Ren'Py Dissonance [v4.1] [Glephy]

[Filipis]

anyway, final words, in the fifth video call, when i unpacked the images i found renders that werent in the game. so i checked the script and yes, there were gaps.
just one to mention is the

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just the top view was present. i checked several times. that specific render was so hot, cause thats the highest point right? a shame it didnt come up when i played it the text the first time. just wanted to bring it up. also are there other stuff, that is unused renders in the rpa package that you just didnt use intentionally and then just let them sit in there? or if anything that doesnt show up in the game is stuff you might have missed? so yeah thats all.

thanks again. cant wait for more existential grief in the coming updates. Have a Good day, brother.

Holy - there is an actual render that shows Flora kissing her breast???
Glephy , this needs fixing ASAP!

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

first ever marissa intimacy scene, where flora holds marissa's breast and kisses it. the render of the kiss from the side angle wasnt in the game.

Holy - there is an actual render that shows Flora kissing her breast???
Glephy , this needs fixing ASAP!

I also notice this, but didn't give it much attention. I thought this was a case we're the dev in the last minute thought it was too much or something like that and decided to exclude it from showing in the game but preserving the render.

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[BOBtheboober1995]

I also notice this, but didn't give it much attention. I thought this was a case we're the dev in the last minute thought it was too much or something like that and decided to exclude it from showing in the game but preserving the render.

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Just post it here guys.. I mean ya all just teasing the community at this point LMAO

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

Just post it here guys.. I mean ya all just teasing the community at this point LMAO

It's nothing that spectacular IMO (it's a hot render though)

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[Hereggedphoenix]

It's nothing that spectacular IMO (it's a hot render though)

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What do you mean nothing spectacular, that's like the highest point of the tease, innit?

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

What do you mean nothing spectacular, that's like the highest point of the tease, innit?

Yeah, but what I was trying to say it's that the render itself wasn't displaying something that didn't appear in the game, just a better angle (and this is why it's strange to me, if all the renders showing the kiss were missing, it would make more sense to me, but why not include only that render? Probably I'm thinking too much and it's just a mistake from dev).

 

[Hereggedphoenix]

Yeah, but what I was trying to say it's that the render itself wasn't displaying something that didn't appear in the game, just a better angle (and this is why it's strange to me, if all the renders showing the kiss were missing, it would make more sense to me, but why not include only that render? Probably I'm thinking too much and it's just a mistake from dev).

The thing is, there is a lot more missing and I don't know why. That's why I asked him the question about if he has missed it or just left it there intentionally. He is probably busy ig.

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

The thing is, there is a lot more missing and I don't know why. That's why I asked him the question about if he has missed it or just left it there intentionally. He is probably busy ig.

Well, I just notice this missing render, I didn'tlook for more missing content, but yeah that's quite curious. Maybe he already answered this in his patreon? idk

 

[BOBtheboober1995]

Why is Marissa acting so BPD? Her boyfriend is working hard to build a better future for them, and she can't wait a few months? Why would she want to whore out instead of just waiting? It doesn't make any sense. Why are women like this?

 

[Filipis]

Why is Marissa acting so BPD? Her boyfriend is working hard to build a better future for them, and she can't wait a few months? Why would she want to whore out instead of just waiting? It doesn't make any sense. Why are women like this?

The long-distance relationship made her realize she has no interests or hobbies outside of hanging out with her boyfriend (and school).

It wasn’t until meeting Flora that she was shown a “whole ‘nother world” she was missing out on - but most importantly, building something of her own, a person outside of just Jeremy’s Girlfriend.

Of course, being an NTR story, Flora & Justin are using her “innocence” to corrupt her sexually along the way.

 

[Filipis]

It's nothing that spectacular IMO (it's a hot render though)

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Nothing spectacular??

I was wondering why the dev didn’t make that whole scene a lot more explicit (considering the dialogue), though, in hindsight, it could’ve been intentional.

Regardless, this render needs to be included retroactively - this is the first crack in the armor.

 

[nasahilaindirim]

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Bro. In Turkiye, That meme picture has a line.. "My fella.. Are you from sons of bitches?" That line is the line of this meme pic )

 

[Rozhok]

Why is Marissa acting so BPD? Her boyfriend is working hard to build a better future for them, and she can't wait a few months? Why would she want to whore out instead of just waiting? It doesn't make any sense. Why are women like this?

This made me giggle a little bit

Filipis posted a good explanation 2 posts below yours. Besides the fact that the VN would be quite uninteresting if nothing happened

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

Why is Marissa acting so BPD? Her boyfriend is working hard to build a better future for them, and she can't wait a few months? Why would she want to whore out instead of just waiting? It doesn't make any sense. Why are women like this?

I don't think she want to whore out (yet ), aside from the good summary Filipis wrote, I would add the classic yet powerful sexual frustration/pent up. Why no one is worried about little Melissa and her essential needs?

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Nothing spectacular??

