VN Ren'Py Completed Dating My Daughter [Ch. 1-4 v1.01] [MrDots Games]

[hgamefix]

As an active patron contributor on DMD, I'm here to share ideas and discuss. I love you guys, but I don't post updates or saves here. Realistically, updates are so spread out, run at least three paths: D only focused on Love; D/E heavy choices foucused on lewdity; and one on everyone else besides Elena when the options arise (e.g. Georgina)

OK, thx BTW!!!

 

[IPkiss]

Sooooooooo D has discovered that carrots look similar to F’s cock. Guess she will go vegetarian and hang around fruit and veg shops searching for a perfect fit of bananas, cucumbers and zucchini’s to slide into her pussy now that she is apart from F for the time being and practice her new found pleasure of self-masturbation.

 

[CamelRed]

Everybody complaining about DS milking but this guy is even worst.

 

[Kelvin]

This what makes DMD mind blowing games. Keep up the good work...

 

[Cheryl]

This update was a lil uninspired. There was still minor progress, but the inner monologue of the daughter telling herself to stop if things progressed beyond masturbation is concerning. Makes me think the author wants to considerably slow down how far you get with her.

I'd also have liked to see more interaction/progression with jennifer?...elena's other friend.

I hope next update isn't just all about the chase to bring her back...i.e. no intimacy.

Maybe we need some mods, just like for Big Brother...haha

I think that it will be about the rings. I suspect he will chase her. She will dream and miss him more and more. She will explore her body and move forward in her sexuality. Perhaps explore with her friend. Daddy will have to decide between work and his love. Finally, they will be together and mistaken for married to get each other. That is how they will act and live. No more dating, just date nights as a couple in love.

Wow - this had quite an impact on me.

 

[thewhatever]

Like others I am a bit disappointed by day 13, not by the ending as Daughter will probably find a way to escape her mom and come back, but by the lack of a new sexual act.
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[kekzor]

Like others I am a bit disappointed by day 13, not by the ending as Daughter will probably find a way to escape her mom and come back, but by the lack of a new sexual act.
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Yeah I thought it was a missed opportunity when we saw D washing up after a "massage" to have her taste it, and then she'd take the office opportunity to taste is even more.

I'd also have liked to see more interaction/progression with jennifer?...elena's other friend.

Jennifer and Elena don't really do much for me, they look too young physically, but the more the merrier - especially since Elena is D's best friend. Georgina and Margo are more than welcome to join! I hope there's going to be a harem route eventually, it is quite possible to have open relationships without being a dishonest asshat - especially if you're great in bed.

 

[ras80]

love this laters update, i like that its not as fast as other VNs in getting into the sex part, not that i dont want there to be some but this keeps me on my seat alot more then other VNs have done.

 

[kekzor]

D is more in love with LOVE than she is with F ; F is more in love with LUST than he is with D.
Blame her? She wants warmth and attention. He's basically "middle-aged crazy, trying to prove he still can". He is failing his daughter and himself in the long run. Love her as a father and a friend. Get her out of the clutches of Rachel. Commendable.
Then use your influence over her to bang her? I'm glad that I don't "become" the MC in these games or I'd never play...

Agreed, besides the middle-aged crazy part. He got his girlfriend pregnant when he was a teenager, so he's at maximum 37 - the age where most men peak in the sexual marketplace, which would explain why most women in the game find him attractive.

 

[Bass_Legend]

D is more in love with LOVE than she is with F ; F is more in love with LUST than he is with D.
Blame her? She wants warmth and attention. He's basically "middle-aged crazy, trying to prove he still can". He is failing his daughter and himself in the long run. Love her as a father and a friend. Get her out of the clutches of Rachel. Commendable.
Then use your influence over her to bang her? I'm glad that I don't "become" the MC in these games or I'd never play...

It was daughters idea in the first place to become "fake" boyfriend and girlfriend. Then it was her idea that she wanted it to be real, regardless of confusing feelings or it being wrong. She loved the path it was going down, loved the kisses and cuddles and didnt want it to stop. She doesnt want to be with anyone else.

Is it wrong? Sure, why not. But lets say they work out and stay together for 30 years or whatever. Enjoy the relationship and after dad dies daughter moves on happy she had the time she did with her husband / father. Would it be "love" at that point? What is love?

Lets explore this further. You say F is a scumbag, should be looking out for Ds best interest, doesnt care about her, ect. So what if we get the news a few updates down the road that dad isnt really biodad. Would he still be a scumbag if the relationship continues? Why or why not? Was he a scumbag before, but now its not scummy? Its funny how one sentence, one piece of information can completely change perspectives and contexts. In actuality there relationship was the same as before, except for now its not considered taboo so he is not a scumbag.

