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Wish there were more women like that.
Wish there were more women like that.
2, but 3 has more of that "old polaroid in a shoebox" look.So what do you all think, what one looks more realistic?
Number 1
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Maybe more darker shadows needed.
I prefer number 1 because of the softer lighting - I don't know the scene. If she is being filmed with a camera with a light on, then the others might be more realistic.So what do you all think, what one looks more realistic?
Number 1
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Number 2
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Number 3
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Maybe more darker shadows needed.
Don't let the comments slow ya down. Put it out there and work off the comments for tips, and ideas. That's where I get info for possible improvements, and of course a shitload of suggestions. There are critics of every thing just don't let them bug ya, and ignore the shit heads.I have now officially finished working on my first game, "A Date With Emily" It feels pretty surreal to actually be done. Now I'm going to playtest it a few times with my girlfriend and if nothing unexpected happens, I'm going to release the game here either on Tuesday or Wednesday. I'm so excited to get it out into the world, I hope that it proves to be an enjoyable experience for at least some people. But if it gets destroyed in the comments then oh well, at least I'll know what to improve when working on my second game
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I think this is my favorite girl so far, definitely my favorite nudes. I like your older alt teen girls in general, which makes sense as I was an edgy goth raver in my own late teens/early twenties.What could be a better motif for the last picture in this series than Miriam in a classic pin-up pose?
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The render is great.any ideas on how i could improve this render? pls let me know
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thx for the feedback! maybe next time... XDThe render is great.
I'd prefere to see this girl in glamorous jeans in the car of a fat, bald sugar daddy. Not axe and shield. But that's my fetish)
A little more dirt on her clothes, and a proper background, & then look at the lighting to suit the setting. If you've saved the figure it's not to difficult to play around with things till your happy with it.any ideas on how i could improve this render? pls let me know
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more Dirt in the face and on clothes. The top is good (wich asset? i am looking for a bra like this!) but the pants do not really fit. it is like two styles in one... other lightwork and maybe you should give her a dagger for short distance defense against "sugardaddies"any ideas on how i could improve this render? pls let me know
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I like #2 for realism, but #3 is more of a real Polaroid quality.So what do you all think, what one looks more realistic?
Number 1
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Number 2
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Number 3
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Maybe more darker shadows needed.