Comics Collection Pinup Daval3D Collection [2024-10-10] [Daval3D]

[Alfster]

Wait, Sofia wear glasses? I think I never noticed them before, makes no sense they appear now when Sofia already know the truth, Daniel will probably try to convince her she dreamed about it.

Sofia won't be able to see what they are doing without her glasses. When she comes back with them Lana will be dressed again.

 

[Skiltllet]

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I think it's a good thing they're leaving that place, there are many more places out there to explore where better plots can be created. Daval's little problem is that he works on too many stories at once and becomes overwhelmed. Maybe taking the characters to other topics will help him get more inspiration.

 

[RawDogger9]

I can't watch the pics in flow. Nd app to help with that.

 

[bnxkill]

 

[_OBLIVION_]

I think it's a good thing they're leaving that place, there are many more places out there to explore where better plots can be created. Daval's little problem is that he works on too many stories at once and becomes overwhelmed. Maybe taking the characters to other topics will help him get more inspiration.

"Maybe taking the characters to other topics will help him get more inspiration." Daval better get out of Daniel and Lana bubble and utilize the other females on different places doing their own SS like he did with Emma and her dad in SN...

 

[Travaruz]

I think it's a good thing they're leaving that place, there are many more places out there to explore where better plots can be created. Daval's little problem is that he works on too many stories at once and becomes overwhelmed. Maybe taking the characters to other topics will help him get more inspiration.

His problem is also that he’s not able to end the story as well, he’s pumping out more chapters one after another even though sometimes it would be for the best to just finish the series and move on to another project

 

[Travaruz]

That’s why i hope that Peter’s comics would be a one time thing, meaning one issue. If not it could end up just like SN stretched all over the place with seemingly no ending, seriously tho someone put it out of its misery finally. And i do not think Peter needs own series at least not before Daval finishes already established stories from holy trinity (ID,MT,SN).

 

[_OBLIVION_]

His problem is also that he’s not able to end the story as well, he’s pumping out more chapters one after another even though sometimes it would be for the best to just finish the series and move on to another project

Don't forget his monotony thats the main problem, another project like spin off with Sofia Martha Rose Sharon etc would be great.

 

[Travaruz]

Don't forget his monotony thats the main problem, another project like spin off with Sofia Martha Rose Sharon etc would be great.

Yeah but if for example Rose would be given more spotlight you’d have people losing their shit over Lana since she’s Daval’s poster boy

 

[Skiltllet]

"Maybe taking the characters to other topics will help him get more inspiration." Daval better get out of Daniel and Lana bubble and utilize the other females on different places doing their own SS like he did with Emma and her dad in SN...

I like the idea that each woman gets her share, even if it's not from Daniel. But I feel that Daval's problem is that, he creates so many stories and possibilities in one that he doesn't even know what he's doing, and he just lets us see how he wastes the potential of other characters. Especially considering that Daval works on 3 different stories at the same time.

On a personal level, I think the best solution is for Daval to take a breather and then deal with all the characters he has in an unused story. That is, “Immoral Desires.” What to do if we don’t want to pair Sofia with Daniel? Easy: we pair her again with Martha’s nephew’s friend, and voila, we have a separate story that doesn’t include Daniel or Lana. The same can be done with Martha and her husband’s nephew. As stated in the first chapter, Martha’s husband lets her fuck with other people, which opens up a wider range of possibilities than with Sofia, with other types of stories, such as gang bang, interracial, etc. Then there’s Lana’s friend, Rosa, who also mentioned that she has a somewhat lazy son, so maybe seeing a new couple would be refreshing. Or Daniel’s cousin and her friend, who could also have their own separate story, venturing into the world of adult stars. Something like an Onlyfans, where someone from their school or community discovers them and blackmails them. There are a lot of interesting possibilities without using Daniel and Lana. I mean, the story is called Immoral Desires, not Daniel and Lana. If people don't want that relationship changed, that's fine, after all, ID has an even bigger cast of characters to explore. One thing that could happen is Daval pauses or ends Daniel and Lana's story, and lets other characters take center stage. That way, it doesn't hurt Daniel and Lana's story, but it explores other possibilities and no one feels like a character has been wasted.

 

[_OBLIVION_]

Yeah but if for example Rose would be given more spotlight you’d have people losing their shit over Lana since she’s Daval’s poster boy

That's why I said spin off because hes afraid to do it in the main comic, such a waste.

 

[Travaruz]

I like the idea that each woman gets her share, even if it's not from Daniel. But I feel that Daval's problem is that, he creates so many stories and possibilities in one that he doesn't even know what he's doing, and he just lets us see how he wastes the potential of other characters. Especially considering that Daval works on 3 different stories at the same time.

