I don't mind the kinetic version of this, however I feel the MC is a little too impulsive with Kate. I mean after Nicole had been so lonely for so long and Bella literally just got home I honestly think grand romantic gesture aside, it was too soon to go on a weekend getaway with Kate. I liked her initially, and while I do not agree she is a gold digger, I feel like Erica would be a much better match as a potential girlfriend (assuming the slow burn with Nicole/Bella/Cara) while I'd feel better keeping Kate as a FWB for now, until the MC is able to spend more time casually hanging out with her.
I also agree the chalet retreat with the romantic beginning only for it to end abruptly along with that possible side drama with visit from the Sherriff was way to jarring of an ending. It obviously feels incomplete and I assume the Dev just made a mistake and didn't know how/where to go with the rest of their trip and just wanted to have them hurry back home. Speaking of things that happened off screen, while Diana was brought up numerous times early on as a reason for all the temptation with Kate, it would have been nice to get see her a bit, even if it was for the MC and her to have their 'amicable' breakup. Clearly the MC has no deep feelings for her but it would have been nice to see what her take was on their relationship since they had dated for several months and if she also felt like it was just a casual fling that would never go anywhere in the future.
Lastly, if I was the MC and that invested in taking more control of the family business interests and Mr. Sky's whereabouts in particular, that would mean a hell of a lot more to me than once again thinking with my dick in spite of how great the sex was and start to take Lewis's counsel more seriously and really look into what's goin over getting more pussy. I get that Nicole had been unintentionally blue-balling him, but that didn't mean he needed to take off for 3 day sex vacation at the most inopportune time.