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Alfster

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WOW, this is good, really, Lana. Instead of being excited, she seems to be scared or worried. ''Nice parting with the Lana of the past, who would be happy or at least wouldn't have that face.'' But why? It reminds me a bit of chapter 8, when Lana gives Alex sex for all the times she cheats on him with Daniel. Since she has a similar face.
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I think an interesting unknown is where is Daniel? He arranged to meet Lana somewhere and that's why Lana is worried. Or he's closer than she thinks.
Daniel is back in his room while that scene is happening, he invited Lana to meet him there.
 

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So, just a guess, as a result of being dissatisfied with Alex's mood, Lana will go see Daniel. Because Sofia's determined to get with Daniel, Sofia will spot Lana entering Daniel's room in that bunny costume, making her even more suspicious? I hope this turns out like the end of chapter 6, where they start having sex for the rest of the chapter, and chapter 10 in its entirety can be another night of all-out sex between Daniel and Lana.
 
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Why doesn't Lana catch Sofia in Daniel's room and kick her out of the room? Out of her shame, she leaves from there, and the chapter ends with a reproach between the two parties. But I prefer it to be a night of sex between the two parties in their house in chapter 10, except if Daval wants to throw a party in the rbunny costume that Lana is wearing. excuse my english!
 

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So, just a guess, as a result of being dissatisfied with Alex's mood, Lana will go see Daniel. Because Sofia's determined to get with Daniel, Sofia will spot Lana entering Daniel's room in that bunny costume, making her even more suspicious? I hope this turns out like the end of chapter 6, where they start having sex for the rest of the chapter, and chapter 10 in its entirety can be another night of all-out sex between Daniel and Lana.
Probably Lana will see Sofia in Daniel room trying to seduce him and going on jelaous rampage.Lana waited 20 min for Alex and Sofia probably go to Daniel room as soon as Lana leaves pool.
 

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Probably Lana will see Sofia in Daniel room trying to seduce him and going on jelaous rampage.Lana waited 20 min for Alex and Sofia probably go to Daniel room as soon as Lana leaves pool.
I think that's just as plausible. And Lana can enter the room in a jealous rage and reproach, as zorro stated, the both of them for what she thinks is going on between the two of them. Sofia can exhibit some shame, while also wondering to herself the reason Lana would show up to Daniel's room in the bunny costume--making her more suspicious, while also keeping her at arm's length. Sofia can either leave in shame, or sneakily stay behind to try and listen in on the following conversation between Daniel and Lana. Daniel uses Lana's jealousy once again to seduce her. Daniel and Lana have sex again.

I like it.
 

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ID #9 | Pages 111 - 130
Ask and ye shall receive. I thought I'd put an iota of my photoshop wizardry to use and translate the most recently submitted images of Immoral Desires 9. (Lucky for you guys, I have a Spanish background.) Pages 101-103 have the original dialogue, so I didn't do much, if anything, there. Pages 106 & 107 have a couple of bubbles with the original dialogue. But the rest is translated by yours truly. I also tinkered with the colors in order to create a bit more contrast and "pop." But enough shop talk, here it is for those of you who want it.

Pages 101-109:
thanks alot for the update!!! any chance for page 110 too? update before yours just went to page 109
 

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Hearing that Sofia is determined that nothing will stop her to be with Daniel tonight. from trile3 spoiler i would to ask you who's hearing? it's daniel? thank you for your spoiler.
for sakeyo your the best newbie in this forum, many thanks
 

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It's easy to pull on your pants like this (someone must call Guinness) when you can do it with just one click, and I guess there's a magic button for sex too. When one moment you are having sex, and the next, what do I know... you are washing the dishes. Of course with an erection. But I assume that the erection is also magical since no one can see it except visitors to this forum, and beyond. BTW... The scene on page 129 looks weird no matter how it looks.
 

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Again, at some point she will find out, Daval will run out of excuses sooner or later, now the question is... how will Daniel's react? how will he turn thing in his favor?

Also, at some point they will leave Martha's house, once they are back home they will have their guard down, a perfect chance for Sharon to find out about them.
 

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When I saw the previews, I thought the same thing--BS! There's no way h
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It's easy to pull on your pants when you can do it with just one click, and I guess there's a magic button for sex too. When one moment you are having sex, and the next, what do I know... you are washing the dishes. Of course with an erection. But I assume that the erection is also magical since no one can see it except visitors to this forum, and beyond. BTW... The scene on page 129 looks weird no matter how it looks.
When I saw the previews, I thought the same thing--BS! I thought that there would be no way he would be able to pull his pants up in time. I've worked on material where the inability to "pull one's pants up in time" affected the continuation of the story. Would it have been that difficult to have the same scene with his penis poking out from the top of his pants? I must admit that part was nonsensical.
 
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