On a personal level, I think the best solution is for Daval to take a breather and then deal with all the characters he has in an unused story. That is, “Immoral Desires.” What to do if we don’t want to pair Sofia with Daniel? Easy: we pair her again with Martha’s nephew’s friend, and voila, we have a separate story that doesn’t include Daniel or Lana. The same can be done with Martha and her husband’s nephew. As stated in the first chapter, Martha’s husband lets her fuck with other people, which opens up a wider range of possibilities than with Sofia, with other types of stories, such as gang bang, interracial, etc. Then there’s Lana’s friend, Rosa, who also mentioned that she has a somewhat lazy son, so maybe seeing a new couple would be refreshing. Or Daniel’s cousin and her friend, who could also have their own separate story, venturing into the world of adult stars. Something like an Onlyfans, where someone from their school or community discovers them and blackmails them. There are a lot of interesting possibilities without using Daniel and Lana. I mean, the story is called Immoral Desires, not Daniel and Lana. If people don't want that relationship changed, that's fine, after all, ID has an even bigger cast of characters to explore. One thing that could happen is Daval pauses or ends Daniel and Lana's story, and lets other characters take center stage. That way, it doesn't hurt Daniel and Lana's story, but it explores other possibilities and no one feels like a character has been wasted.

Sounds interesting, good touch up could also be that not every story needs to be incest related, for example Kiara from ID could have a storytime about bullying some younger guy at school and things turn sexual, or maybe her getting wasted at the party she mentioned, Cop approaches her cuz she’s young and she promises to do “something“ that’ll change his mind, she seems like the type of girl that would hookup with older guys, maybe even like babysitter cheats with husband storyline

 

[_OBLIVION_]

I like the idea that each woman gets her share, even if it's not from Daniel. But I feel that Daval's problem is that, he creates so many stories and possibilities in one that he doesn't even know what he's doing, and he just lets us see how he wastes the potential of other characters. Especially considering that Daval works on 3 different stories at the same time.

On a personal level, I think the best solution is for Daval to take a breather and then deal with all the characters he has in an unused story. That is, “Immoral Desires.” What to do if we don’t want to pair Sofia with Daniel? Easy: we pair her again with Martha’s nephew’s friend, and voila, we have a separate story that doesn’t include Daniel or Lana. The same can be done with Martha and her husband’s nephew. As stated in the first chapter, Martha’s husband lets her fuck with other people, which opens up a wider range of possibilities than with Sofia, with other types of stories, such as gang bang, interracial, etc. Then there’s Lana’s friend, Rosa, who also mentioned that she has a somewhat lazy son, so maybe seeing a new couple would be refreshing. Or Daniel’s cousin and her friend, who could also have their own separate story, venturing into the world of adult stars. Something like an Onlyfans, where someone from their school or community discovers them and blackmails them. There are a lot of interesting possibilities without using Daniel and Lana. I mean, the story is called Immoral Desires, not Daniel and Lana. If people don't want that relationship changed, that's fine, after all, ID has an even bigger cast of characters to explore. One thing that could happen is Daval pauses or ends Daniel and Lana's story, and lets other characters take center stage. That way, it doesn't hurt Daniel and Lana's story, but it explores other possibilities and no one feels like a character has been wasted.

You absolutely get it , separate stories involving Sofia Martha Rose Sharon and her friend that doesn't involve entitled piece of shit Daniel would be so refreshing, I like your ideas to create different plots to each girl using what we know about them like Martha sex life or Rose and her son, is sad to see how he waste them and I'm not going to get tired saying it no matter what.

 

[_OBLIVION_]

Sounds interesting, good touch up could also be that not every story needs to be incest related, for example Kiara from ID could have a storytime about bullying some younger guy at school and things turn sexual, or maybe her getting wasted at the party she mentioned, Cop approaches her cuz she’s young and she promises to do “something“ that’ll change his mind, she seems like the type of girl that would hookup with older guys, maybe even like babysitter cheats with husband storyline

Yeah create different plots utilizing the little background/information we know about each girl imagine the unique plots that would be so creative and fun to see while Daniel and Lana stay in their monotone business.

 

[Skiltllet]

You absolutely get it , separate stories involving Sofia Martha Rose Sharon and her friend that doesn't involve entitled piece of shit Daniel would be so refreshing, I like your ideas to create different plots to each girl using what we know about them like Martha sex life or Rose and her son, is sad to see how he waste them and I'm not going to get tired saying it no matter what.

