Ren'Py Desert Stalker [v0.19.4] [Zetan]

[Yngling]

There is a simple solution to that: make the anti-MC stalker a girl.

Could Shani become the anti-MC stalker? Perhaps she does get jealous of her mother and sister?

 

[Nulldev]

Could Shani become the anti-MC stalker? Perhaps she does get jealous of her mother and sister?

If she wants more home and fuck time, she can ask for it, no need for armed rebellion
She likes the adventures. I don't think she was forced to do it.

 

[a1fox3]

Could Shani become the anti-MC stalker? Perhaps she does get jealous of her mother and sister?

If she wants more home and fuck time, she can ask for it, no need for armed rebellion
She likes the adventures. I don't think she was forced to do it.

Did both of you not read the story about the last night she was with her dad?
To me it seems like she is in love with him.
I see lots of sex for them later in the game.

 

[Yngling]

Did both of you not read the story about the last night she was with her dad?
To me it seems like she is in love with him.
I see lots of sex for them later in the game.

Of course.

But being in a sexual relationship with daddy is new to her and therefore she might get jealous when she comes back home. She is already jealous of Ain because she has been enjoying daddy dick already for years. Now Shani needs to find her new place in the household. Which will be very interesting to watch either way. I am really looking forward to our first foursome!

Anyway, it was just a thought to combine two storylines rather than creating yet another one.

 

[yaxa666]

+1

 

[Zerorox]

No no no!
Shani Will not go against daddy, she's crazy in love with him for long, the reason she saved her V-card...
Now Shani Will not be that jealous cause she got what she wanted. And not like she's overjealous type anyway.
So we can expect family friendly relationships and even fantasies 'bout another variants are totally 180° change in behavior

 

[Ragnar]

Could Shani become the anti-MC stalker? Perhaps she does get jealous of her mother and sister?

Yes, that would be a great plot twist for a novel. Zaton has been training her to be a Stalker and to serve the City of Zeta and its Queen. Now Zaton is making business with mutants and marauders which are persecuted by Zeta's laws.
Just food for thoughs because a visual novel with very few people working on it can't be that complex.
Imagine Zaton taking the mutant side or teaming with marauders while Shani stays loyal to the Queen.
Another scenario could be Shani terminating Zaton for his business with decayed.

 

[Mfka5]

Yes, that would be a great plot twist for a novel. Zaton has been training her to be a Stalker and to serve the City of Zeta and its Queen. Now Zaton is making business with mutants and marauders which are persecuted by Zeta's laws.
Just food for thoughs because a visual novel with very few people working on it can't be that complex.
Imagine Zaton taking the mutant side or teaming with marauders while Shani stays loyal to the Queen.
Another scenario could be Shani terminating Zaton for his business with decayed.

Yeah those are great scenarios.
I think this game is about storyline first and foremost, and what makes a great storyline?
Imo, its all about being mysterious and unpredictable. Dont let them see your next move. Make something your viewers cannot predict to keep the story interesting.
If they can already see how it all goes and ends then thats really a failure.
You gotta be smart about how you write it.
Im speaking on behalf of other games i played that had amazing stories

 

[testertestington550]

If you are done with whats in the game it will tell you in () that more to come or something like that at the bottom of the quest info.

Okay, it was confusing to me, but now that makes sense. I thought that the 1/3 meant I still had something to do but it means I did 1 of the 3 things.

 

[JoSolo]

Just curious, is the sharing path any good? Are there many choices to share your girls?

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

Just curious, is the sharing path any good? Are there many choices to share your girls?

I think it's good, but there are not many options currently for that (I think maybe 4-5 situations). This game is not focused particularly on fetishes, but more on the story...which really makes this stand out more than most games, IMO. And this isn't the type of sharing where MC gets his rocks off by seeing his women with other guys. It's a cultural thing in the game's society as well as a power/assertion of control thing.

 

[Yngling]

Just curious, is the sharing path any good? Are there many choices to share your girls?

I don't think sharing is really a path in this game.

Sometimes the opportunity presents itself and then it's up to the player to decide if he wants to share or not.

But like GetOutOfMyLab says, it's a different kind of sharing than in nearly all other games.

 

[PHIL101-YYouPPHard]

Just curious, is the sharing path any good? Are there many choices to share your girls?

Other people have answered, but yeah, just reinforcing what they already said; it's not a submissive sharing that degrades the MC or anything, it's a dominant kind of sharing that actually focuses more on degrading the woman, if you really want to put it in those terms. As another guy said, it's a cultural thing in the game's Zetan society, so I don't think it's intended to be degrading to anyone, but that would depend on your perspective. Though, there is maybe... hm... at least one scene where it's 100% meant to be degrading to the woman in question, but they're not apart of the game's Zetan society; also a really short scene.

