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OBLIVION2388

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Uncle Peter has to go, stop making fools of yourself, I know you really like the cuckold, but if Daval has a little decency, Uncle Peter will leave. Leave your theories for other comics that Daval has planned, ahem, ema, Mr. Lenon.
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Uncle Peter just show up on the cafe and hes going to visit Sylvia in her clinic so we are going to keep seeing him no matter if you like or not :KEK:
 

aquilesjodoyo

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Maybe under Uncle Peter influence and knowing that Alice and David are out of the house Aaron is going to try to confort Sarah since she's very sad but when she feels better hes going to start to touch her body until he admits he saw her fucking David in his room, she will be in shocked and beg him to not tell anyone so he blackmails her sexually of course and she doesn't have other choice to accept his request while Uncle Peter watch close from the door.
You are a genius, that would be the best continuation for the story and without the theories that he is going to take revenge on David's mother or something like that, someday they will introduce us to his mother but for the moment with what you mentioned the story would advance without rushing things
 
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aquilesjodoyo

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CRAP CRAP and more CRAP
Ugly edits and weird translations.. can't even get Lana's name right (apparently her name translates into "WORK")
What did you expect? It's a translation from Russian made with Google Translate. They don't even bother to translate it themselves and that's why the image is in such poor quality, since Google Translate lowers the quality even more than the poor quality that the originals have on the Russian pages xd, I do the same to write because I don't speak English so I resort to Google Translate to answer or speak :D
At least today there are multiple AI to be able to translate comics decently in any language. I speak Spanish and my translations take the time to at least be able to deliver something decent
 
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What did you expect? It's a translation from Russian made with Google Translate. They don't even bother to translate it themselves and that's why the image is in such poor quality, since Google Translate lowers the quality even more than the poor quality that the originals have on the Russian pages xd, I do the same to write because I don't speak English so I resort to Google Translate to answer or speak :D
At least today there are multiple AI to be able to translate comics decently in any language. I speak Spanish and my translations take the time to at least be able to deliver something decent
It's obvious that whoever did the edits didn't use any AI. These are done manually and poorly.
Some of the sentences translated are awful (Google Translate isn't always perfect) and there's not even a hint of trying to correct them. You can also clearly see that they've manually and improperly used Photoshop to erase the text in the speech bubble, then tried to translate a sentence, copy it and pasted it into the bubble, and then repeat for the next sentence. The amount of time they've wasted to come up with this crap is unbelievable.
 
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daniboy85 work hard for this, he could have posted it in Russian. or not post anything, but there we have something to enjoy
It's obvious that whoever did the edits didn't use any AI. These are done manually and poorly.
Some of the sentences translated are awful (Google Translate isn't always perfect) and there's not even a hint of trying to correct them. You can also clearly see that they've manually and improperly used Photoshop to erase the text in the speech bubble, then tried to translate a sentence, copy it and pasted it into the bubble, and then repeat for the next sentence. The amount of time they've wasted to come up with this crap is unbelievable.

I hope you can see my point of view so that everyone here can benefit from good quality stories.
GL to all of you..
 

Alexishierro

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I would if I could, but I can't.
That's why we're all here, aren't we..?
and I will gladly wait for hq stories until they become available..

Also, you don't have to disrespect me, you don't have to cuss..
If you want it that way you're gonna get an earful, en Español, English, French, Italian, Greek, Urdu, Hindi, Bengali and Malay.. ok..?
I edit the post,cause I dont want disrespect you sorry for that
 
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Alexishierro

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It's obvious that whoever did the edits didn't use any AI. These are done manually and poorly.
Some of the sentences translated are awful (Google Translate isn't always perfect) and there's not even a hint of trying to correct them. You can also clearly see that they've manually and improperly used Photoshop to erase the text in the speech bubble, then tried to translate a sentence, copy it and pasted it into the bubble, and then repeat for the next sentence. The amount of time they've wasted to come up with this crap is unbelievable.

I hope you can see my point of view so that everyone here can benefit from good quality stories.
GL to all of you..
Yes. I can see yout point, everyone here IS waiting to view hq, for free. I can said the same about when people post a preview from X , but is a new image that IS welcome.Something happens with russian post, we have to thanks for at least the intention of giving us something new to entertain us until something of better quality comes out. I prefer hq, but meanwhile I Will enjoy this crap
 

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I edit the post,cause I dont want disrespect you sorry for that
I'm sorry for my outburst also. I've done the same.

