Well, this, as all other games by this dev, is pretty weak. Why? Because, first of all, it lacks images. I don't want to read a bunch of text with things happening while there's one damn pic.
Second: no suspense, nothing. Why should I feel jealous/NTR'ed or anything like that if I don't give a damn about mom character and bully or whoever there is in his game?
Let me give a simple example of DoD if you choose slutty dress. During that time it's second or third chapter of the game and I do kinda feel something towards Mom's character. And when I see that stuff ingame it does make me jealous.
Here...well, dude that I don't care about or associate myself with(c'mon, most of us asaociate ourselves with MCs) sees how other dude which I don't care about fucks a woman which I don't care about.
Want some useless advice: Instead of making 10 fast-run NTR novels make one big with actual plot and character development.