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Donnie Brasco

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This is page 9 of part 10
If that's the case, then Sofia went out and left them or joined them, but she's not in the frame right now. Although I would not be surprised by the scenario, for example. The part when Lana enters Daniel's room is part of Daniel's dream since Daniel is in bed.
 

grk el grande

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There will be a way for Uncle Peter to stay, of course without having anything to do with Sara and Alice, it seems that he gained some fans because his way of behaving is similar to Daniel, he could be Aron's mentor and fuck with Sylvia, ? If David's mother appears, would Aron be interested in fucking her to get revenge?
 

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There will be a way for Uncle Peter to stay, of course without having anything to do with Sara and Alice, it seems that he gained some fans because his way of behaving is similar to Daniel, he could be Aron's mentor and fuck with Sylvia, ? If David's mother appears, would Aron be interested in fucking her to get revenge?
I want to see Uncle Peter fucking Sarah again while Alice does it with David at the same time that could be great, also how about Uncle Peter trying to convince Alice to bath him that would be funny to see lol imagine the awkward dialogues between them while David fucks Sarah in her room, Peter fucking with Sylvia is a must in some point and I hope the new blonde girl of the bathroom too.
 

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You know, even if there isn't a threesome, in a way Sofia already tasted Lana's pussy xD do you think she will mention it to Lana? because I'm sure Sofia will mention all the time she suspected something was wrong.
 

8TB

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You know, even if there isn't a threesome, in a way Sofia already tasted Lana's pussy xD do you think she will mention it to Lana? because I'm sure Sofia will mention all the time she suspected something was wrong.
I think so, too. I'm fairly confident that Sofia is going to mention what happened in Chapter 7, in Chapter 8 (their being gone for so long after Lana got upset) and Chapter 9 (the shopping mall, their half hour absence, as well as what she suspected when Lana and Daniel were sitting on the couch.)
 

zorro2000

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It is said that the blank page terrifies writers, but in literary writing, as for pornographic writing, writers underestimate the reader and choose the easier path that does not cost them difficulty in writing and thinking. I believe that Daval chose the easier path by making everyone have sex with everyone, as in the rest of his stories, and I do not know what happened in His head in order to spoil one of the best pornographic stories, and had it not been for the protest of the subscribers, I do not think he would have retracted his step. It is a translation from my original language, and I apologize for any misunderstanding.
 

8TB

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I want to know what you guys think of this proposed scenario, which recently occurred to me--i.e. the aftermath of Sofia's discovering Lana and Daniel's sexual relationship.

So there's this hentai manga titled, "Anekata" by Kokonoki Nao, that features a brother and his older sister. I don't know if many, or if any, of you know of it. It centers on a younger brother, Miyuki, being infatuated with his older sister, Makoto, who also happens to work as a teacher at his school. Even though the manga makes it a point to note that Miyuki is actually quite handsome and popular with the girls, he has eyes only for Makoto. He'd do things like masturbate to her, and ejaculate on her face while she's sleeping (that's how the first four pages start) as well as confess his love to her. They eventually start a sexual relationship. So what does this have to do with Immoral Desires? Well, in the second chapter of Anekata, Miyuki and Makoto's sexual relationship is discovered by Makoto's friend and colleague, Erika, who also happens to be a busty attractive woman who wears glasses (Sofia vibes.) Erika scolds Makota for a bit before having a conversation with her over drinks, which Erika had initially brought with her. Erika gets drunk and states that Miyuki is only interested in Makoto for sex because he's a hormonal teenager. Miyuki however rebuffs this, stating that he can only get erect for his sister (do you see where I'm going with this?) So Erika attempts to seduce Miyuki which is comedically played off in Miyuki's firm and frequent rejections. So Erika pulls out his penis, but it remains flacid despite her attempts at arousing Miyuki. Upset at her failed attempts, she pushes Makoto's head toward Miyuki's penis in order to put Miyuki's words to the test. As soon as his sister's skin touches his penis, Miyuki exhibits a full erection. Endeered by this, Makoto believing her brother's words about his being attracted to just her, Makoto gives him a blowjob even though Erika is right there. They then proceed to have sex literally on top of Erika. There are slight threesome vibes here, where Makoto bites down on Erika's pussy when her brother makes her cum, and Erika licking Makoto in the last panel. Erika passes out, and wakes up moments later to discover that Makoto and Miyuki are still having sex. In the chapter that follows, Erika becomes an active participant in keeping their secret, even preventing the principal from discovering their sexual relationship when Makoto and Miyuki are having sex in his office.

So my proposal is this: what if something similar happens in Immoral Desires 10? Sofia can express her shock and even scold them a bit. Daniel can then reveal to Sofia that he was aware of her and Martha's plan all along, but that it would never have worked because he has eyes only for his mother. But in this scenario, Daniel would be the one to suggest that Sofia give him a blowjob, like she tried to do in Chapter 8. Lana is against this, but Daniel asks her to "trust him." Sofia accepts the challenge and proceeds to give him a blowjob. Lana is visibly upset and jealous. From here, I can imagine one of two things happening: (1) Daniel loses his erection in Sofia's mouth, or (2) after a 30 minute flashforward, Daniel still has yet to cum. Daniel then boasts, "You see? If it's not my mom..." Sofia, incredulous, proposes that Lana gives him a blowjob to put Daniel's words to the test. Lana is adamant in her reluctance, especially since Sofia is there, but Daniel would then pull Lana towards his erection, shoving it in her mouth. Daniel immediately tells Lana that he's about to cum, and then proceeds to fill her mouth with his semen. A once jealous Lana, with Daniel's dick still in her mouth, wonders, "Were Daniel's words true? If it's not me..." Daniel and Lana would proceed to kiss passionately, and Sofia attempting to flee from the PDA, would trip and fall on top of the bed. Daniel can then push Lana down on to the bed, unaware of their surroundings, and proceed to fuck Lana right on top of Sofia.

I think this could work because it's a way to involve Sofia without really involving her. It would also present a clear rejection of Sofia, and by proxy, Martha, because Daniel would have proven that he can get off only to his mother. I also think that Sofia's being underneath them while Lana and Daniel are having sex can make it look like a threesome without it being a threesome. Seeing how passionate that Lana and Daniel are while having sex would discourage Sofia from pursuing Daniel any further and keep their secret (which is the same reason Erika from Anekata decided to keep Makoto and Miyuki's secret.)

Just an idea... it can be tweaked here or there.
 
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