I was wondering why the dev didn’t make that whole scene a lot more explicit (considering the dialogue), though, in hindsight, it could’ve been intentional.

Regardless, this render needs to be included retroactively - this is the first crack in the armor.

Ok, so I played the update, I thought "Damn, did Marissa just let Flora kiss her tit?" and then I found the missing render. This is why I thought it wasn't spectacular; I was refering to the render itself, not the action (I assumed the mayority of people already played the update and know about the kiss).

I apologize if my choice of words wasn't the best, blame my B2 english level not me

And yes, that render should be included. Hopefully there's no armor left for Marissa to use in the near future...

 

[Filipis]

I don't think she want to whore out (yet ), aside from the good summary Filipis wrote, I would add the classic yet powerful sexual frustration/pent up. Why no one is worried about little Melissa and her essential needs?

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Ok, so I played the update, I thought "Damn, did Marissa just let Flora kiss her tit?" and then I found the missing render. This is why I thought it wasn't spectacular; I was refering to the render itself, not the action (I assumed the mayority of people already played the update and know about the kiss).

I apologize if my choice of words wasn't the best, blame my B2 english level not me

And yes, that render should be included. Hopefully there's no armor left for Marissa to use in the near future...

AFAIK, at the end of V4, Marissa basically says “fuck it” and decides to throw caution to the wind and “live in the moment”, so she clearly wants to see if her fling with Flora will work out. She is in the experimenting phase, and has rationalized that - as long as she doesn’t fall in love with these people - she isn’t cheating on Jeremy.

 

[PanchoPistolas33]

AFAIK, at the end of V4, Marissa basically says “fuck it” and decides to throw caution to the wind and “live in the moment”, so she clearly wants to see if her fling with Flora will work out. She is in the experimenting phase, and has rationalized that - as long as she doesn’t fall in love with these people - she isn’t cheating on Jeremy.

And I agree with you, Marissa it's in that stage at the moment.

 

[LewdAsterisk]

i like jeremy, he's a pretty decent guy that cares about people, but fuuuck me does his constant unsolicited advice and hypocrisy make it really fun to root against him (love the writing for all the characters really)

the inevitable crash out he will have when he begins to realize that the people in his life don't really need him as badly as he assumes they do is going to be fascinating. bro can't even handle being out of the loop for one day without spiraling aint no way he will handle ACTUAL rejection well, let alone the girls having priorities he doesn't know about.

also i lowkey hope that trev and justin/flora naturally end up meeting each other and learn about the 3 girls connection to each other at some point later in the story, because the possibilties that provides will be hot and you just know the forum posts would be funny af

 

[OffWorlder]

i like jeremy, he's a pretty decent guy that cares about people, but fuuuck me does his constant unsolicited advice and hypocrisy make it really fun to root against him (love the writing for all the characters really)

the inevitable crash out he will have when he begins to realize that the people in his life don't really need him as badly as he assumes they do is going to be fascinating. bro can't even handle being out of the loop for one day without spiraling aint no way he will handle ACTUAL rejection well, let alone the girls having priorities he doesn't know about.

also i lowkey hope that trev and justin/flora naturally end up meeting each other and learn about the 3 girls connection to each other at some point later in the story, because the possibilties that provides will be hot and you just know the forum posts would be funny af

I hope that Trev, Justin, and Flora meet each other too, however, I really hope that they won't start sharing the girls with each other if they do meet up tho. They could help each other with their respective girls, but not share the girls.

Personally, not a big fan of NTR games/stories where the wife/gf has an affair with multiple guys, it takes it away from being a "cheating wife/gf" and goes more into "cockwhore wife/gf" territory, which I think would be a very different game. In "cockwhore wife/gf" one it's all about just getting dick and being a slut, whereas with the "cheating wife/gf" option, and just the one guy, you have more opportunity and likelihood for an emotional connection, leading into the NTR part of it where the wife/gf can actually be "stolen" from the MC.

 

[Filipis]

I hope that Trev, Justin, and Flora meet each other too, however, I really hope that they won't start sharing the girls with each other if they do meet up tho. They could help each other with their respective girls, but not share the girls.

Personally, not a big fan of NTR games/stories where the wife/gf has an affair with multiple guys, it takes it away from being a "cheating wife/gf" and goes more into "cockwhore wife/gf" territory, which I think would be a very different game. In "cockwhore wife/gf" one it's all about just getting dick and being a slut, whereas with the "cheating wife/gf" option, and just the one guy, you have more opportunity and likelihood for an emotional connection, leading into the NTR part of it where the wife/gf can actually be "stolen" from the MC.

Yup. I hope Marissa avoids the “cock-hungry” slutification, and wrestles with her love for Jeremy while enjoying the pleasures of life without his watchful eye… for a while.

The most important part is that she gets drowned in the lust between Flora and Justin, and begins to slowly prioritize that side of her life over “being” with Jeremy.

 

[OdinValgallovih]

The most important part is that she gets drowned in the lust between Flora and Justin