Kellermann

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We already have an anti Stalker, the leader of the decayed, our former teacher.
A fine decayed character yes, but I was looking more for a current (still human) Stalker based in Zeta. I know our MC isn't the only active one. And what I mean by anti is Anti-MC not Anti-Stalker. Someone on the same team (for now) but may just have a personal grudge against MC and not necessarily Zeta. Who knows, maybe Omar turns allegiance after too much cucking and plots with 006. I'd like to see a gathering of active Stalkers at Queen's banquet or something like that so I can size up the competition.

I think Lord Abrax is better suited as a main villain than as a rival. But if Abrax is all we get then I can live with it. We just need to see more of him to really establish the character dynamics. It will happen in upcoming episodes.
 

Zerorox

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Oh, we'll see... I think a lot unexpected shit await for MC :)
And also I'm waiting for some compressed android version with sex scenes in... lower quality? :ROFLMAO:
It seems my phone is at it's limit in some heavy scenes...
 

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I searched the thread, the nordling quest line has 1/3 when I check the quest log, but I cant figure out how to trigger any more parts of it. Am I missing something or is just not in this update?
 

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I searched the thread, the nordling quest line has 1/3 when I check the quest log, but I cant figure out how to trigger any more parts of it. Am I missing something or is just not in this update?
If you are done with whats in the game it will tell you in () that more to come or something like that at the bottom of the quest info.
 

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A fine decayed character yes, but I was looking more for a current (still human) Stalker based in Zeta. I know our MC isn't the only active one. And what I mean by anti is Anti-MC not Anti-Stalker. Someone on the same team (for now) but may just have a personal grudge against MC and not necessarily Zeta. Who knows, maybe Omar turns allegiance after too much cucking and plots with 006. I'd like to see a gathering of active Stalkers at Queen's banquet or something like that so I can size up the competition.
From a pure story perspective I'd agree, but I find it difficult to see the porn game angle.

So far, most of the story (apart from Shani's Zone entry) have had sex scenes.

But the only thing I can think of in your proposal, besides 006 acting like a Zaton (fucking anything that moves), is that the player is going to cuck 006. But that kind of story we have already with Omar, which is hotter because of the incest angle. Given the tone of the game I don't think we need more cucking.

Other potential story lines (e.g. 006 trying to romance the Queen) quickly go into NTR territory, which I think most players don't want, meaning the player will do everything to prevent seeing the scene. Which is a bit counterproductive when it comes to development time.


I think Lord Abrax is better suited as a main villain than as a rival. But if Abrax is all we get then I can live with it. We just need to see more of him to really establish the character dynamics. It will happen in upcoming episodes.
Yes, we do need more scenes with the Decayed. Possibly even a route (or maybe better: an ending) where Zaton ends up joining the Decayed and replacing Lord Abrax.
 
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Walter Victor

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From a pure story perspective I'd agree, but I find it difficult to see the porn game angle.

So far, most of the story (apart from Shani's Zone entry) have had sex scenes.

But the only thing I can think of in your proposal, besides 006 acting like a Zaton (fucking anything that moves), is that the player is going to cuck 006. But that kind of story we have already with Omar, which is hotter because of the incest angle. Given the tone of the game I don't think we need more cucking.

Other potential story lines (e.g. 006 trying to romance the Queen) quickly go into NTR territory, which I think most players don't want, meaning the player will do everything to prevent seeing the scene. Which is a bit counterproductive when it comes to development time.
There is a simple solution to that: make the anti-MC stalker a girl.
 
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Nulldev

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Yeah the game need MOAR GURLS!!
The weapon seller woman, she already got the trust, she trains Shani. The merchant life is a facade only. She is spy for the Queen, checking the rumors in the marketplace, to know who needs a killing for treason.
She will try to seduce Shani to capture her before attacking our home. After a sparring session, nasty, sweaty, furious scissoring :devilish: , to exhaust her.
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Could Shani become the anti-MC stalker? Perhaps she does get jealous of her mother and sister? :unsure:
If she wants more home and fuck time, she can ask for it, no need for armed rebellion :D
She likes the adventures. I don't think she was forced to do it.
Did both of you not read the story about the last night she was with her dad?
To me it seems like she is in love with him.
I see lots of sex for them later in the game.
 

Yngling

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Did both of you not read the story about the last night she was with her dad?
To me it seems like she is in love with him.
I see lots of sex for them later in the game.
Of course.

But being in a sexual relationship with daddy is new to her and therefore she might get jealous when she comes back home. She is already jealous of Ain because she has been enjoying daddy dick already for years. Now Shani needs to find her new place in the household. Which will be very interesting to watch either way. I am really looking forward to our first foursome!

Anyway, it was just a thought to combine two storylines rather than creating yet another one.
 

Zerorox

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No no no!
Shani Will not go against daddy, she's crazy in love with him for long, the reason she saved her V-card...
Now Shani Will not be that jealous cause she got what she wanted. And not like she's overjealous type anyway.
So we can expect family friendly relationships and even fantasies 'bout another variants are totally 180° change in behavior :ROFLMAO:
 

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Could Shani become the anti-MC stalker? Perhaps she does get jealous of her mother and sister? :unsure:
Yes, that would be a great plot twist for a novel. Zaton has been training her to be a Stalker and to serve the City of Zeta and its Queen. Now Zaton is making business with mutants and marauders which are persecuted by Zeta's laws.
Just food for thoughs because a visual novel with very few people working on it can't be that complex.
Imagine Zaton taking the mutant side or teaming with marauders while Shani stays loyal to the Queen.
Another scenario could be Shani terminating Zaton for his business with decayed.
 

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Yes, that would be a great plot twist for a novel. Zaton has been training her to be a Stalker and to serve the City of Zeta and its Queen. Now Zaton is making business with mutants and marauders which are persecuted by Zeta's laws.
Just food for thoughs because a visual novel with very few people working on it can't be that complex.
Imagine Zaton taking the mutant side or teaming with marauders while Shani stays loyal to the Queen.
Another scenario could be Shani terminating Zaton for his business with decayed.
Yeah those are great scenarios.
I think this game is about storyline first and foremost, and what makes a great storyline?
Imo, its all about being mysterious and unpredictable. Dont let them see your next move. Make something your viewers cannot predict to keep the story interesting.
If they can already see how it all goes and ends then thats really a failure.
You gotta be smart about how you write it.
Im speaking on behalf of other games i played that had amazing stories
 

testertestington550

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If you are done with whats in the game it will tell you in () that more to come or something like that at the bottom of the quest info.
Okay, it was confusing to me, but now that makes sense. I thought that the 1/3 meant I still had something to do but it means I did 1 of the 3 things.
 

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Just curious, is the sharing path any good? Are there many choices to share your girls?
I think it's good, but there are not many options currently for that (I think maybe 4-5 situations). This game is not focused particularly on fetishes, but more on the story...which really makes this stand out more than most games, IMO. And this isn't the type of sharing where MC gets his rocks off by seeing his women with other guys. It's a cultural thing in the game's society as well as a power/assertion of control thing.
 
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