KKpotato, i have to say well done mate, I love this VN from the start to the end of chap 3 part 1, you did a really good job. I even have nothing to say about your writting skills as not being english native, everything is decently understandable and even fun to read, though I often complain about games being to bright, this one might be sometimes a bit to dark, but it does fit well so far. I'm really looking forward to future updates and I seriously dig this story. About the NTR part, not sure I have seen any of that, geuss i have different views of NTR, I don't mind it, but in this VN i really don't feel or sense any NTR, and guys having relations with cute girls, doesn't count to me as NTR if they have sex with their cute girls, it feel to me realistic and natural. Well I really enjoyed it so far.