Lets say you are 40 and fall in love with an 18 year old, and you have an 18 year old daughter. How much of a scumbag is that guy? How big of a difference is it really from dating your daughter instead of the 18 year old?

Whos the better dad. A dad who walked out on his daughter and wanted nothing to do with her, or a dad who let physical intimacy get involved after the daughter turned 18 when she was the one pushing it.

I am not trying to justify taboo or make excuses. But it doesnt sit right with me that you guys are saying "thats not love" and "theres no way it could ever end well".

 

[gramaton]

day 15 and we'll get the sex scene boys, i guarantie it

 

[Eobard Thawne]

So if Elena and Daughter is gone is there gonna be scenes with Jennifer in the next update?

 

[Walt Dee]

Personally I worry that the next few story updates will be something along the lines of,

D slowly realises she's been tricked but isn't allowed to contact F.
F chases after D but is prevented from seeing her by Rachel.
Elena try's to help but unsuccessfully.
Rachel pushes D onto Frank in an attempt to maybe force a marriage through.

If either D or Elena have any access to technology: Internet/Phone/Skype/text messaging, the word *will* get out. I hope Dad is at least tech-saavy enough to have Skype on his smart phone. And if he goes outside of his country he's probably going to have to have some sort of international something to receive calls, etc. (although he could always use the hotel's Wi-Fi.)

My worry comes in when some combination of the local police/Dad's country embassy/the local legal system comes into play. I don't believe for a minute that Rachel *could* even renounce D's citizenship even if she wanted to, and besides, was Rachel pissed off at the Dad, or the entire country?! And he's already proven she's a liar, so why would we believe anything she says on face-value?

So, Dad will have to:

1. Wait out the storm
2. Wait until those who had flights previously get first dibs on flying out
3. Fly overseas (presumably after packing one or more suitcases, and booking a hotel)
4. Get checked into a hotel on arrival
5. Find some way of locating Brad & Rachel (presumably they're in the online phone book with their address) or receiving word from either Elena or D, herself.
6. Assuming D is still a citizen, now of both countries, you'd probably want to talk to the embassy and hire a lawyer. Also, D is at the age of consent (I assume for Rachel & Brad's country) so there shouldn't be a custody hearing.
7. Hope & pray that neither D nor Elena spills the beans in some way. ("But Mom! I *love* him! He's *more* than a father to me! He's my boyfriend/true love!") That'd be a quick route to Dad wearing an orange jump suit and chains, only to be shanked in jail.
8. Have a police office/embassy flunky pay Rachel a visit and ask if there's a young woman, at the age of consent, a dual citizen of both countries, who was kidnapped across international lines and held against her will? They would *have* to produce the daughter, and as long as she doesn't completely flake out, they should release Daughter into Dad's care, or really, just plain release her, and take Rachel into custody for the above charges, and Brad for being an accessory.

The only problems that I see with this scenario are:

1. Daughter really did, through her Mother, renounce her citizenship.
2. 18 is nt the legal age of consent in that country.
3. Or, either Rachel or Brad have a muckitymuck benefactor who'll hire the best lawyers, etc. But, once D's released, what are the police going to do? Send her back with Rachel?! I don't think so!

Unless the devs cam pull a rabbit out of a hat. I highly doubt Daughter will be giving Dad any French kisses or hand jobs, or he frigging his little girl to orgasm until *at least* 0.15, or the very end of 0.14.

Now that I know that 0.13 was the end of a chapter, and 0.14 will be the beginning go a new one, I'm a little more accepting of the situation. But it most definitely didn't go the way I'd hoped.

 

[pinky]

i cant get past leon when f goes to the supremaekr

 

[Aitan_3]

I dont think anyone actually gives a shit about career paths. This game is called DMD not select one of three careers and wait months for them to be fleshed out. We already have more then enough branching options with harem vs pure dynamic. Dad is a corporate executive. If the next months are going to be fleshing out Dad being a freelance programmer and Dad being a doctor, that is probably the worst possible choice for this game. Like who actually gives half a shit what dads job is? Anyone?

Hopefully dots doesnt abandon the project if the career path development turns for the worst. But if he does, oh well. My life doesnt revolve around DMD just another failed TV show I got into pretty much.

