I made some changes, and I think she looks more authentic now. I toned her head a little smaller and shortened her neck, and made some minor body changes. I also added some tattoos to make her look a little more like a true punk girl ( thank you for that great idea

), and added few piercings, but unfortunately her nose stud looks more like a mole now though, since I couldn't get light to reflect nicely
Anyways, here's a more serious render of the punk girl in a night time city environment. Constructive feedback is always welcome
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