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Mekalam

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It's not that the sex scenes in Chapter Four aren't good, as the first scene where they have sex on top of the stairs is an extension of Chapter Three, but it's still my impression to this day that chapter excluding the scene I just mentioned may have been an attempt to ingratiate Daniel's becoming a cuckold with the audience. First it was with his getting turned on watching his mother get it on with his Dad, which by this point of the series, Daniel wouldn't even indulge, and his mentioning how the neighbors want a shot at her. Even though the art is good, the dialogue is gawd awful, which is the reason I rank it so low on my list.



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To be fair, I started with Chapter Four. I've admitted that had I started the series with the first chapter, I may have joined in the backlash that was uncle Peter's inclusion. Maybe not as much, since I do like the Uncle-Niece pairing in incest. For example, Trophy Mom by Y3DF had a fairly vanilla mother-son pairing until it's fourth chapter (ironic, hun?) where NTR was introduced when NTR was introduced with the mother's eldest son. Even though it was still incest, I still dislike that chapter. So, I understand well those who dislike Peter and his inclusion into Madness Together. But for me, adult incestuous pairings is rather rare, so it was nice to see a niece who already has a family of her own get it on with her uncle. If I have one criticism of their encounter, it would be that he berates her in Chapter Six. I didn't like part much.
exactly..that berates was not NECESSARY..
 
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that foursome wont end huh
It's simply because it is more easy or relatively easy continue to make sex pose scene than make scenes afterwards with some coherent plot. And yet you must make certain number of pages monthly. It's same reason why Sofia didn't caught Lana and Daniel yet. Lack of ideas and you are expected to deliver as much as you claim to deliver. Result is obvious in those last SN pictures we can see. It doesn't look very chronological at first
 
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Aizen sosuke _9917

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It's simply because it is more easy or relatively easy continue to make sex pose scene than make scenes afterwards with some coherent plot. And yet you must make certain number of pages monthly. It's same reason why Sofia didn't caught Lana and Daniel yet. Lack of ideas and you are expected to deliver as much as you claim to deliver. Result is obvious in those last SN pictures we can see. It doesn't look very chronological at first
I've observed that Plot is going very slow in SN and ID (Around no new stories or interaction) but MT plot is going good
 

Aizen sosuke _9917

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Question of the century who is better Daval or Pegasus in following categories
1- Plot and story
2- Characters (Hot and interesting)
3- Sex Scenes (How much do you enjoy them)
4- World building (maybe not important )
5 - Mini comics
6- Dialogues and Art style
7- Best Main character from both
8- Best milf (and female) from both

*everyone try to answer so that we can have various views and opinions of people
 
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Question of the century who is better Daval or Pegasus in following categories
1- Plot and story
2- Characters (Hot and interesting)
3- Sex Scenes (How much do you enjoy them)
4- World building (maybe not important )
5 - Mini comics
6- Dialogues and Art style
7- Best Main character from both
8- Best milf (and female) from both

*everyone try to answer so that we can have various views and opinions of people
I'm not very familar with Pegasus Smith's works, being aware of just "Lost in the Woods" "Au Naturel" and "Holiday Blues." I didn't like the first two very much, as I immediately stopped reading them after a few glimpses. So, I'll try to answer this to the best of my ability.

1. If I had to choose, I would say Daval. Though not by much. Few 3D artists actually put much consideration in providing a coherent plot. They rely far too much on the popularity of their character designs.

2. Daval, once again. But again, not by much. Most of these stories, especially the ones which focus on incest, usually present a frustrated housewife using her resentment over "lack of sex" to justify cheating on her husband. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice and often effective formula. And while I'm not one to state that "different" is necessarily better, as different can also present ridiculous and often unrealistic narratives (e.g. going to a nude resort, and find immediate comfort in both cheating and swinging) few artists actually break the mold and approach these dynamics with fresh perspectives. It's difficult to come up with new ideas with which to begin, so I don't place much blame on them. And if it ain't broke, why fix it?

3. Daval for sure. To Daval's credit, he knows how to create designs at incredible angles. I definitely enjoy the bird's eye view when the female characters are being penetrated doggystyle. It would also appear Daval has a proclivity towards featuring this angle as well.

4. I would assume Pegasus Smith. There isn't much world building in Daval's works. There are very few if any crossovers in his works. If I remember correctly, David from MT appears in Satisfying Needs chapter six, Hazel Harris from WYFP appears in VIP Madness Together chapter three, and Kiara from ID possibly appears in Satisfying Needs chapter eight (as the blonde girl who approaches Liam at the pool bears an uncanny resemblance to Kiara.) There may be more, but each story's "world" appears to be self-contained. ID pretty much centers on the their home, the supermarket, and Martha's House; VIP Madness Together centers on their home, the cafe, and the grungy motel; and SN centers on their home, and just a bunch of random locations.

5. I'm unaware of the Pegasus's Smiths mini comics; the ones I've read from Daval aren't to my liking, so it's a toss up.

