Hm, did you guys make the game first in Portuguese and did the translation to English after that? some parts of the VN like the menu, some names and etc still in Portuguese, the majority of ppl who'll play this VN aren't Brazilian so I really recommend fixing those small things bc a lot of ppl are way too picky with things like that, also handling things like that it's too "amateurish"
I had to read this VN in Portuguese to enjoy it because no offense, but the English in this one is awful, you guys need to find someone to handle the writing, it's like reading a book made for kids.
Models are looking good, somewhat I didn't see the same-looking MC that every VN made in Honey Select 2 has, so brownie points for that! The girls are looking somewhat good too, especially the blonde girl that was the reason why I downloaded the VN, shame that didn't appear in this release though.
Overall is pretty "generic", the English definitely didn't help though.