All I want is for people to get along. Everyone has opinions, sometimes we all agree on something or sometimes we clash, that's fine. We can respect all opinions but we don't have fight and degrade each other over them.

GL
 

BiGd.

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Hey anyone know any website where I can change the language of dialogue written on it to English if so please tell
 
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8TB

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It's not clear to me either. MT has become more of a comic/comedian than a porn comic. I don't know why the author puts himself in a situation every now and then, where his characters explain some unexpected situation with some IQ=10 explanations, and those with IQ=9 buy it. Not to mention that Sarah was fucked for 6 chapters almost all in her house both day and night, and almost no one knows, and those who know haven't done anything, at least not yet. But while they figure out what to do, there is Sarah in a new embarrassment.
I'm pleasantly surprised that I was wrong, but I agree with you. I think Daval is going to have to make a decision one way or the other. Embrace uncle Peter, and risk alienating the David fans, or embrace the David, Sarah, Alice, Aaron, angle, and risk alienating the Peter fans. I think in his attempts to please everyone, he's fumbling plot points, and creating inclusions which make absolutely no sense, e.g. Alice and Silvia and Sarah foolishly having sex in cafe's store room. I also think he has to decide one way or the other the focus of this comic: does it happen to feature a "whorish," for lack of a better term, woman who happens to have a nephew, niece, son, husband, and an uncle. Or is it an incest fantasy, where the incestuous encounters serves as the driving force of this comic. No offense to Daval, but I wish the writing was better. I would naturally presume he's trying his best, but it would seem that his best is setting up conveniences with the subtlety of a porn film.
 
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I'm pleasantly surprised that I was wrong, but I agree with you. I think Daval is going to have to make a decision one way or the other. Embrace uncle Peter, and risk alienating the David fans, or embrace the David, Sarah, Alice, Aaron, angle, and risk alienating the Peter fans. I think in his attempts to please everyone, he's fumbling plot points, and creating inclusions which make absolutely no sense, e.g. Alice and Silvia and Sarah foolishly having sex in cafe's store room. I also think he has to decide one way or the other the focus of this comic: does it happen to feature a "whorish," for lack of a better term, woman who happens to have a nephew, niece, son, husband, and an uncle. Or is it an incest fantasy, where the incestuous encounters serves as the driving force of this comic. No offense to Daval, but I wish the writing was better. I would naturally presume he's trying his best, but it would seem that his best is setting up conveniences with the subtlety of a porn film.
Contrary to the norm in Daval's comics where the door is always open, where no one knocks before entering, where everyone is vaguely suspicious, in ID Sofia does not enter Daniel's room yet. So the situation with Sofia dragged on a bit, I think unnecessarily. It's not like we've been deprived of sex when it comes to Lana and Daniel. So if it is already certain that they will be caught by Sofia, I don't know why the delay. I'm writing this because I'm pretty sure that Daval is in contact with his subscribers and expects a solution and ideas from them. If you are a subscriber, you are not necessarily a good writer. So what he can expect are short-term solutions or what would be good right now in the current situation, but without a long-term plan. Or a long-term plan, but insufficiently or not at all elaborated. Maybe Daval's subscribers are different from the others, although I highly doubt it. I can read quite a lot of advice similar to the ones I have described with those authors with whom I am a subscriber or have been a subscriber.
 
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Contrary to the norm in Daval's comics where the door is always open, where no one knocks before entering, where everyone is vaguely suspicious, in ID Sofia does not enter Daniel's room yet. So the situation with Sofia dragged on a bit, I think unnecessarily. It's not like we've been deprived of sex when it comes to Lana and Daniel. So if it is already certain that they will be caught by Sofia, I don't know why the delay. I'm writing this because I'm pretty sure that Daval is in contact with his subscribers and expects a solution and ideas from them. If you are a subscriber, you are not necessarily a good writer. So what he can expect are short-term solutions or what would be good right now in the current situation, but without a long-term plan. Or a long-term plan, but insufficiently or not at all elaborated. Maybe Daval's subscribers are different from the others, although I highly doubt it. I can read quite a lot of advice similar to the ones I have described with those authors with whom I am a subscriber or have been a subscriber.
It would have been better to end Immoral Desires Chapter Nine with the illustrious photo from the Chapter Five cover. Just have her say, "Daniel..." and close the door behind her. But ending with Sofia catching them has now created this awkward pacing where there has to be constant panning and awareness to Sofia's location, not to mention the reason she hasn't entered for so long. And while I would never presume to know the content of Daval's intentions, I have a sneaking suspicion that he was going to allow for Sofia to get involved, but because of the backlash at the prospect of her getting involved, he's had to backtrack, a backtrack for which by the way, I'm confident he prepared. It honestly puzzles me: it's clear that the lion's share of ID fans want the sexual interactions to remain primarily between Daniel and Lana; it's clear that the lion's share of MT fans want the sexual interactions to remain primarily between Sarah, David, Alice, Aaron, and at the margin, Luke (and I'm personally okay with Peter); it's clear that SN fans want the sexual interactions to remain primarily between Liam, Amanda, Alexa, and Emma (with some wanting Emma to have sex with her father.) Yet Daval repeatedly attempts to introduce kinks which are akin to time bombs, surely to blow up in his face, because the audience at large have, for better or worse, conveyed the narratives for which they are willing to pay and consume.

