The art was good, it was well written (other than the text going off the side of the screen, a post above says you've gotta go d/l some font to fix it - it'd be better to just not have any other pre-requisites to playing). The content seems promising, very tame so far outside of the opening flashforward, but corruption is just starting...
...but rpgm is, as ever, a big negative. Loads of sitting there watching transitions and no instant text - both of which just make me want to start skipping through things, which is a a shame as it's well written as mentioned... I've also got no idea what the last 3 scenes in the memory crystal are supposed to be... I figured I was at the end of the content after that drow goes to the bar, as I've killed some days with nothing happening and you can't shoot any more content (nor did a date advance anything)... all of which is entirely pointless and timewasting anyway in a linear game.
It will get better after that