The truth is that it is not complicated at all. It's obvious that some Daval subscribers feel a fondness for Daniel and Lana, even I do. But, as I said, there is no need to touch Daniel and Lana's story, which can give them momentary closure; i.e., maybe a chapter or two. It does work. Then, if it continues to work, another character can be used, maybe a Martha chapter with a BBC and then a Sofia chapter with that shota guy from the first chapter. We could also see Daniel's cousin with a nerdy boy from her school who finds a way to redeem her, or how her husband's nephew's relationship with Martha herself began. Or even use Rosa with her son. It's not very usual to find Latina milfs in this kind of stories. Maybe a story in which Rosa's son's friend fucks her. There are still many topics to explore.
After all, as I said, the story is called Immoral Desires, not Immoral Desires between Lana and Daniel. Even these changes have been seen in movies and series, such as The Walking Dead or Dragon Ball. Where not necessarily the series is named after the "Protagonist", which allows you to see different points of view, which I think is what is needed with Daval's material.

Sounds interesting, good touch up could also be that not every story needs to be incest related, for example Kiara from ID could have a storytime about bullying some younger guy at school and things turn sexual, or maybe her getting wasted at the party she mentioned, Cop approaches her cuz she’s young and she promises to do “something“ that’ll change his mind, she seems like the type of girl that would hookup with older guys, maybe even like babysitter cheats with husband storyline

Yes, as I mentioned, almost all of Daval's stories have a very large repertoire from which much can be drawn, without it necessarily being incest or affecting Daniel and Lana's relationship. I say a momentary break from seeing Daniel as the main character, and maybe a little taste of other characters will encourage more people to check them out.

 

[Dustellar]

Sofia won't be able to see what they are doing without her glasses. When she comes back with them Lana will be dressed again.

That's what I'm saying, if Sofia already know the secret, why bother with the glasses excuse? I feel Daval regrets the whole event and will try to go back to the previous state, with Sofia thinking that she dreamed about Daniel and Lana having sex, in that case the glasses excuse makes more sense for Sofia, would make a lot more sense for Alex, Martha or someone else.

 

[Travaruz]

That's what I'm saying, if Sofia already know the secret, why bother with the glasses excuse? I feel Daval regrets the whole event and will try to go back to the previous state, with Sofia thinking that she dreamed about Daniel and Lana having sex, in that case the glasses excuse makes more sense for Sofia, would make a lot more sense for Alex, Martha or someone else.

Same reason why he made Lana forget it all due to alcohol, he wants to stretch it all over the month’s subscription as much as possible and only deliver it when there’s no where else to run with story

 

[sstrangemd]

But, as I said, there is no need to touch Daniel and Lana's story, which can give them momentary closure; i.e., maybe a chapter or two. It does work. Then, if it continues to work, another character can be used

This is the exact problem I have with Daval as a creator; dragging shit out instead of just ending stuff and moving on. Imo giving these random characters screen time in a story that's pretty much been completely explored is the problem. People rightfully complain about him missing deadlines, SN being boring and dragged out, ID being same-y, etc. This will only exacerbate the issue. SN was about Amanda and Liam, then when that got boring that one-off lady whose name I forget hung out for a chapter, then Alexa showed up, then when that got boring Alexa became the main character, Emma started showing up more and then when that got boring the dad came in. It's the same thing over and over again. To me that seems like he's scraping the bottom of the barrel, and comes off more as desperate rather than creative.

 

[Dustellar]

I insist that, since this comic is called "Immoral Desired" it should include more than one couple, Daval will never make Daniel fuck Sofia or Martha because he preferred to push the whole romantic angle and that's fine too (I still think that harem and romance can coexist) but Sofia, Martha and Rosa are being wasted, Martha relationship with her nephew is was started the corruption of Lana, I think now it should be the other way around and all her friends should be corrupted by Lana actions with Daniel... we could have a mini-story of Sofia fucking her dad, Martha fucking her son, Rosa fucking a brother, something! because even if Daniel and Lana are amazing as couple, how long can it last without turning boring? we got 11 issues of just Daniel and Lana, will Daval reconsider it later and make Daniel at least fuck his cousin, aunt, grandma?

 

[_OBLIVION_]

I insist that, since this comic is called "Immoral Desired" it should include more than one couple, Daval will never make Daniel fuck Sofia or Martha because he preferred to push the whole romantic angle and that's fine too (I still think that harem and romance can coexist) but Sofia, Martha and Rosa are being wasted, Martha relationship with her nephew is was started the corruption of Lana, I think now it should be the other way around and all her friends should be corrupted by Lana actions with Daniel... we could have a mini-story of Sofia fucking her dad, Martha fucking her son, Rosa fucking a brother, something! because even if Daniel and Lana are amazing as couple, how long can it last without turning boring? we got 11 issues of just Daniel and Lana, will Daval reconsider it later and make Daniel at least fuck his cousin, aunt, grandma?

You are finally opening your eyes that's surprising...