This game's writing is awful. Even if you adjust for translation, there's bare minimum writing in sex scenes. It's like a great coder plus a great artist plus no writer at all. So odd. Is it possible for us to disassemble the game, add proper writing for the sex scenes and re-assemble it? It would have become twice as good. Hell. So much effort wasted for no reason.
"Who can help me?"
Just finished the game and was thinking the exact same thing. The writing's actually not terrible - in fact, it has a great starting point for a writer to flesh it out. But yeah, it's very bare at the moment, so it's not only barely readable but also not exactly fap material (especially since it's also MTL). Personally, I'd take a crack at it for a quick rewrite, but I'm in the middle of 4 translation projects (one's done, so I'm just writing the Read Me for it and will upload tomorrow).
If y'all want to wait a while, I don't mind adding to and editing the text. Dunno how the Chinese feel about their work being edited, but since the Japanese devs haven't complained yet and since the Chinese are so loose about copyright themselves, I don't think they'd object.
Also, thank you for discussing the game. While wading through 2-3 pages of thread about literal complaining about complaining (about complaining) was a nice drama distraction, it's refreshing to return to the actual topic at hand.