The early part of my writing is pretty bad. The age difference between Lily and MC was supposed to be two years. I must have made a mistake there. I will have to do some cleaning and rewriting.Bruh wtf is going on in this game , it just gave me uneasiness feeling from the atart and it kept getting worse , i feel like the game is hurried up , its missing a lot of details that are needed , a lot of normal human reactions and emotions (stopped mid game to write this because i feel like i should)
One of the points especially with the incest patch (download the android version with wt mod )
So the mc is 22 years old , his step sister Lilith is the same age as him
Jessica got infertile after birthing lilith , lets just says she needs a month of rest then she finds out about her infertility
The mc mom , looked for him then remarried
But she already have 21 years old daughter
So she either looked for him for one year or not at all , but nah its not even one year , mc is born his father get killed ( the person she loved and left the church for or sth like it)
So if i do the maths
22 - 21 = 1 year difference
1 year is 12 months
12 - 9 months of pregnancy = 3 months
3 months of free time?
So The mom got over the death of her husband and got to like and marry another guy and in the same time she looked for her kid everywhere?
HOW?
IT doesn't make sense , its only will make sense that she already eas cheating on james from before with mr ross thing and was pregnant but even this wont make any sense bruh my mind is so fucked up
And i am just pointing out one logical thing that made me hate the mom right away , not considering everything else that just say fuck this whole family
I really wish that the dev rewrite the start of the game and make it more detailed , this game has potential and it is getting burned to ashes , just please focus on making it a good game not some hurried up trashy one , sorry if i sound rude , but i want the best for the game
I will continue to play i just wish the game make amends or something
Edit:-
Well i continued playing the game and thing got a little better , the game is good if we ignore the starting story of it and some little details , thanks for your work and good luck
Just finished the game , episode one p1 and p2 actually was very good , and i liked how the player had an actual choice in the game content we dont see that alot as one example i appreciate how didyou consider the players not wanting to see lesbian content between LI's [mina and lily , i myself hate giving one of my LI'S just like that idc if its a guy or girl] many developers just dont give a fuck , thanks for that , and gotta hand it to you it really improved a lot the writing and all , the details got better and i can tell you got the hang of it , im proud to see this happen , its not common for thing to actually get better and devs to make this fabulous changes , glad to hear that the prologue (i think its considered prologue) will have a rewriting , thanks for making time to do so , and never neglect details (like side things/girls world story , etc) and hurry up the game from pressure remember that Good Dishes should take all the time needed for it to be perfectThe early part of my writing is pretty bad. The age difference between Lily and MC was supposed to be two years. I must have made a mistake there. I will have to do some cleaning and rewriting.
The girls name was LolaI forgot the girl name with blue hair when are we gonna see her again because mc was bout to beat the guys ass that hit her KKpotato
Ok I thought it was lily or something so I didn’t put it downThe girls name was Lola
How long will the update be or how long does it take to update? Or how long will it take to get to Lola's update? I am not sure which one you are referring to. Let's answer all three.how long will the update be just curious
KKpotato
I initially planned to add one or two dick girls, but I have abandoned the idea after taking the opinion of my supporters. There won't be dick girls.i remember at some point game hinted about possible dickgirls - was it just unrelated bit for points or is there a chance for some in the future?
chill your horse there buddyCan we fuck the muscle girl now????
Still need about a weekUpdate??
Maria? here it is.I'm back after 1 week grinding my life and i have one question
MARIA?
KKpotato โพสต์: 6960255 สมาชิก: 4364917 said:
i swear to boobsMaria? here it is.
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