Wouldn’t be the first time daval contradicted himself,
Fair enough.
i mean logic is not really a thing or the reason why people read these type of stories to begin with
I never suggested that it was. But proposing scenarios just for the sake of proposing scenarios without much if any consideration to what's happened before not only makes no sense but also isn't the reason people read this type of material, either. What if I were to suggest a scenario where Lana gets her nipples and clitoris pierced, gets a sleeve tattoo, dyes her hair to a midtone saffron, and has Daniel fist her in her ass, while she straddles and mounts a puppy they just bought?
How does the scenario you described make any more sense than mine? We know in chapter 8, Daniel refused a blowjob from Sofia because he was upset that his mother was having sex with his father. We knew that the only reason he even touched Sofia was to make his mother jealous. We know that Lana and Sofia are friends. With all that under consideration, how would it make sense that Sofia would blackmail Lana and Daniel, because apparently Daniel's dick is more important to Sofia than Lana's friendship, have sex with Daniel and become the priority of all his attention because Sofia is without question more attractive than Lana, and then drive Lana into the arms of someone else's son, because it was so easy to get her to accept a physical relationship with her own son, just because...?
plus after this jealous arc or call it what you will, it could strengthen their relationship since they would come back to each other cuz they’re obviously the endgame whatever happens along the way, it’s only a matter of good writing, it would be a change of pace,
It wouldn't be a "change of pace;" It would just be a
change that serves as a large "F You" to everything that has happened up to this point. Why not just come out and state, "I personally think the mother/son angle in
Immoral Desires has ran its course, and I'd like to see Lana and Daniel have different sexual partners?" Why attempt to shoehorn nonsensical scenarios?
now with Lana openly expressing her feelings and them being caught the only things to come are like dad finding out or sum butt stuff etc. but nothing of major importance.
Because Lana can always fall back on the fact that she's drunk. Or Daval can have Lana completely submit to Daniel. If the covers are any indication of what's to come, then on the Chapter 9 cover, we see Lana take off her ring. I can see Daval dragging this on for a few more chapters. And when Lana and Daniel have ran their course, the popularity of which after 10 chapters, doesn't seem to be dying down, then why not just end the story? Why have them have sex with others? This is no indictment on your personal preferences, but more so with Daval's technique of inventing stories along the way. At a certain point, the female characters become nothing more than pornstar facsimiles who have sex just for the sake of having sex.