And what puzzles me even more is that he has two aliases. Why not just keep the saucier kinks under the alias of DirDogma. No one gets upset with that content because there's an expectation, almost an establishment, about which kinks will be featured. And I'll hearken back to something you said, Donnie, in that inventing plots along the way just creates a restlessness for which Daval will repeatedly have to address and kowtow. There's a hentai artist who goes by "Boindo, a.k.a. Siberian Hahasky" who creates fairly vanilla mother/son incest manga. Judging by the art style, Boindo is clearly an alias of Kurosu Gatari, who creates NTR manga. He was doing fairly well disseminating both genres through both aliases until he angered his fanbase with a "kink" in the third chapter of Kaa-san Datte Onna Nandayo. Suffices to say, her son wasn't the only one involved. It almost comes off as a compulsion to throw a wrench in the mix, just because... and if I get started on the dialogue, we'll be here all evening. I don't know, I don't know when, but I may take extended break from all this, like I used to, and come back when 50-60 pages have been leaked or produced.
 

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It would have been better to end Immoral Desires Chapter Nine with the illustrious photo from the Chapter Five cover. Just have her say, "Daniel..." and close the door behind her. But ending with Sofia catching them has now created this awkward pacing where there has to be constant panning and awareness to Sofia's location, not to mention the reason she hasn't entered for so long. And while I would never presume to know the content of Daval's intentions, I have a sneaking suspicion that he was going to allow for Sofia to get involved, but because of the backlash at the prospect of her getting involved, he's had to backtrack, a backtrack for which by the way, I'm confident he prepared. It honestly puzzles me: it's clear that the lion's share of ID fans want the sexual interactions to remain primarily between Daniel and Lana; it's clear that the lion's share of MT fans want the sexual interactions to remain primarily between Sarah, David, Alice, Aaron, and at the margin, Luke (and I'm personally okay with Peter); it's clear that SN fans want the sexual interactions to remain primarily between Liam, Amanda, Alexa, and Emma (with some wanting Emma to have sex with her father.) Yet Daval repeatedly attempts to introduce kinks which are akin to time bombs, surely to blow up in his face, because the audience at large have, for better or worse, conveyed the narratives for which they are willing to pay and consume.

And what puzzles me even more is that he has two aliases. Why not just keep the saucier kinks under the alias of DirDogma. No one gets upset with that content because there's an expectation, almost an establishment, about which kinks will be featured. And I'll hearken back to something you said, Donnie, in that inventing plots along the way just creates a restlessness for which Daval will repeatedly have to address and kowtow. There's a hentai artist who goes by "Boindo, a.k.a. Siberian Hahasky" who creates fairly vanilla mother/son incest manga. Judging by the art style, Boindo is clearly an alias of Kurosu Gatari, who creates NTR manga. He was doing fairly well disseminating both genres through both aliases until he angered his fanbase with a "kink" in the third chapter of Kaa-san Datte Onna Nandayo. Suffices to say, her son wasn't the only one involved. It almost comes off as a compulsion to throw a wrench in the mix, just because... and if I get started on the dialogue, we'll be here all evening. I don't know, I don't know when, but I may take extended break from all this, like I used to, and come back when 50-60 pages have been leaked or produced.
I agree with everything you said. I think it's time for SN to end it. I know that quite a few users can't wait for anal sex to happen eventually, which is OK in a way. However, when it comes to anal sex with Emma, I'm pretty sure it's the result of SN being revived. With the current developments in SN, and I don't see any indication that anything will get complicated other than what is currently being offered and that has been going on for the last few months.
 
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so if david and alice moved to the motel to develop them, and silvia's purpose is for uncle piter to fuck her and to please piter's fans, that would leave sara with luke and aron in the house, but if luke gets job? Would that leave Aron alone with Sara?
 
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