And personally, I consider the amount of sharing content to be plenty, but it's also not my #1 top kink or anything, so don't know how someone like that would see it. There's 1 really big one involving 3 girls, 2 of which you share; there's a smaller one involving 2 girls where you pick which one you share; and then there's a really small one involving one extremely short scene where you share one girl, the one I mentioned above. And imo, in an unfinished ongoing subplot, it's looking like there's gonna be another potentially large sharing sequence that might involve between 1-4 girls.

Btw, I'm talking strictly scenes where you share with another guy if that wasn't clear. I mean, there are lesbian and threesome scenes involving only MC as the guy which I don't consider sharing, but someone else might.

 

[fhiaofwiao]

Nobody is talking about her but god damn if Zion isnt one of the hottest girls in the game, plus her hot headed and abrasive personality is chef's kiss. I really hope there will be some scenes with her when MC gets even closer to the raiders.

 

[Just Jericho]

Nobody is talking about her but god damn if Zion isnt one of the hottest girls in the game, plus her hot headed and abrasive personality is chef's kiss. I really hope there will be some scenes with her when MC gets even closer to the raiders.

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I mean, If your taste in foreplay is a little bit of flaying and losing a limb or two, then have at her

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[goldenface]

Hope to see more of the queen

 

[JJJ84]

Yes, that would be a great plot twist for a novel. Zaton has been training her to be a Stalker and to serve the City of Zeta and its Queen. Now Zaton is making business with mutants and marauders which are persecuted by Zeta's laws.
Just food for thoughs because a visual novel with very few people working on it can't be that complex.
Imagine Zaton taking the mutant side or teaming with marauders while Shani stays loyal to the Queen.
Another scenario could be Shani terminating Zaton for his business with decayed.

Huh, interesting scenario.

Though it does leave me wondering whether such scenario will work all that well tbh.
There would need to be a huge reason as to why Shani would stay loyal to the Queen and being in conflict with Zaton.

Something like the Queen holding Zahra & Ain hostage might just be enough reason for me to force Shani to follow the Queen (into fighting her dad. Anything less, I'd say probably isn't giving Shani enough credit), but even that has its problems (such as if the Queen somehow has Zahra and Ain hostage, why would she even need Shani at all? She can just control Zaton instead).
So yeah, interesting idea, but I just get the feeling it will be hard to pull off in terms of narrative.


In terms of anti-Stalker, something which came to my mind; it might be interesting if the Queen somehow got word that Zaton's master is alive and tasked Zaton to eliminate him.

 

[goulet1995]

Huh, interesting scenario.

Though it does leave me wondering whether such scenario will work all that well tbh.
There would need to be a huge reason as to why Shani would stay loyal to the Queen and being in conflict with Zaton.

Something like the Queen holding Zahra & Ain hostage might just be enough reason for me to force Shani to follow the Queen (into fighting her dad. Anything less, I'd say probably isn't giving Shani enough credit), but even that has its problems (such as if the Queen somehow has Zahra and Ain hostage, why would she even need Shani at all? She can just control Zaton instead).
So yeah, interesting idea, but I just get the feeling it will be hard to pull off in terms of narrative.


In terms of anti-Stalker, something which came to my mind; it might be interesting if the Queen somehow got word that Zaton's master is alive and tasked Zaton to eliminate him.

would be too out of character for her to go against him imo

 

[JJJ84]

would be too out of character for her to go against him imo

Yeah, it's just a really difficult concept to execute (without making contradictions), unless she was somehow forced to it against her will.
But as I said in my original post, I'd say even that will prove to be challenging to explain.

 

[0tt0von]

Huh, interesting scenario.

Though it does leave me wondering whether such scenario will work all that well tbh.
There would need to be a huge reason as to why Shani would stay loyal to the Queen and being in conflict with Zaton.

Something like the Queen holding Zahra & Ain hostage might just be enough reason for me to force Shani to follow the Queen (into fighting her dad. Anything less, I'd say probably isn't giving Shani enough credit), but even that has its problems (such as if the Queen somehow has Zahra and Ain hostage, why would she even need Shani at all? She can just control Zaton instead).
So yeah, interesting idea, but I just get the feeling it will be hard to pull off in terms of narrative.


In terms of anti-Stalker, something which came to my mind; it might be interesting if the Queen somehow got word that Zaton's master is alive and tasked Zaton to eliminate him.

I can certainly see Zahra as a valuable hostage but kidnapping that useless waste of space Ain would be doing Zaton a favor.