All the new versions look really good, only minor things like why didn't you use a tied up hairstyle for the first girl and not kept the second girl in a dress? I haven't played your game so I am not familiar with their personalities but to me they kind of conflict in a way.
I am a bit of a lighting noob- are mesh lights just meshes that have emissive lighting? And what is the point of adding a light behind the character if the renderer does not pick it up? Should I create these lights by scratch, or is there content available I could use for this purpose?
Love the Daz conversions, but then from what I understand of HS it's only advantage is it's simplicity. That said, I don't play male MC games, so my opinion for your game is irrelevant. It may be better just to continue using HS until you finish that game, then start a new one in Daz.
Can be yes, adding the light behind the character can highlight the shoulders, top of the head etc to help highlight them better.
A mix of Megan Fox and the heroine of the game "Fashion Business" not bad
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