this time I added more objects. not the easiest to edit her pose.
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Awesome.. one minor thing.. her thumb should touch the dick maybe..
If I was me I would bend her hand and or arm a bit and grasp the cock a little bit more for a proper HJ not just a touch.. make sure you have her hand selected (not arm, not big thumb) on parameters tab type grasp and from there if some fingers doesn't match you can bend them back, depending by the angle.. usually I'm trying to keep something like 90 between hand and dick in this case.
On Rochelle hair parameters or shaping.. (shitty hair to work with it aparently..) search for tail try to make it shorter and bend full I guess a bit to the left and maybe a bit backwards.. it looks like it's inside her body.. or it drops down in a straight line but her head it's bended to the left
If you try to make the tail shorter probably you'll loose that middle bump there..
Change her Bra and give her some earings.. she's wearing my mothers casual bra and earings but at the end of the day she's doing a gloryhole scene..
Sry mate.. started from a minor one.. hope you don't mind.. no offence..
But yeah.. great job!