HTML Abandoned Delicate Feelings [v0.1 Demo] [SinRise]

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Overview:
You're moving to the new city. Your life will change after you will make multiple choices. It depends on you what path you will choose.​

Thread Updated: 2020-01-05
Release Date: 2020-01-05
Developer: SinRise F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 0.1 Demo
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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Rageparadox said:
I love these Sissification games so I truly hope that this game lasts to completion great work and keep it coming.(y)(y):):)(y)(y)
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Thanks for the genre support. I already have 10 chapters of this erotic short story, which I wrote a few years ago in my native language. I hope, I will have the concentration to finish it in the English language with multiple paths and the right images accompaniment.
 
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Thanks for the genre support. I already have 10 chapters of this erotic short story, which I wrote a few years ago in my native language. I hope, I will have the concentration to finish it in the English language with multiple paths and the right images accompaniment.
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So far mostly it was just cute, but I liked it.:)
Talking about pictures the last one before The chapter1(demo) seems to be blocked or something.
 
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yehweh said:
So far mostly it was just cute, but I liked it.:)
Talking about pictures the last one before The chapter1(demo) seems to be blocked or something.
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If you talking about "Footage of Me trying to Pee". It's not image, it's iframe video from porno site. I think your provider or country blocked this site.

I the future, I will probably make two versions one with internal content, and the other with external content. Or maybe just with online hosting or something.

Anyway thanks for the tip.
 
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I like the concept, It could be very good in the future if you focuse a bit more on English. Definately enjoyed :)
 
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Its a trap! xD

It looks like a girl but is supposed to be a boy. So I m basically out already. Still I got some questions/suggestions:

The story-logic: is weird... so "Mom" tells us to wear something to keep us warm because its very cold outside - so she offers us a tiny t-shirt OR a bikini... thanks mom! Now I m ready for winter I guess xD. Uhm... could I not wear both of them so I at least survive 5 minutes or so? And dont you happen to have ANYTHING else in the closet?!?
Also, how does she happen to have such a tiny shirt? No way on earth it fits her, unless shes heavily anorexic.

Game Mechanics:
So wearing a T-shirt saying something sexual like "69% Angel" increases my love-stat? right...
while wearing a Bikni increases my SLAVE-stats ??? lol?!?
If so me and any girl I know were probably slaves by now :unsure: (and no we arent, sry)

Future aspect:
This uses a specific model as protagonist. Which almost always comes with high restrictions to pictures and therefor possible storytelling supported by them... could be a problem - unless the girl/boy in the pictures is the actual author and willing to do/shoot a lot more for this game o_O

Spelling and grammar:
Ingame language really needs to be improved. When reading this stuff I constantly have a heavy russian accent in my head.
Meanwhile its easy to get what its about, almost every sentence is still not correct.

Basically this looks promising but it also needs some considerable improvements to be successful.
As for me, unless theres a fem prot option, I m out ;P

Good luck and best wishes to the author!
 
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Walls of text: rather than doing a huge page of text, put up enough to fill a decent sized screen with a next button to continue on the text to the next screen. I like the way you are hiding images so that we can click on what we want to see, and I actually liked the integration into the game of outside porn. Do give some thought to pacing though as it seems a bit quick to get into things, a really good corruption game is a slow boil. Choice of text and background colour could be better contrasted to make reading easier
 
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Ok.. after playing i have a few notes.

1. Don't make on the same page protagonist naming and characters, who call their name. Without page update character will say default name.
2. MC looks cool as transgirl. And i understand that is tf game. But you shouldn't start with girly photos. At least not on the first page.
3. If you write long texts on page, maybe you should use dialog widgets? Because it's hard to read dialogs between sheets of text.
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