort of F/D evening scene (I'm thinking some sort
of naked game, shower, and of course cuddling in bed where D gives F
a handjob or even allows F to finally
finger her.

we should also reach corruption level 7 with any luck.

that's as much as I know given current speculation and what I could glean from the previews and the open community patreon discussion.
 
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atlas114 said:
possible two photoshoot possibilities with either Richard or Georgina; dev indicated they may not be able to include both story branches due to the sheer amount of content but they will try- worst case scenario just the Georgina route for photoshoot.

There will also be some sort of F/D evening scene (I'm thinking some sort
of naked game, shower, and of course cuddling in bed where D gives F
a handjob or even allows F to finally
finger her.

we should also reach corruption level 7 with any luck.

that's as much as I know given current speculation and what I could glean from the previews and the open community patreon discussion.
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Works for me you are doing the hentai gods work me amigo.
 
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Revelation between D and G, they are some paths where it could go well, the basic one being where they develop a very good relation over the photoshots (two only, that would be brief, but, that is for now).
As it is, G has noticed how attractive D is, as we don't know that much about her yet (out of D, the amount of data is limited over the others characters). She could have add quite some experience already and as such, if the PC give the correct inpulse ? (Of course, he would need quite some evolution from where he stand right now, having second thoughts over each decision ..).
 
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jande21 said:
Looks like people had a similar thought, that a Big-Boob & Blonde sex family would be the best way to go :p.
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I would love to have Georgina and the daughter bounce on my fuckin cock every night and I wouldn't be able to put a kid inside the daughter in fear it would come out with 1 eye no balls and a club foot but I sure as shit could make Georgina my personal baby maker.
 
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