Played a bit of the demo. The concept is good but the games need some polish in many aspects:
Maybe im nitpicking on this one but i think you should use the right name for the moves and etc. Zanpakutou instead of Spirit Sword, and its Shakkahou(or Shakkahō) not Shokaho.
Why is everyone treating you badly like that? it looks out of character mainly for Inoue, she would never act like she did.
Many spelling mistakes, but as you said english is not your first language so thats to be expected.
The Combat system needs an overhaul in commands, you need to use the numbers from the keyboard to cast spells, need to aim with the Mouse but you cant walk on WASD so you basically need 3 hands to use everything comfortably.
As i said i like the concept and its a demo, so obviously many changes are going to happen(Hopefully), tried to give you my opinion on the game as i love Bleach and i think we really need a game like the one you want to make. Hope i didn't offend you in anyway and good luck on this project, i will be keeping an eye on this one.