I say while having art is nice and all its best to focus on the writing on the scenes more while using the standing pictures to show clothes and expressions of the participants until it gets enough content.
It would also probably be best to have a sub meter that unlocks more content as she becomes more sub instead of everything open all the time to give the feeling of her getting corrupted.
Thank you for the feedback! I agree; I'd like to focus on writing and content before deciding on the art. It's much easier and faster for me to pump out content and scenes when only writing is involved. The standing pictures with clothes and expressions are all made through a generator, and it's not too bad to set up but much easier than dealing with art. I tend to make them only for significant characters like the main character, ruby, and Death.
As for the Submeter, I do like the idea. I am still new to RPGmaker, though, and doing that requires scripting and such. However, I wanted my game to have the player choose to end up submissive or dominant, and I can still program it where you unlock things depending on the player's choices.
I just want to say that i absolutly love what you have done so far.My only complains are the way time passes(we dont really have any option to wait a specific amount of time) and the fact that you cannot repeat a scene when you talk to a character .
I dont think you really need images for this game to work, just a sprite of what the character look like is enough for now.I think you should focus on adding more scenes/content(btw Im really digging the sub path
, i really like your writing style)
Edit:How many scene are there in the game right now?Just to make sure i seen them all
Thank you for your feedback! Can you explain more about your problems with time? It may seem that you can't move time along, but the map I am currently working on time will start moving depending on the activities you do. Right now, it's barebones since I wanted to see if people are interested! So, it makes me happy you like my writing style. Thank you.
The beauty of not having to deal with Art is I can focus on more scenes and content. Those take time, and I think Art takes even more time, lol.
As for how many scenes, Hmm, there are two sub ones, Ruby and Katie/Slave2 and one dom one, slave1. Oh, and in the start, you see Death. You'll see Death more often as she is part of the story =). The first area's idea is to learn mechanics and let the player know that they have choices. I made Ruby have more submissive events because it's her estate, and you will have to submit. I didn't give it any harsh negatives to serving her, though, because it's just the start.
I am surprised you mentioned repeating scenes. Sadly, with Ruby, you can't. Maybe I can set up something that can allow repeating scenes with Katie, haha.
Anyways, thank you for the feedback means a lot.
this game is good , wish you luck
Thank you! Means a lot.
This feels like a game where I enjoy the story and outcome more...than the yuri femdom stuff but I also love those
I understand; I do hope my story will interest you =). Thank you for checking it out, though.