151person

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Played this game fully. The designs are pretty, even on male characters! Props to the developer for that. It's common for many +18 anime VNs to lack creative design as they're made to be a go-to for most copy-and-paste Koikatsu generic fantasy designs, but this in particular struck a chord with character design.

Alas, it's in Unity. Not in RenPy. That's also interesting.

And the dialogue is well written.
 
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151person

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Also, small fixes I'd like to point out (since the dev is also in this thread):


Syntactic mistake here, the correct sentence would be "I doubt it, he knows he can't do better than us" 1764722712876.png
This is a nitpick, but "blue-haired woman with horns" instead of "with the horns" makes it flow structurally smoother.
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Other mistakes are also syntactic, but they're too small to put in this message altogether.

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. . . Didn't have to call us out like that.. —also, not seeing your friend* (not factual use of the word friend) pop up after a supposed week of Dimensioneering only for you to learn he's been elected as the head of clubs department must be quite the conundrum. LMAO.
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Dussop

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Also, small fixes I'd like to point out (since the dev is also in this thread):


Syntactic mistake here, the correct sentence would be "I doubt it, he knows he can't do better than us" View attachment 5492275
This is a nitpick, but "blue-haired woman with horns" instead of "with the horns" makes it flow structurally smoother.
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Other mistakes are also syntactic, but they're too small to put in this message altogether.

P.D:
. . . Didn't have to call us out like that.. —also, not seeing your friend* (not factual use of the word friend) pop up after a supposed week of Dimensioneering only for you to learn he's been elected as the head of clubs department must be quite the conundrum. LMAO.
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I am fairly sure all of this has already been fixed, there was a guy that went through the whole main quest for me after the fact and found a bunch of these errors, but thank you for pointing them out I appreciate it
 

Blargfest

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I haven't even played the game yet but the fact that it uses actual art, very well made art at that, and NOT AI generated bullshit instantly gets it a big ol thumbs up from me! I've just seen one too many games with AI art on here so it's a breath of fresh air, keep up the great work!
 
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151person

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I haven't even played the game yet but the fact that it uses actual art, very well made art at that, and NOT AI generated bullshit instantly gets it a big ol thumbs up from me! I've just seen one too many games with AI art on here so it's a breath of fresh air, keep up the great work!
I really don't hate AI — I think people are allowed to make whatever slop they want and people are also allowed to consume slop because who are we to dictate what they can and cannot consume. Alas, AI has been a major tool as assistants —but morally, where I would draw the line is when critical thinking is completely replaced by AI instead of enhanced by it.

Sure, I'm not against games with AI generated content.. but I sure wouldn't make my games with AI nor would I play those games. They generally lack soul, and pardon me, but at least try to go through some post-production/get a good model so it's not.. blatantly AI generated images. It just looks.. bad, man, it looks horrible. As an artist myself, it looks uncanny, the shading is not human at all, and knowing it wasn't made by a human being throws me off.

But yes, I do agree with you, mate. Though this is a personal bias.
 

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I'm... only getting more worried with every update... and I'm scared I won't like the direction things are going.

also... there's so fucking many characters that are just so fucking bitchy, rude and annoying... almost everyone is just fucking vile towards the MC
like... chill out?
 
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Dussop

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I'm... only getting more worried with every update... and I'm scared I won't like the direction things are going.

also... there's so fucking many characters that are just so fucking bitchy, rude and annoying... almost everyone is just fucking vile towards the MC
like... chill out?
What's the direction you're worried about the story going? I wouldn't feel great about writing character arcs if every single female character started out by being nice and flirty with MC as if they'll die if they don't fuck him. I'd rather write it in a way so that they have a reason to like him. I understand that Shiver specifically is a jarring character, but outside of her I don't really see many other characters as being 'bitchy, rude and annoying' The existing main cast is pretty universally nice to MC now, I mean outside of occassionally ragging on him for being a pervert.
 

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What's the direction you're worried about the story going? I wouldn't feel great about writing character arcs if every single female character started out by being nice and flirty with MC as if they'll die if they don't fuck him. I'd rather write it in a way so that they have a reason to like him. I understand that Shiver specifically is a jarring character, but outside of her I don't really see many other characters as being 'bitchy, rude and annoying' The existing main cast is pretty universally nice to MC now, I mean outside of occassionally ragging on him for being a pervert.
Also not sure where this is coming from. The majority of the girls (and all the boys) start out liking MC, or straight up wanting to jump his bones (no dimensional horny shenanigans involved) with several notable examples.

I think you've done a great job balancing the cast and making them all feel like different archetypes with little to no overlap.
 
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lolzmandude

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idk, maybe I was exaggerating a bit when I wrote that but like even just in the harem many of them feel like they're very passive aggressive towards the MC? Maybe I'm just misreading it??
and the main worry for me is just... anything like really bad happening to the characters or them turning against each-other or the MC in any way. There's also now suddenly way more players on the field so I feel like it could end up becoming confusing or generally become a volatile scenario.
 

lindonii

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Also not sure where this is coming from. The majority of the girls (and all the boys) start out liking MC, or straight up wanting to jump his bones (no dimensional horny shenanigans involved) with several notable examples.
I wouldn't say this is really true, the characters generally dislike the mc at first, but quickly turn around.
 
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