Ren'Py - Completed - Denos City [Final] [BackHole]

Another great game work in progress.

This time the game is spanish with english translate so, pls understand if the english translate is not the best, but im sure that is understandable anyway.

Pros things in the game:
-Good female characters
-Good plot and development of this
-Is an open world that as you advance you unlock points of interaction, and I like these kind of games because ure not attached to a linear plot.
-Good lust/confident system for advance with the women

Cons things in the game:
-Its a bit bugs in the game, for example in my first run the laptop doesnt appear and I must start again the game. Hope fix it in the future.
-The game is still WIP

Atm this are my thoughts, the game has too much potential and if the developer still continues with regular updates, wil be another GREAT game as some of this page has

I honestly don't understand how this game gets such good reviews. In my eyes it's more or less unplayable. The main reason for this is the English. Maybe most people who review it read it in Spanish or something, but the English is beyond atrocious. It's both very difficult to understand and even when you do understand it, everything sounds so ridiculous it's impossible to enjoy reading it. For example, right at the beginning of the game someone asks the MC if he's lived in the city long, and he answers, "No, I just moved here, I am still installing". It's obvious what he's trying to say but it's just so terrible. And this happens more or less every other line (at least in the first couple of days, I admit the game broke me and I haven't played past day 2).
There are other things in this game which are done poorly (like the overall graphics - the renders are about 4/10 in my opinion and the backgrounds and objects are easily a 1/10... Just start the game and look at the screwdriver laying on the ground, you'll know what I mean). But none of these little things matter when the actual text of this visual NOVEL is unreadable.

Maybe it's good in Spanish. Maybe it's good as fap material. I couldn't get past the terrible, terrible English.

I just tried it and I loved it, I already want more content.
It is true that there are some small bugs but it can be played perfectly.
I recommend it to everyone.
Thanks to the creator for this game and I hope it continues if

The game is quite familiar with the other game named with "city", though I appreciate that this game has a plot even if it is a more fast-forward type games. I think the UI (e.g. Map) can be improved but it could be better after it gains more popularity and resources. It gets all the fundamentals of what a good game needs.

Whereas the renders could be a bit better, the background story looks great.
One thing I really like about this game is the continuous free roam, it gives you more chance to make your own decisions. I'm really looking foward to the next update.

This is how You make a Game! Believable storyline Great characters A likable protagonist, No grinding And animations that are up there with the best! I Was amazed at How Small the download was, 200+MB's Looking forward to the next Update... (10/10)

An amazing game with a great story and a nice Main Character. In the other hand, I haven't seen many games with a great interface, I mean, it was easy for me to understand the game. In short words this game deserves more patreons, if you aren't one, you should've be one.

In short, I love this game. The renders are very good. The scenes are pretty hot, in my opinion. Only downside is that it's sometimes hard to find what you need to do to progress. At the same time it keeps you busy which is fun, also. But all in all I really like this game.

Nice renders, nice characters, nice writing!
The game still at it start, so I can see a lot of interesting potential for plots (some already in the way, llike the main plot) and different characters with their own interests to be meddle with.
At first, before playing, I thought it would be about a MC that comes back home after years away and incest, ntr, corruption, etc. But nope, its about MC's past related with a NPC family, which means a lot of different things can happen (MC follows his initial plan, or gets emotional involved and changes it, who knows).
I got an idea about the background of MC through the few references and I like it.
The different ambiences having the MC as their medium are really refreshing to.
Seems pretty good, promising, at least! Definitely Keeping an eye on it, so, please, keep the good work! Thanks.

Sorry for my english, not my native language.

V0.2 Beta

The game mechanics are similar to FILF for example and the girls are pretty, i just dont liked one of them (the redhead), and the MILF do look like a MILF and that is good.
I dont saw any grind in this game, you do have LUST and TRUST points but you earn them by the choices that you make, you dont have to repeat scenes over and over to raise stats.
The map have some locations to visit and tasks to acomplish during the gameplay...but its quite easy, no problem.
I dont saw any kind of bug so far.
The Story is OK so far, nothing superb but its not bad either...its good.
The dev seems to be listening people about problems, suggestions and thats is cool...i think that this game have potential, so i do recommend.

Another puzzle game, very annoying, and this game has some bug.

The renders look ok, story is average...this is a poor game!

Same dialogue with some grinding, best duo to have 2 stars.

This game is boring as hell!

2/5

My Rating of [v0.1] is:

Pros:
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Great Animation
+ Active Play
+ Beautiful Women
+ Nice Story

Cons:
- Minor writing errors

Conclusion:
Very promising game play with crime and sexy girls included in the game play...
The ladies are Hot as hell, and good sex scenes for the first release.

Worth the Download & hoping for more.

This is an interesting start.
There is not a whole lot of content yet, but what I've seen up until now, has some decent quality.

Renders and animations are not the best, but are still decent.
The milf actually looks like a milf in this game.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Keep up the good work.