I restarted with the new version (v0.19) and avoided dominant choices to not block progress on the sub path.
Here is some more (subjective) feedback :
- Add a list of Actors (eg Ella Hollywood, Natalie Mars, Charlotte Sartre, Sophie Dee, Remy Lacroix, Ash Hollywood) so that players can more easily find more of them on pornhub or similar platforms.
- Intro :
If you click the phone outside the event where mc is texting with Remy, you cannot go back since the close button is not there.
- blue color for dominant choice :
hard to see on black background, maybe switch to another less dark color
- sidebar :
most important informations (for me) are : Day/Time, phone, status, Tips, Stats, Save Game
These infos should be grouped together so that the player does not have to scroll the whole sidebar too often
- 2 clicks for empty pages ? :
a lot of pages have only default content but need 2 clicks to close them.
Examples : Campus : Talk with sister/gf
- Slow Texting :
Better add option to see texting on the phone without time delay. When playing through such scenes repeatedly, eg because the texting is part of a bigger scene and you used the back button, the delay can be annoying.
- Time slots :
The available time slots currently are :
- morning
- (day = major events like school, therapie or weekend)
- evening
- night
Some actions like eating breakfast in the kitchen currently skip the day event. You better should separate actions which happen in a time slot and actions which advance time. Since the "day" events are special, you could consider to group them separately from the locations so that the players don't have to go through too many locations. Currently you have to either go to mc's room or outside (depending on event) to have a quick link to such events.
Characters can be found in multiple locations in the same time slot, eg at Night Dad is watching TV in living room, taking a shower and sleeping in bedroom at the same time.
- Best Friend?
Natalie Mars as fixed "best friend" from start is a strange choice. If the mc already knows Natalie for a long time, then themes like gay, TS, Trap, crossdressing, Sissy should be part of mc's life which would change the whole setting of the game. Maybe better add Natalie later as (optional) friend?
- GF?
MC starts with a gf but there is no real content with her for the first weeks ... and content would be difficult due to the small number of time slots, eg work in the Evening or visit gf?
- "Change" clothes after work?
After work mc better should "change" clothes instead of undress.
- SPH
Penis size seems to vary depending on event, eg the scene for unlocking Cunilingus porn uses smallcockmasturbating.gif.
It would be better if the player could choose a cock size at start (and so enable/disable sph). This would allow to roleplay small/medium/big cock and would allow other characters to react to the cock size, eg sister, gf, ...
If the pills are supposed to shrink mc's cock, then the cock size should also be monitored.
- Porn on mc's PC :
Once the game progresses there should be more categories to unlock
- Automated events :
Unlocking Cunilingus porn at the PC leads to first anonymous email event (Sissy) which automatically triggers mom event, even if it is Night time and mom is already sleeping.
Maybe better trigger email and mom event next morning?
- Feminization 1 : Panties
The mc has to wear panties to school to reach feminization level 1 which unlocks to wear panties outside. That's kind of a circular reasoning.
Note : If mc is still dressed in school uniform, the event can be ignored
- Reasoning for Feminization?
In general it's difficult to find a reasoning why a "normal" guy should start to wear panties and do other feminization stuff in a porn game ... best solution I saw so far in other games is to bait mc/player with a sexual reward, eg sister posing naked or giving a bj or gf promising sex, etc. Blackmail usually is a poor reasoning and should be avoided. The same applies for stupidly going through default task lists like : panties, bra, waxing, ... (or doing stupid random Teacher Tasks as in Perverted Education and other games.) Those tasks work best when a sexy girl takes the mc and shows him all the feminization tricks and rewards every step with praise and the prospect of sex. (For heterosexual players a female friend, for gay players probably better a TS friend.) Most steps only make sense if the mc wants to model as female or impersonate a female person in feminine clothing for (sexual) roleplay (eg to please the lesbian fetish of a female partner or heterosexual fetish of a gay partner) or to work in a "female" job to earn MORE money than in a comparable male job (eg waitress vs. waiter). (Earning more money however only makes sense if the game has sexual content locked behind an ingame paywall like buying expensive stuff for gf or going on an expensive date with her to unlock more sex scenes ...)
- Delayed game progress
After the blackmail event with the sister, it takes several days until the panties event at the mall is unlocked. Usually games allow the player to do such quests like going to a store and buy panties immediately ...
- Therapy
The therapist appointment on Tuesday morning should probably best be linked from a central place like mc's room, otherwise there is the chance that players overlook the event and send mc directly to class as usual. Currently mc has to go to "outside".
- Emails
The first 3 anonymous emails are coming too fast, all 3 in the early game. It would be better to time them with the game content and then just have all of these permanent in the inbox instead of sending some emails over and over again. I got 5 emails in total, some repeatedly appearing almost every week.
- Gay content
After a certain milestone the Dad Shower scene is played over and over again almost every time mc goes upstairs, even with homosexuality zero. Better make the scene optional for non-gay playthroughs.
At some point the game starts to throw lots of kinetic gay events at the mc with no option to skip even with homosexuality 0, eg the mc is raped at home by dad and there are gay events at the sex shop, even if the mc does not wear female clothes nor makeup ... Better separate the heterosexual maledom/femdom paths (MF, FF) and the bisexual/gay maledom/femdom paths (MM). The game should not be binary with 2 paths : Dominant = heterosexual (MF content), Submissive = gay (MM content)
- optional TS content?
The content with TS Natalie Mars is optional but I have the impression that by deactivating it the player may miss relevant content, eg for sub path the sex shop chastity event seems to be skipped and maybe some progress is blocked.
- Kinetic Novel?
Overall the game has a lot of events but they play like smaller fragments of just 2 separate kinetic novels while development of (everyday life) relations with other characters in the game seems to be completely missing. Once the player clicks on a scene, in most cases the whole scene is kinetic without player choice, so the player just reads a kinetic novel without agency, in some cases including statements of the mc that he likes stuff the player may actually dislike.
In a sandbox game you would expect more options to develop (sexual) relationships with other characters independently and unlock more and more repeatable lewd scenes with these characters, eg do some quests to help the sister and she may get more corrupted, allow mc to see her in underwear, naked, take a shower with her, get a bj, have anal sex, watch porn together, meet her female friends and have sex with them, ...
(Imho a good example for a game implementing this type of step-by-step progress is Cure my Addiction (ch.1) :
https://f95zone.to/threads/cure-my-addiction-ch-5-ep-1-c-thegary.18207/ )
