-Beautiful job handling the necessary adjustments created by that off-the-shoulder approach. All of that is very fluid and realistic.
-I’m sure her right side gave you headaches also - nipple protrusion wanting to become a part of the wrist material, etc. You’ve figured out how to handle that nicely.
-The underarm-twist seems off in the second shot. Physics there ain’t quite right at a glance (those dials can be tricky, not always intuitive).
-With Expressions. I recommend you download any one of the many assets available in the Development section (I often default to:
Sweet n' Sassy Expressions), then make minor tweaks off of that. Establishing a base expression with a click really helps expedite the process, even if you end up with something completely different from where you THOUGHT you were gonna go initially. And, to my mind, any extra effort spent on a reasonably unique Expression is ALWAYS worth the time invested.
My best to the family.
PS Her body is a wonderland.