Okay, the story is okayish, the girls are beautiful and fine personality-wise (the best part of the game IMO), but the MC... OMG he literally can't stop manifesting cringe and beta-male vibes. He makes a lot of awkward jokes that clearly make the girls a bit uncomfortable, he's uptight at times but goes full macho when it's towards the girls. Also the kidnapping plot... I think the dev wants to set up future netori plot for Chole/MC by introducing the bully Billy, and I can accept the stupidity of the plot if only MC can act like a man and protest vocally (if not a punch in their faces), especially when Kayla is clearly traumatized, but MC literally goes like this when he TRIES to comfort Kayla: "But hey, at least we can laugh about it now, right?", and goes on to flirt with other girls...If I were Kayla I would dump his sorry ass in a heartbeat and refuse to talk to him afterwards. I don't know why but currently MC reeks of awkwardness and cluelessness, and lacks basic empathy, and this severely affects my immersion in the story. I still think the game is decent, but I highly suggest that the dev should rewrite MC's dialogue.