It's not just about career path. It's about polishing the whole chapter 1. There were some paths that were abandoned (Martin's help to tackle Lucas for example), dialogues that has to be rewritten (Georgina at the cafeteria for example) and they need to be worked on. At a certain point a general revision was due. Now is the moment. Adding career paths is a bonus, if you like to see it that way.

 

[Gomly1980]

Now that I know that 0.13 was the end of a chapter, and 0.14 will be the beginning go a new one, I'm a little more accepting of the situation. But it most definitely didn't go the way I'd hoped.

You may need to read through some of Aitan's posts further back, 0.14 and the update after that and maybe more if they don't get it all done are just concentrating on career paths, polish and other things they want to get done.

Story content won't be for another few months.

 

[Aitan_3]

This update was a lil uninspired. There was still minor progress, but the inner monologue of the daughter telling herself to stop if things progressed beyond masturbation is concerning. Makes me think the author wants to considerably slow down how far you get with her.

I'd also have liked to see more interaction/progression with jennifer?...elena's other friend.

I hope next update isn't just all about the chase to bring her back...i.e. no intimacy.

Maybe we need some mods, just like for Big Brother...haha

You wanted more content with Jennifer? You mean the only girl still in dad's city, no matter which path player chose (Georgina might have left city for good if he rejected her)? Ohohoh.

That aside: daughter didn't think that MASTURBATION is where she sets the limit. She just thinks that there should be a limit. Genital sex would be most definetely crossing a line, but apart from that well... borders shift all the time.

 

[Gomly1980]

You wanted more content with Jennifer? You mean the only girl still in dad's city, no matter which path player chose (Georgina might have left city for good if he rejected her)? Ohohoh.

What kind of sick freak would reject Georgina?

Although now the people that are working on the game have the perfect opportunity to make this something truly special .... the daughter is out of the way, there is nothing to stop MC and Georgina eloping.

You know it makes sense.

Then Frank or whatever his name may be can carry on dating my daughter so the title is not a lie.

Everyone would be happy.

Well, i'd be happy.

 

[Aitan_3]

Simple you get 3 HJ's that is the same damn render each time. So only one in reality. 2 the daughter only kisses the dick. The way the game progress throughout up-to 0.12 i expected a BJ. Not a freaking cliffhanger. Then you have to add that the next few updates is for content that should've been done from the damn start. Not being updated for next 2 to 3 updates of hiatus on the ppl. And great that the daughter got her first orgasm. I just expected so much more.

I am actually irritated you are one of the ppl who pushed for this kind of ending for Chapter 1. This game is 100% about blue balling. For starters you go for an entire year of updates with zero sex until update 0.12 and if you do them you break your relationship with Daughter. You feel me? If any sex happens I expect it from the daughter. Not random ppl and getting cock blocked by daughter later.

Sorry but the game progress is horrible. I seriously doubt it will take only 2 updates to get the career choices put in. Look further back I speak about how coding wise you can't just implement something that major and think it can be done in 2 shots. Doesn't happen. Unless the dev actually has a separate build its not happening.

Also I am aware that ingame time has gone by the amount of months. Its actually 13 dates. Not 13 days like many now believe. I read closely to the dialogue so the fact that ingame time has progressed only a few months and that's all that the dev brought it infuriates me. Only good news I read is that Lucas gets kicked in the balls if you do defense classes.

Not to mention that you won't see Daughter and father action for many updates b/c I find it hard to believe that Father is somehow gonna magically appear in her city. Do you see where I am going? The game has excellent story telling to some degree but the fact that the daughter is clueless beyond reason for a 18yr old ticks me the most. No girl at 18 is that oblivious no matter what kind of upbringing you have.

It's been stated earlier that the dev probably only said the daughter is 18 due to legal reasons. That's most likely the case and would make sense if the daugher was below age. But no way in any shape or form would a girl be that oblivious to such stuff at age 18.

Just wanted to say that the day count is accurate, v.1e end on their 14th day together, the first 3 days happened over a two weeks period (they were weekends) and after that they stayed together the whole time, so in the end the whole story took less than a month to unravel till now. I am curious to know where did you get the impression that months passed instead. It would not make sense at all, since she is on summer vacation from school.

 

[Aitan_3]

When I had my first O when I trusted him....it was amazing. So I know how it must be for her...1000 more wonderful.

If I can say this, I am pretty proud that, for a change, an important turning point in an erotic game (closing a chapter, changing the rules, etc) coincided with a momentous achievent of the female character, not of the male one. I really wish more women could enjoy these sort of games and grow a personal investment in the story. Happy to see we succeeded with you!