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Alexishierro

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Just because the writing can be read, doesn't make it GOOD writing. He needs a writer because hes writing these stories like a chicken with its head cut off, willy nilly, spur of the moment crap. Dude probably doesnt know what hes going to do for the next pages, let alone the next chapter, until hes actually rendering it.
Well, this IS like porn movies, someone has stories, (drama like taboo of the 80s,or Mario Salierri movies)and someone are gonzo(like Rocco Siffredi movies or Realitykings site), only the pleasure of f... Hahahaha...Daval IS a little Rocco
 

fnnn90

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Someone to post this image at the beginning, where the same author admits who the mc of mt is, and with this it is confirmed that ntr was added to the story, there are several people saying that it was not ntr because David is not the mc and which is a story with several protagonists, etc, etc, but yes, it was because the story is presented from David's perspective, not from another character, so yes mt is the story of an MC who, overnight, Daval turned him into a cuckold and turned one of the FMC into a cheap whore 1711865226266.png
and strangely daval wonders why people doubt that david is the mc when he himself trampled on his own story
 

xXwankerXx

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together has had the most fans
That's more accurate, and in reality, it has more fans upset than pleased with Daval's story and the results of certain changes nobody informed them about. There's a poll on his SS page proving my point.

It looks like Lian is finally dominating Amanda
SN #11 ‐ Pages 109-128
Dayum, lil dude went to town on her sweet ass, but when the woman looks like Amanda, nobody can blame him for that. Daval did a damn good job, as always, with the sex scenes. Too bad he don't put as much effort and dedication into David's sex scenes in MT, but it don't really matter that much anymore... as long as my bois Liam and Daniel do their jobs pleasing their women as they should be, I don't give a fuck what happens in MT anymore, maybe just for the occasional laugh emoji or something.

Maybe Aaron is the one with the biggest cock after all, even if Luke isn't big they can always say "he got it from my side of the family" or some shit like that, I mean, Peter is clearly big and he's Sarah's uncle.
As funny as it may sound, you might be onto something there. After all, it's the shy, quiet ones that are said to be the biggest perverts and craziest sluts, so why not. But I guess most of us agree that a lil more 'spicing up' is needed again.:whistle:

I wonder if this guy, Aaron, will have a go at his momma's holes too, and if he does, I also wonder how good a job he'll do at that, cuz I personally am a quality-before-quantity kinda guy, so I'd rather have 4 or 5 well-written passionate or rough sex scenes than having at least twice as much boring ones, where both the woman and her partner look and sound bored asf and not into it at all.
 
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