- Dec 23, 2019
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I played this more than a year ago and there is VERY little new content, but this is not listed as abandoned, nor has it gone on some sort of hiatus for any reason, yet they are collecting their Patreon checks monthly?
The art as well looks incredibly dated, like it was made some 5 or 6 years ago and was slowly released to make it appear to be an ongoing project or something.
Another issue on the slate of critiques, what's with the dialog?
I can understand a few phrases lost in translation but there are many here, almost like there wasn't an editor at all, even though one can find several good ones right on this site, I can even refer the developer to them in fact.
On the dialog choices note: one thing comes to mind that is irritating, the MC calls his Landlady by her title EXCLUSIVELY, not ONCE has he ever used her name in any sort of context aside from introducing her to Vincent when he specifically asked what her name was.
In EVERY instance I picture the MC as an individual with a mongoloid syndrome, a child with DOWN SYNDROME talking while using her name in nearly every sentence.
BUT either they are milking the donations, giving multiple excuses as to why there is absolutely NO progress in over a year, or any other passable reason, whatever the case may be, there are MANY MANY other games and VN on here that deserve attention, recognition and of course support...ones that do produce regular results.
The art as well looks incredibly dated, like it was made some 5 or 6 years ago and was slowly released to make it appear to be an ongoing project or something.
Another issue on the slate of critiques, what's with the dialog?
I can understand a few phrases lost in translation but there are many here, almost like there wasn't an editor at all, even though one can find several good ones right on this site, I can even refer the developer to them in fact.
On the dialog choices note: one thing comes to mind that is irritating, the MC calls his Landlady by her title EXCLUSIVELY, not ONCE has he ever used her name in any sort of context aside from introducing her to Vincent when he specifically asked what her name was.
In EVERY instance I picture the MC as an individual with a mongoloid syndrome, a child with DOWN SYNDROME talking while using her name in nearly every sentence.
BUT either they are milking the donations, giving multiple excuses as to why there is absolutely NO progress in over a year, or any other passable reason, whatever the case may be, there are MANY MANY other games and VN on here that deserve attention, recognition and of course support...ones that do produce regular results.
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