6. This is a tough one. Daval loses in dialogue, easily. As far as art style, I do credit Pegasus for using realistic proportions. However, I enjoy Daval's character designs more, so I'll have to give that one to Daval.

7. Daniel.

8. Lana.
 
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Aizen sosuke _9917

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I'm not very familar with Pegasus Smith's works, being aware of just "Lost in the Woods" "Au Naturel" and "Holiday Blues." I didn't like the first two very much, as I immediately stopped reading them after a few glimpses. So, I'll try to answer this to the best of my ability.

1. If I had to choose, I would say Daval. Though not by much. Few 3D artists actually put much consideration in providing a coherent plot. They rely far too much on the popularity of their character designs.

2. Daval, once again. But again, not by much. Most of these stories, especially the ones which focus on incest, usually present a frustrated housewife using her resentment over "lack of sex" to justify cheating on her husband. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice and often effective formula. And while I'm not one to state that "different" is necessarily better, as different can also present ridiculous and often unrealistic narratives (e.g. going to a nude resort, and find immediate comfort in both cheating and swinging) few artists actually break the mold and approach these dynamics with fresh perspectives. It's difficult to come up with new ideas with which to begin, so I don't place much blame on them. And if it ain't broke, why fix it?

3. Daval for sure. To Daval's credit, he knows how to create designs at incredible angles. I definitely enjoy the bird's eye view when the female characters are being penetrated doggystyle. It would also appear Daval has a proclivity towards featuring this angle as well.

4. I would assume Pegasus Smith. There isn't much world building in Daval's works. There are very few if any crossovers in his works. If I remember correctly, David from MT appears in Satisfying Needs chapter six, Hazel Harris from WYFP appears in VIP Madness Together chapter three, and Kiara from ID possibly appears in Satisfying Needs chapter eight (as the blonde girl who approaches Liam at the pool bears an uncanny resemblance to Kiara.) There may be more, but each story's "world" appears to be self-contained. ID pretty much centers on the their home, the supermarket, and Martha's House; VIP Madness Together centers on their home, the cafe, and the grungy motel; and SN centers on their home, and just a bunch of random locations.

5. I'm unaware of the Pegasus's Smiths mini comics; the ones I've read from Daval aren't to my liking, so it's a toss up.

6. This is a tough one. Daval loses in dialogue, easily. As far as art style, I do credit Pegasus for using realistic proportions. However, I enjoy Daval's character designs more, so I'll have to give that one to Daval.

7. Daniel.

8. Lana.
Thanks for the effort you put into that .

(1-2)- Well you are probably right about plot (lust of sex = incest ) but what matters is how they will get along (that's pretty much what I think)

4- There aren't as many crossover in Pegasus but there are vast amount of characters and interaction between them

5- Some Pegasus mini comics are (The gift , Timmy in space but you need to watch all of Pegasus work to understand them). Also daval mini comics are better like (unexpected moments and deep exploration) So for this Daval >= Pegasus

7- Don't have any specific one , all are great for me

8- You are 1000% right about that (Lana is just GOAT fr )

*Lastly you should read au natural for sure and others are your choice (not sponsoring Pegasus smith) just recommending it's masterpiece
 
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Thanks for the effort you put into that .

(1-2)- Well you are probably right about plot (lust of sex = incest ) but what matters is how they will get along (that's pretty much what I think)

4- There aren't as many crossover in Pegasus but there are vast amount of characters and interaction between them

5- Some Pegasus mini comics are (The gift , Timmy in space but you need to watch all of Pegasus work to understand them). Also daval mini comics are better like (unexpected moments and deep exploration) So for this Daval >= Pegasus

7- Don't have any specific one , all are great for me

8- You are 1000% right about that (Lana is just GOAT fr )

*Lastly you should read au natural for sure and others are your choice (not sponsoring Pegasus smith) just recommending it's masterpiece
1-2. I agree.

3. What about 3?

4. When I think about world building, I think about Lord of the Rings, and Game of Thrones, or even One Piece. If there a bunch of characters at a single or few locations, I don't know if I'd be on board with calling that world building.

5. Those were to my disliking, not because they were not good in and of themselves, but I don't like to mix the pleasure I find in just two people having sex, and an incestuous interaction. Seeing Amanda feature in works where she's having sex with a nephew, a satyr god, and her son poisons the well for me. Even though Daval says those mini comics aren't "canon," which to me is a bunch of bologna as I would assume he was having his cake and eating it, too, I tend to pigeonhole the appeal of female characters. And I have already in my mind assigned Amanda's sex appeal in her being a mother.

6. What about 6?

7. Fair enough.

8. Lana, for me, is Daval's most attractive MILF. As I pointed out in my list, Lana can pull of any look. Though, Sarah is not to be overlooked.

I do not bear interest in reading Au Naturel because I don't like swinging and gangbangs, especially in incest works. Call me a bleeding heart, but I like when the sex has meaning. Frivolous and casual sex are not cup of tea.
 
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